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Reviews for Forgiven

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 11, 2016
    Re: Chapter 30

    Ohh, this is gonna be good.^_^
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  • From ANON - Moxie Mayhem on January 01, 2016
    I'm so glad to come back from vacation to some new chapters! I've definitely never seen the kind side of Lucious but I like this version of him. I'm very anxious
    To see what happens with Hermiones parents and
    I'm glad Ron pops up to be asshole every now and then. I dont mind the Luna and Theodore pair just not
    Used to it.
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  • From FieryPhoenix on December 31, 2015
    Lovely character development of Lucius. Well done and believably created.

    Looking forward to the next installment!
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  • From madmapper82 on December 31, 2015
    I absolutely love this story. A truly remorseful Malfoys is a wonderful thing.
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  • From Trelweny on December 25, 2015
    Oh! Poor Ginny! Poor HARRY! I hope they catch who brought that bludger to the practice. And string them up for manslaughter. I don't care how little the child, once conceived it's murder.

    Kudos to Draco for trying to be the better man about the situation. At least for MOST of their visit. He DID capitulate in the end... but honestly I can see why even if I don't condone it. "Ron started it" is so very juvenile even if it IS the truth.

    Booyaka! Hermione's parents! *giggles* Poor Narcissa's mind going straight to the gutter with Draco's wording. I first thought baby, and I would have thought with her being grandbaby-happy that would be her first thought but... I guess not. *snickers* Why is Draco so often right? Still... probably not the smartest for him to tell his parents the truth that it wasn't his fault his parents' thoughts went there first.

    Thanks so much for writing.
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  • From madmapper82 on December 24, 2015
    Interesting mystery with the bludger, one wonders if something nefarious is going on.
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  • From Trelweny on December 23, 2015
    I love how you write Lucius; even when he's a jerk he's so smooth about it, and family is ALWAYS first.
    Eventually Hermione will fully realize she's family now. I think she took a step that direction.

    I think Narcissa is more fun to write (and read!) when she's a grandmother... ;)

    Thanks so much for writing.
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  • From Trelweny on December 18, 2015
    haha! I'm glad you liked the long review and will keep that in mind. Unfortunately on that note this likely won't be, as I am very tired. *pouts*

    Little minor oopsie: "Father
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  • From Trelweny on December 14, 2015
    Blast it all, Ginny! Things were going so Well and you had to go and juvenile it all to the toilet.

    Thank goodness for Luna...
    Booyaka! More Luna!

    And yes, despite the oddness of the dance/conversation between Hermione and Lucius I DO think it was going well. Civil is well between those two at that moment.

    What? Only Brides can have fits when someone messes up their Wedding Day? I see no fault in Draco flipping out about Ginny's poor form. Although he Did go a bit overboard and perhaps a Little more juvenile than he should... but I've seen brides respond far worse over FAR less so if I'm going to be gender-fair at all he certainly had the right.

    I really enjoyed Hermione laying down the facts about Voldemort even if I think she was a little rose-colored-glasses as far as Dumbledore's part in Harry's Martyrdom. All the emotions from the Malfoys there... *fans self* wonderful. Add in seeing Lucius humanized -perfect. There's hope for a full family togetherness yet.

    Loved how it was Lucius throwing out how to heal Hermione's parents. I love how you're showing him so intelligent. Not to mention his own brand of caring.

    Thanks so much for writing!
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  • From ANON - Moxie Mayhem on December 13, 2015
    I'm very glad you decided to make it longer.
    This story is in my opinion very good.
    If it were a book I wouldn't be able to put it down.
    I'm also very excited to find out what will happen
    With Hermione's parents.

    And as always I'm looking forward to the next chapter
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  • From Trelweny on November 28, 2015
    wow. Tears and laughter. Perfect wedding. And as usual for Luna... she nails it simply with understated grace. Go Luna.

    Thanks so much for writing.
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  • From ANON - Moxie Mayhem on November 20, 2015
    These chapters can't come any sooner?
    I'm seriously addicted to this story and
    I really can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - ashley on November 13, 2015
    OMG... Love the story, obviously. However was very disappointed with the fact I stayed up till four in the morning to finish the story and discovered that the end had not been written yet. On the other hand was a great read and I hope you finish it soon.
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  • From Trelweny on November 13, 2015
    For being so tired Draco really did a wonderful job of countering Andromeda's words/Hermione's stubborn fears.

    Ouch. Seems no matter What the full story is with Andromeda, it doesn't look like there will be reconciliation with her sister any time soon. Shame, really.

    I like how Narcissa seems to be honestly warming to Hermione.

    Thanks so much for writing.
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  • From Trelweny on November 08, 2015
    What? No warning to consummate the marriage asap? That's what I was expecting. In there somewhere at least.

    Thanks for writing.
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