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Reviews for Starfall

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - moodysavage on December 17, 2014
    I really liked how you had Harry describe his relatives. It didn't go extreme on the harsh side and you didn't add a bunch that wasn't in the books to make it seem worse. Harry was very matter of fact and to the point without getting into any insults or judgments about his relatives and I think that perfectly fits what Harry would be like in this situation. I think you have such a great understanding of how Harry would realistically react in situations. Awesomely done.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on December 15, 2014
    It's late and I don't have anything to say about this chapter except I'm still annoyed that Harry is so stuck on blood children. Probably for the most part because I have two adopted sons and one biological son. I love them all and couldn't stand losing any. I am following this story mostly because I love Draco/Harry and am crazy about adorable Scorpius. Teddy also though he seems a little mean sometimes...probably because he is a bit older and been out in the world a bit already.
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  • From ANON - staar on December 15, 2014
    Scorpius is so cute , just like his dad...both so happy that Harry is coming over !!!!!! ???? to bad that Harry can't get preg's so he can have a kid ....Thanks for the update !!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on December 08, 2014
    Hooray fornharry for actually sticking to his guns and starting his business! It will go far to help him deal with his loss of family. And kudos for realizing that he too needs help with his insecurities due to his inability to have his own children. Andromeda is being a little harsh withndrsco. First she's all for reconciling and then she wants Draco to stay out of Harry's life. She can't have Draco and Scorpius in hers and Teddy's lives and not expect overlap with Harry. I guess she's still hurting over Harry's misunderstanding about "family" time.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - Jester on December 06, 2014
    Aww I had wished Draco would know how to get rid of the portrait!

    How about after the second family meal ;)?

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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on December 02, 2014
    I'm still in morning about Harry's inability to have children. Can he blood adopt Scorpius if Draco and Harry get together?
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  • From ANON - staar on December 01, 2014
    fell for Draco a bit , his kid is so spoiled but that's his fault !! Well at lease Harry left his job, hope he starts now what he wants to do .....thanks for the update
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  • From ANON - Jester on November 26, 2014
    First family meal!
    They should just move in together ;)
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on November 26, 2014
    Progress! "Uncle Harry" seems natural to both Scorpius and Draco now. Greedy little guy...must be the Malfoy genes...he's after the Grimmald property. Good that Harry is thinking of leaving it to both of them...not forgeting his godson now that it seems he has the younger boy in his life probably permanently. Blaise sure puts some bad ways to handle muggles in Scorpius'
    mind. Looks like he really likes his Uncle Blaise...zoo, muggle baiting, nothing can hurt him while he's with his Uncle.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on November 21, 2014
    about #25...

    My Goodness! The Malfoy Double Whammy! :-)

    If Draco EVER gets wind of that, he would use it as ammunition to
    get what he wants.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on November 19, 2014
    Another good chapter with Scopius being the most adorable child ever. Looks like maybe Draco is at least a little smitten himself.
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  • From ANON - staar on November 18, 2014
    still can't believe that Ron didn't go nuts on Harry for changes jobs.....Sorp is cute cute he want Harry in his life one way or the other .....Draco and Harry really have a lot to go, for them to get along...thanks for the update !!!!
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  • From ANON - Jester on November 18, 2014
    This was so adorable.... both Scorpius
    and Harry looking at the Malfoys.
    I was screaming Draco POV while reading, because I was
    so curious to know what Draco is thinking.
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  • From ANON - Jester on November 16, 2014
    Nice! Well I see I might have no idea about children myself. I feel
    as lost as Draco what Scorpius wants.. Glad that Hatty is there to help
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  • From ANON - butterpie on November 11, 2014
    Life never stops moving forward, does it ? Harry finally has his new purpose ready to launch full sail ahead and now Scorpius is acting up again. The kid is probably doing what all children do to their parents and is testing his fathers' limits, patience and love. My mom often said, " when you have children of your own is when you will understand what we went through raising you and your brothers and sisters", there were nine of us all told- lol! Just one night alone sitting up with a sick child gives you an idea that parenthood is never easy, and in my mind it is the hardest job in the world. That being said all my nieces, nephews, and even some cousins came to me often for advice, or even just someone to listen to their problems. I often listen, but have managed to steer them back to their parents who were told by me to give their children the gift of their time, which is worth more than money or anything else that could be bought. Children grow so fast and one day you'll realize just how much you missed out on because you were too busy to just be there for them. Hopefully Harry can bridge the gap between Draco and Scorpius. He is needed there desperately. Draco needs him to stop over analyzing the situation with his son and just let him be a child first and build a level of love and trust before his expectations get out of hand. Scorpius needs to feel secure before his tantrums become a hard to break habit. As I see it Harry is the best person for the job here as both respect him and will listen to him. So go Harry!
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