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By : Sherlocked1971
  • From ANON - on August 04, 2016

    Oh my gosh this story is so hot! I need to know what happens next and the full story of Natalya! Please update this! It's so good!


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  • From cpetnm on April 12, 2015
    Hey Friend. I was on one of the Dramione sites, http://dramioneasks.tumblr.com, and your story came up! If you scroll through you'll find it, but it was in the last few days. Pretty cool! :)
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  • From ANON - Sophie on December 18, 2014
    I really love this story and hope that you upload some more really soon.
    Have a great day!
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  • From cpetnm on November 13, 2014
    Hello! I've been enjoying your story. The combination of Rose/Scorpius and Rose/James is intriguing! And very intense. I haven't read many next generation HP stories, but I like it. I'm as far as this chapter and I'm curious to find out why Rose accepts and likes this treatment.
    I also wanted to let you know I posted a new D/H story called Tuition Money. I'm not really sure where it's going, but I think Hermione will be the difficult one in this story. :)
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  • From ANON - eclectic_pet on September 28, 2014
    Hello my lovely. Draco is such a bad, bad man. He will fuck any woman...especially if she belongs to someone else. Such a man-whore!!! I love that about him *giggle*.

    More, Please!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - eclectic_pet on September 21, 2014
    Ah, my lovely. This was a hot little chapter, even with minimal smut. But I so LOVED Draco's idea of making Hermione watch, when he takes Rose. Will he make her sit in a corner, like a good little pet, for the entire night? Maybe making her suck him off periodically, after he's been in Rose. That would be the ultimate revenge for Rose, I think. I know, I'm one sick puppy!!!

    More, Please!!
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  • From ANON - eclectic_pet on September 17, 2014
    Oh, my lovely. Rose is playing a very dangerous game with Draco! This may come back to bite her *clapping hands*. I can't say the piercing was a turn on (I'm terrified of needles), but it wasn't a total turn off either (I know, I'm sick).

    I'm off to read the outtakes!!!

    More, Please.
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  • From ANON - eclectic_pet on September 14, 2014
    Don't you dare stop!!! :( This was hawt!!! I love this story and pissing off the parents is just icing on the cake.

    More, Please!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - eclectic_pet on September 11, 2014
    Hello my lovely. Of course the triad has to have a Christmas shag!!! I haven't a clue about Natalya, so no hints.

    I can't wait to see Rose's parents reactions to: 1) her attire, 2) her hickey, 3) the engagement ring, and 4) her fiancee!!! I loved Clover's charms.

    More, Please!!!
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  • From ANON - eclectic_pet on September 06, 2014
    Oh, my Lovely. I will keep you loved!!

    I so liked the two new chapters. Lots of smutty goodness! Scorpius, Rose, and Clover are hot when they are together...mmmmmm!

    I wonder what Draco is up to in London. Is he going to let Hermione know that Rose is joining the Malfoy family? Taunt her with it and punish her, since he can't have Rose?!?!?!?!?

    More, Please!!
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  • From ANON - eclectic_pet on September 03, 2014
    Oh, lovely. What a WONDERFUL chapter. I never imagined Astoria like this...but I LIKE!!!!

    Draco, ever the greedy git. A hot submissive at home and he still has to have Granger on the side.

    I was thinking about it this weekend. Hugo is half brother to both Rose AND Scorpius...that's sick. Your even more perverted then I first thought. I LOVE that about you *evil grin*!!

    More, Please!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - eclectic_pet on September 01, 2014
    Oh, sweetie...I'm all caught up! The threesome was hot and sexy. This is a sweet little triad.

    I know you don't have a beta, but PLEASE, please, please...MORE!
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  • From ANON - eclectic_pet on September 01, 2014
    SWEETIE!! Chapter 16 (Revenge). Both scenes in the library were HOT, HOT, HAWT!!!! The kiss with Clover and Ginny's juices was AWE inspiring.

    Definitely more of that type of Hotness...PLEASE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - eclectic_pet on September 01, 2014
    Oh, sweetie. Chapter 13 (Problem Parents) was PRICELESS!!!

    Draco and his mudblood, was wonderful. I'm hoping to get a few more chapters read today.
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  • From ANON - eclectic_pet on September 01, 2014
    Hello sweety! I'm sorry to have been away so long. I got a new computer and spent 2 days setting it up, then I had to work on my novel.

    Anyway...enough about me. I just got caught up to chapter 12.

    I am LOVING this story. I like that Rose isn't as submissive as she appears. Plus she is one KINKY little bitch. But I love that about her!!!!

    I must say, she definitely sounded like her mother, when she told Scorpius about her plans for the future. I hope Scorpius can keep her 'in line' as she obviously needs (and wants) it.

    I have to run off now and work on my story or my writing groups are going to string me up by my little toes *wince and shiver*. So keep it up, I'll be back as soon as I can.
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