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Reviews for Consequences

By : aleigh75
  • From AFFModerator on September 20, 2014

    Please correct your disclaimer.


    Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. You must use the actual name of the fandom. Just naming the owners/creators of the fandom, or saying that you don't own only the characters is not enough.In this case, we need you to add the name of the crossover fandom.


    What happens if the disclaimer isn't fixed? We allow seven (7) days for the story to be corrected. After that, we hide it, and it will stay hidden until it's corrected or until it's been thirty (30) days since we hid it. At that point, we do delete the story. If we do hide your story, you can always access it through your Control Panel in your archive profile even while it's hidden. If we do hide your story, and you've fixed it, you can contact the ToS team with the name of your story, your username and the fandom where the story is located to have your story made visible again. You can contact us by email at TOS_team@adult-fanfiction.org. Just one thing: Re-uploads of hidden stories are deleted immediately with no additional warning given.


    Here's a link to the Terms of Service:

    http://www.adult-fanfiction.org/tos.php


    This link is to the FAQ about disclaimers, with some examples:

    http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php?showtopic=3560


    We also suggest taking a few minutes to read the Content Guidelines:

    http://www.adult-fanfiction.org/guidelines.php


    You can remove this review once your disclaimer is corrected.


    Thank you,

    BronxWench, AFF Archive Moderator


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  • From Christopher11 on September 18, 2014
    With all due respect, there is nothing that 'special' about a Time Lord in the real world. People always say 'messing with time is a bad idea' but considering how many times humans in the Doctor Who series have done just that, I am doubtful that there is a reason why the Doctor is so 'special' and his race is.
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  • From BAFan on September 01, 2014
    Ch. 9

    Well . . . shit. I'm really on the edge of my seat now!
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  • From BAFan on August 24, 2014
    Ch. 7

    And the suspense continues to build. . . .
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  • From BAFan on August 24, 2014
    Ch. 6

    Ooh! Suspenseful ending. Good thing there's another chapter. :-)

    From your AN: "AFF doesn't let me edit things that are already posted, so whatever typos get past me I'm just stuck with. So I appreciate the thought, but pointing them out just triggers my OCD because I can't do anything about them. LOL"

    Seriously? You can't go back and edit a post? That's just screwed-up! I had no idea that was the case. My apologies! And I can't even imagine trying to write something like this on a smartphone.
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  • From BAFan on August 20, 2014
    Ch. 5

    Did you post three chapters at once, or did I somehow miss some updates? Anyway, these last two chapters gave me the shivers. The dreams, etc. are just creepy! And a sleep spell? That's . . . actually quite ingenious. :-)

    I found a couple of errors:

    "...The ice water sensation turned from a trickle to a fill on deluge, and she wrapped her arms tightly around herself." Should be "full on deluge."

    "'Meet me back here after lunch then,' Remus appeared to have mix feelings about Draco's request."

    Two things: It should be "mixed feelings," and it should be a period after the word "then," not a comma.

    Looking forward to the next update.

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  • From BAFan on August 19, 2014
    Ch. 2

    I am really enjoying this; it's very good! Can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully nothing too horrendous. :-)
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  • From BAFan on August 16, 2014
    Ch. 1

    Good start! Can't wait to see what the consequences are.
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