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Reviews for Harry Potter: Monster Girl Quest

By : Almister
  • From ANON - oh look... a guest on June 16, 2014
    Really enjoying this! I don't usually like het stories, but the plot makes me want to keep reading. Please keep it up!
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  • From oraldeviant on June 16, 2014
    Hah, amusing story, very original and very hot. Hope you'll keep updating it.
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  • From ANON - C.C. on June 16, 2014
    This story has a lot of potential. I love Gameworld Fanfictions, but they easily are railroaded.

    Also, I've read a Naruto story similar to this...but it just became ridiculous really fast. This one, however, seems to avoid that trap. As in, the fox girl had some story build up, Ginny already has a two parter, Harry is a bit cautious, and as the moderator/help function just explained, it isn't just consequence-free one-of sex. THat was something the Naruto-themed story didn't get. It just had Naruto fuck each mildly atractive girl and acumulate a ridiculous amount of abilities...which he almost never used...so what was the point?

    In this story, Harry is setting himself up for the most efficient EXP gain possible. Now let's just hope the enemy levels are locked and not scaled, so as to be around the player's level (or at least become higher if Harry levels up). After all, he's aranging for himself to socially gain exp, not to really bduke it out.

    I cannot praise this story enough. The lemos are very well written, and from what I see you actually think at least a chapter or two ahead. After all, while the fox-girl might be obvious so as to put the fox in a chapter early, you even kept the continuity of Ginny enjoying anal play in. Just that one mention of her requesting a finger up her but in chapter two didn't really matter on itself, but it made the anal sex in chapter three actually seem correct rather than a pubescent boy's fantasy world where each girl enjoys such acts.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 15, 2014
    Remember to use an excel spreadsheet for the skills. Or even just pen and paper- either way, you need to keep track of them. Trying to juggle it all in your head is a good way to burn out, and his is going interestingly so far- good stories in this vein are hard to come by. Please don't burn out and abandon this.
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  • From ANON - Hermione Pegger on June 15, 2014
    Wow, this is such a creative and unique idea for a story! Loving it so far, looking forward to more chapters!
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  • From ravenwing on June 15, 2014
    This a fun read hope there more to come soon.
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  • From ANON - hugplx on June 15, 2014
    The story isn't hot yet, but it could be in the future - they're twelve and it's creepy as fuck that you started so young. I'm just skipping sex scenes until it's less creepy.

    That aside, the biggest failing of stories like this is how women only seem to want to have sex with the protagonist - like Harry is the only one with a cock and the only one allowed to sleep around. It makes things less interesting, and the women in the world less respectable.
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  • From DobbyDobbs on June 14, 2014
    Nice story so far.

    Get me some Harry/Molly in there if you can lol.

    Even if you don't, keep writing.

    ^_^
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  • From ANON - tentailes on June 14, 2014
    This story is as wonderful as it is original. Please, I need more to giggle at. If you ever need help or ideas though, there is a story for Naruto called the lemon games. It is similar to this but yours has a better structure!
    Fair the well
    Tentailes.
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  • From ANON - bill560682 on June 13, 2014
    now i think this world would likely have a magical zoo of some sort even thou we never hear of it in cannon. harry could likely without any problem at all use his fame to get permission to stay the night at the zoo to 'STUDY' the animals. an if having sex in a public place such as a zoo counts as a kink harry could end up stacking up thousands of bonus points since the zoo would likely close at 7 p.m. and not open till 9 a.m. thereby giving him 14 hours to have sex with every creature he could find. an if he picks up stamina potions while at the hospital getting his checkup to find out how much and how often he needs to take his nutrition potion he will be set. an if he spends his first weekend back at hogwarts in the forbidden forest having sex he could get thousands of bonus points for danger from that. if he has sex with one of those giant spiders he could pick up spell resistance as a bonus an if he has sex with a hogwarts house elf he could pick up house elf magic as the bonus so being able to do all spells wandlessly and without need of formal spell training just intent desire and being able to picture the result in your mind. an of course he would pick up spell resistance from hagrid's dragon and the snake in the chamber of secrets since you can never have to much spell resistance. an even if this is say starting third year which i think it is not but having sex with a dead animal would count as a big kink. an if this does turn out to be second year have harry rip off nearly headless nick's head totally while he is frozen in the hospital wing.an if harry has sex with a unicorn he could get something like purity of spirit which helps kick out voldimorts horclux in harry's scar which will get his bonus points for fighting evil. having sex with a goblin would get him the bonus of being better with facts and figures or he could go for goblin magic as his bonus which is just like house elf magic wandless and intent based. an if fawks is a girl he could get rebirth as his bonus from her. an he can pick up being able to speak to any bird as a bonus by having sex with his owl or the bonus of being able to find anyone anytime as a bonus. an if grangers cat is a female kneazel he can get being able to sence who is good or evil from her. if he had sex with a mermaid he could pick the bonus of being able to breath both air and water. sex with a centure would get him more sure footedness.
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  • From ANON - Oryx on June 13, 2014
    Big fan of the story so far! Always wanted more writers to try their hands at game stories like this one. Can't wait to see what you'll come up with next time.
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  • From ANON - Auryn on June 13, 2014
    Interesting... You have my attention.

    Proceed.
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  • From Kolar on June 13, 2014
    Jesus christ, pick a point of view and stick with it.
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  • From ANON - Thedude on June 13, 2014
    Clap..Clap..Clap

    AMAZING! KEEP IT UP
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  • From ANON - Auror21 on June 13, 2014
    Well, this is definitely an original plot idea. I really like it. I've been reading HP fanfics for a good 10 years and don't remember reading anything like this before. I hope you continue. Very good start!
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