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By : Tommy-Lane

From ANON - guest on November 03, 2014
Absolutely loathe cliffhangers, they're a copout.
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From ANON - delia cerrano on October 30, 2014
Confusing but good. I want Draco free of that horrible woman and back with Harry where he belong please. What is all that smoke? Is he drugged? Silly question! Whewre's Harry did he follow him I hope?
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From AidaLily on October 30, 2014
I read this chapter and just had to review right away. Don't worry. You will get your Strategy fix again hopefully by Tuesday. The plan is Monday, but I am giving myself some leeway. lol.

Now... why did you have to end the chapter with that cliffhanger? I think you just wanted to be mean to me. *sniffles* I mean really. First, I think it is wonderful that Draco gave Harry that ring now that something else is going on. I am also thinking something else in my lovely theories. I mean what if... there is another player in all of this. I just didn't think of it before. She could have set everything up to get "her" Harry. As if. I'd rather see Harry with Pansy, but it could be possible. I mean Madam Safiya could actually be Ginny or Molly Weasley who were upset with Harry for not choosing her/her daughter. All the Weasley's have red hair, but I don't quite remember if Molly had red hair or just close to it.

Until I figure out who that is, Madam Safiya shall hence be known as Madam Safiya Bellatrix Carrow-Weasley or Madam S. B. C-W.

As for what Draco was doing, I am surprised that Harry didn't follow him. I mean I know he is settled down and dear lord a Harry that thinks first is wonderful, but if that was my lover, I'd be tracking him to make sure I could help protect him. I knew that something was bad especially when Harry's blood was taken. I mean who takes a person's blood if they are not using it for some nefarious purpose. I hope you aren't planning to kill one of them off.
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From AidaLily on October 24, 2014
I'm so so sorry I haven't reviewed sooner. I planned to update and review sooner, but things got in the way. *offers Harry and Draco cuteness on a silver platter*

Ch. 17 - I really hope that Harry told that bitch... err... Ginny off at some point. I hope there is a memory that basically has Harry telling her she is a fame-whore and how much he wants to be with Draco. Ugh. Hermione should have let Draco hex the stupid... *insert explicatives here* It is nice that Harry came back to make it all up to Draco though. So cute. I loved the reassurances before the match. Very nice and sweet with them. But seriously... does Harry need constantly laid lol.

Ch. 18 - I hope there isn't too bad of something going to happen since they defied Madam Safiya Bellatrix Carrow. I loved the hot little sex scene between them. Oh god.. Harry is such a hot submissive. Don't believe me... ask Ron... he creates whole strategies around that fact. lol. I am happy Draco won the match with the new stipulations. I was afraid for a moment that he hadn't.

Ch. 19 - Is some of that darkness still in Draco or did they destroy it? I wasn't sure, but I will just re-read it when I am less tired. Oh gosh... they are so happy together. I really hope that Madam S.B.C. won't give them too many problems. He keeps thinking 'its time' and so I know you are getting closer to the end and I can't help but to be very curious. I am happy him and Blaise were just friends, but poor Blaise. He needs someone to take care of him and focus on him considering all those mental issues. I am surprised he took the ring with the Malfoy crest on it. I am wondering why he decided to show the ring now and if it has something to do with what is about to happen.

Can't wait for the next update! I am curious as to how this is going to go and end. I hope you don't kill one of them off.
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From ANON - delia cerrano on October 16, 2014
I thought he won and now he had paid his debt? What did I miss? I hope Harry sees through all this better than I seem to be and saves Draco or keeps him or gets him away from whatever/whoever. Maybe I'm just confused because I'm not used to Draco being the tough guy.
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From ANON - sebbie on October 11, 2014
Ooooh so you're having the diadem be in the tree of Albania instead of the Room of Requirement? Also, why can't Harry just hex Madame Safiya and be done with her?? He's a wizard, after all!
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From AidaLily on October 06, 2014
I am so worried about as you put it "all the rest of them". I mean they were in the psych ward together and so I felt a bit relieved that Harry was only with Draco and then you said "all the rest of them". What else did Blaise and Harry do or talk about or what? I really really want to know.

In the meantime, I do love how Draco stayed there with Harry and the whole magical ritual thing. I think it is great that they are slowly but surely rebuilding their relationship up to the point it is at now. I hope they continue to grow together again and defeat any enemies in their path. Admittedly, the way that Harry trailed off... makes me think they were either lovers, he turned down Blaise's love, and either way Blaise killed himself or something. It would be interesting if Blaise had something against Draco for Harry turning him down or something, but for this one I am not too sure of what happened with Blaise. I know what I think happened with Blaise, but then I am not sure thanks to the way Harry seemed to avoid the subject almost.

Granted him and Draco are reconciling, but I think he should have said something if there was more with him and Blaise. It would suck for Draco to be ready to leave and move on with life only to feel betrayed by Harry being with Blaise.

I am still very suspicious of Madam Safiya aka a Carrow or Bellatrix. lol. I can't wait to see how this all ends. :)
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From ANON - nightCat on October 05, 2014
Loooove it! I'm so hooked on your story and can't wait for more!!
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From ANON - serilla on September 28, 2014
Loved this chapter. Harry and Draco flirty banter in the flash back was brilliant. Present day and the sex - oh so hot. Both boys deserve to be happy after what they have been through. Can't wait till next chapter because with Harry and Draco nothing is ever simple. :)
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From AidaLily on September 25, 2014
Hey... Hey... It totally is not my fault that you got Blaise/Ron stuck in your head. You just finally realize it is meant to be. lol.

I thought the sex scene was amazing. Fantastic work on it. Infatuation is still good. I really want the next chapter to find out Harry and Blaise's connection. I want to know why they were living together and such. I find it amusing that Ron was confused and Hermione was suspicious of the relationship between the two. Of course, your refusal to tell me anything more about the Carrow makes me think that the living Carrow found out what had happened to the dead one. They hated Harry and decided to get revenge.

First, they forced Harry through some well known connections at St. Mungos to keep Harry away from Draco. It worked because Draco left, but Harry chased.
Second, they decided that they would need some help. The other captured and used imperious on a muggle before making it look like Bellatrix Lestrange.
Third, prison break. They managed to fool the guards and then get Bellatrix out of Azkaban replacing her body with the captured and controlled muggle that has a slow acting poison running through his veins.
Fourth, The muggle dies in Azkaban and voila "Bellatrix" is dead. However, the living Carrow needed to get Bellatrix healthy and controllable. They managed and now Bella is doing better and away from England.
Fifth, Best way to get revenge on Harry... harm and control Draco. Keep Draco moving until finally he settled and then take up the position of tormentor.
Sixth, See Harry with Draco and threaten Draco. Why not kill two birds with one stone?

And now I shall eagerly await the update to see what more shall happen. I hope Harry and Draco don't push each other away over whatever it was with Blaise.
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From ANON - sebbie on September 18, 2014
FKLADSJL;KSFAD;LK;LKaksfjkfjd ;-; so many feels
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Just say i love you!!!!!!!! *slaps harry and draco*
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From ANON - serilla on September 18, 2014
Wow! That was intense. Soooooo...........two broken boys united again after so much but get the feeling things aren't going to be that easy for them. Can't wait for more. :)
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From AidaLily on September 18, 2014
Yay! They kissed. They needed to kiss again. I love that Draco seems to be breaking a bit though it is sad that he left under the pretenses that Harry didn't want him anymore. So Harry was secretly in love with Draco or something, then? Very interesting.

You know... you only mentioned one Carrow and I believe there were two of them. Now the Madam Safiya thing is making me wonder if she is Bella or the Carrow or something, but made it so Draco can't fully sense their magic. Still believe it is Bella though. :) I want to know more how Harry kept tracking Draco through all those places.

On top of that, Draco freaked out in the first chapter when he sensed Harry's magic. Did he freak out in other places and leave or perhaps was Harry able to watch him from afar? Is that what Blaise was helping Harry with or did Blaise and Harry sleep together? I am very much hoping it was the former. lol. I just can't see Blaise with Harry. >.>
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From ANON - delia cerrano on September 11, 2014
Bella really is dead right? I hope so! So they both have some sort of PTSD? I'm looking forward to the next chapter hoping that it really will start to unravel everything. Glad that Harry & Draco seem to be forming a relationship in spite of Draco trying to send him away. I REALLY don't want them broken up even just for a little while. Wish Sofiya didn't have Harry's blood. She may not be a whitch but she is reallly evil. It can't be good.
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From ANON - serilla on September 11, 2014
Oh yeah.....love the flashback - getting a glimpse of Harry and Draco before everything went south for Draco. So Harry and Blaise where room mates but getting the feeling that there was more maybe a lot more to it than that - interesting. Can't wait for more soon. :)
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