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Reviews for The Art of Shadow Boxing

By : Tommy-Lane
  • From ANON - Anon on October 05, 2015
    Taunt is to tease or provoke someone. Taut is stretched or pulled tight. This the second time you've used the wrong word in this particular case. There are many mistakes where you use the wrong word. I think this is the second story you wrote. I sincerely hope you are doing better now. You really should fix the mistakes in this one.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 03, 2015
    I don't know if you read your chapters after you've typed them, but you have a lot of mistakes where you used the wrong word. For example, leer instead of lure and feel instead of fell. It's really annoying. I like the story. It's not too angsty as you seemed concerned about. How boring it would be if every story was just happy fluff. I'm not done reading this story yet, but I am very caught up in it. Please continue writing.
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  • From Severus1snape on July 05, 2015
    STILL LOVING THIS!!!!!!
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  • From Madam_Weasley on March 22, 2015
    I've come very late to the party, but I wanted to tell you that I LOVE this story. I was so glad it was complete by the time I read it. I absolutely love this Draco and everything about it.
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  • From Severus1snape on January 25, 2015
    This story is so brilliant!
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  • From Severus1snape on January 23, 2015
    just read first ch, AWSOME does not cover it!
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  • From ANON - Sephla on December 11, 2014
    Just want to say I've been following this story and I am indeed sad to see it over. It was a great story and I've not read another like it for sure. Perfect all around and am looking forward to more of your stories......hopefully!.....(hint, hint)...lol! :-)
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  • From ANON - Qtness.Quill on December 11, 2014
    Awesome job! Loved it!
    Yeah.... I suck at being a consistent reviewer but I happily devoured every update.
    I really hope you keep writing--
    you have a very descriptive style and go deep into psychology/feelings/character motivations
    that I really like.
    Look forward to seeing more from you!
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  • From AidaLily on December 10, 2014
    I swear my muse needs to be kicked more often. The newest chapter was just about done, but I felt it was too short and needed to add something in there and then couldn't think of anything to add. I have been reading and I love this story. It is sad to see it is almost over. I can't wait to read your next one.

    Ch. 23 - I loved the flashback with Luna and Neville helping out Draco. It was nice to see that and I laughed at Neville being oh-so-happy to kill Nagini. I mean he seemed to be ready to start dancing to kill that snake. I kind of wanted to dance and laugh along with him. Draco's outburst in this moment is really beautiful because it shows just how much Harry means to him completely and how lost he is when Harry is gone. A sweet kind of vulnerability from Draco that I love in this story. I KNEW IT! I KNEW Bellatrix was still alive and still just as insane as ever. I love Harry's passion in mentioning that Draco was not a Horcrux and making Draco listen to what he had to say. I think that was another defining moment between them to be able to say those things and to have that moment even with everything that was going on.

    Ch. 24 - Obviously Bella is quite insane at this point. I do like how she doesn't seem to be herself and yet insanity is already what they know of her. By that I mean that she seems to have lost it beyond her usual insane self. I like how Draco chose to fight the darkness within him, and at the same time almost seemed like he might of succumbed to it. The way Draco went back and forth between panic and confidence was beautiful. I like that he managed to deal with it and break free. Those two are so wonderfully good together. It was nice to see how supportive they were of each other during the fight until Draco went after Madam Safiya. I think it was a very nice moment of how Draco got into Safiya's mind and explained everything from his perspective. It was nicely done and explained how she could fall so far and want to end his life. Why she hated him so much and why she failed to complete her plan.

    Ch. 25 - The conversation with Caleb was very calming almost as if nothing had happened or Draco was partially repressing it. I do like that they decided to leave that place together and it was very touching to see how Caleb had given Draco that small kiss at the end. For a moment, I thought Harry would be upset, but then again it was natural for him to understand it. Oh my gosh. That meeting again with Blaise and how Blaise had fallen for Harry (still think Ron is better for Blaise :P). I love how Blaise seemed accepting, but at the same time letting Draco know to never let that chance go. I do love the part where Draco tells Harry that he loves him and all the teasing up to that. It was a beautiful very heartfelt chapter.

    I would love a cute fluffy/smutty epilogue. Maybe a couple years later? :) Can't wait for the epilogue!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on November 26, 2014
    Whew is right!! Intense with a lot of woo woo in it. I'm glad Harry & Draco knew what was going on and how to correct it all. I certainly got all tangled up in what was "real" or what was imagined.
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  • From ANON - Anya on November 24, 2014
    Holy crap, can't wait for more! :)
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  • From ANON - nightCat on November 21, 2014
    Still loving the story!!

    Just wanted to point out a correction for you since (I think I remember reading this) English is not your first language?

    [It's true isn't it? Just look where we are! How is this not negatively affecting you?!" I bite out, desperate for him to see and except it, except it with the very core of his being so he can do what he needs when the time comes.] In this paragraph it should be 'accept' not 'except'. :) They sound so similar it's an easy mistake!

    Keep up the good work!!

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  • From AidaLily on November 17, 2014
    I really need to kick my muse in the behind at times. However, as another RWS has been posted finally you get another long review!

    Ch. 21 - I loved the flashback. I loved how Harry was like 'screw this, you are mine' and completely destroyed Draco's resistance to leaving him. I think it showed how much they truly love each other and didn't truly want to deny giving themselves to each each other. I think I would have laughed a bit if you made it Ginny. It would have made eerily chilly sense. However, I am happy to find out I was right it was the Carrow. I think Draco was stupid to go visit her though I know he needed to. It may have been better if he stayed or even left with Harry as opposed to dealing with the crazy woman. How exactly DID they capture Harry?

    Ch. 22 - It is very interesting that they set it up for Harry to finally find Draco in Thailand and I knew it! I knew that last Horcrux hadn't actually been destroyed, and I think Draco should have been honest with Harry. They could have found a way to destroy it so they never had to be in this situation or at least not had to worry about two crazy women trying to bring back Voldemort or sacrifice them or something. I hope they are able to get out of this but it doesn't seem like they will be able to. Maybe Ron and Hermione... or perhaps the Malfoy family ring that Draco gave to Harry will work. I am curious to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on November 13, 2014
    They are really stuck!! I hope Harry is as super powerful as I always picture him as and can break through Sofiya's nonsense
    and save them both crushing her and Alecto absolutely. Yes, for sure that's what I'd like. And then Harry can reasure Draco that he still loves him greatly...that everyone makes mistakes and everyone has some bad in them. They have to continue fighting it, right? Right. At least in my brain it's right but then I'm super tired tonight.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on November 06, 2014
    Oh I hope Harry ate his wheaties and remembers he has Dracos'ring because I want him to pound that Safiya to itty bitty bits & her buddy also! I can't take much more of Draco thinking she's sooo beautiful, smarter than any wizard, and her evil is so special. Harry just has to DEMOLISH her then tell Draco "I told you so". He should give Draco a hard time for not having more faith in him too.
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