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By : Tassanaburrfoot
  • From ANON - pickles87 on November 05, 2015
    thank you for the 2 new chapters
    they were enjoyable and much revealing
    i'm glad she is able to talk to Andi
    i wonder what kind of magical stipulations hermione can make without them knowing
    your cissa at first doesn't seem scary but her slyness is creeping in
    just hope it doesn't burn the couple in the end
    besides the warnings she has received one should do in real life
    waiting for more
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  • From ANON - pickles87 on November 01, 2015
    yea a new chapter
    it was great
    i was a little petrified when she met luc
    does cissa realize he is going to be released sooner rather than later with the minister involved
    is there a certain tradition that they have to have to be considered wedded that they don't learn of until the time of the wedding?
    going to the ministry jpo wont consider they bound
    does luc realize his wife is part of the matchmaking of the two young adults?
    waiting for more

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  • From ANON - pickles87 on October 31, 2015
    excellent chapter
    glad weasley got his comeuppance
    but i do have one request
    please dont let luc escape before the consumate their marriage
    at the moment i see him acting like a caged animal when cissa accidently on purpose tells him
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 30, 2015
    Great so far, I can see there being some difficulty later on if Hermione finds out the 'plan' and Draco has to convince her he's really in love with her.

    Minor editing note: Chapter 13,
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  • From ANON - sheedy on October 25, 2015
    Awesome chapter!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kain on October 20, 2015
    Okay first off, VERY good story, but why is Hermione so dead set on getting Lucius out of prison since he is/was

    1)A willing death who participated in 2 wars and lied his way out of facing justice after the first one.

    2)Set off a chain of events that almost got Ginny Weasley killed.

    3)Didn't even finish serving his first sentence from when he was apprehended after the battle at the ministry, where might I add he was willing to kill her and her friends before the order showed up.

    4)Quite obviously still a violent bigot if her seeing him again at the prison during the visit is anything to go
    by.

    Like the Ministry really wouldn't have to make up any false charges against him, guy's got a laundry list of bad deeds that condemn him.

    I mean she is a smart girl, the brightest witch of her age yet it feels like she is letting her newfound feelings for Draco cloud her judgment to him and his families worse traits.
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  • From Trelweny on October 12, 2015
    Well... THAT was certainly interesting. I'm not quite certain I know what to think about the visit.

    But booyaka! Draco and Hermione are now officially an item! *laughs* To think she's been wearing green to get his attention while HE'S been trying to woo her and he didn't consider it might be for HIM... too funny!

    Thanks so much for writing.
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  • From cpetnm on October 12, 2015
    Lucius is so creepy! Why would H still want yo get him out?!
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  • From Trelweny on October 11, 2015
    omGOSH! Love that cake!

    *giggles* Hm... Is Hermione already partway to loving Draco, organizing a party like that?

    Thanks so much for writing.
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  • From ANON - Moxie Mayhem on October 11, 2015
    I'm so excited!!!! Plz keep updating!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Moxie Mayhem on October 10, 2015
    Plz update soon!!!
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  • From Trelweny on October 06, 2015
    *giggles* Ah the joys of Malfoys learning about muggle things.

    Very cute.

    Thanks for writing.
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  • From cpetnm on October 04, 2015
    I liked Draco more in this chapter, maybe because he has to deal with Hermione's dislike or MacGonagall's distaste of him. Good chapter!
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  • From Trelweny on September 12, 2015
    Well I think Draco made a great first step by being civil with his house elf. House Elf "rights" in my opinion is a very grey area.

    Thanks so much for writing.
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  • From ANON - starr on July 29, 2015
    ok can se that they will still fight but they can make if they want to !!!!! harry always there !!!! Thanks for the update !!!!
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