Wonderful story.  Thank you so much for writing and sharing it.

Wow GB, just finished HFLP and I loved it.  Thanks for the stories wonder if MIL will end similar to this one? 

Love it, I look forward to the next chapter.

I have to admit I wasn't sure about this story at first. I don't usually go for Harry/multi stories, but only Harry/Hermione. That being said, I'm very glad I gave this story a chance.

It was very well written, with minor spelling and grammar errors (I think I found one of each), and very believable characterizations that fit with the first of the Harry Potter novels, before JK 'goes off the rails' as it were.

Now I'm going to go catch up with Moments, but I may have to start over at the beginning, to remind myself of the differences between that story and this. Well done, thank you for sharing your talent.

One spelling mistake, right near the end of the chapter: "Harry summoned his wand; it skittered across the stone floor and he cuaght* it deftly in his hand..." *caught

Wait...wait, what? BELLATRIX is working for the Toad? Wow, did not see that one coming. Nice twist!

Slight error in this chapter. You have Harry painting the protection Runes on Hermione, and yet it's Hermione chucking things at Harry to test to see if they'll work.

Please tell me that Percy gets his. I like him even less in this than I did in Moments.

Just as good as Moments in Love so far. I hope to see the same changes to the Great Hall. (Don't want to give any spoilers)

Well damn, (just finished chapter 188) as said before I came for smut and don't get me wrong your provided very well. But truly you've taken J.K's work and made it your own I love this story to be quite frank and if I had to pay to read it. I would have gladly, the time and effort you put into this story just truly shows, it's nice to see Ron somewhat matured, I will admit I had hoped for a different ending for everyone's favorite minister. Kudos as well for the styling of her as a Hitler like ruler, it just helped me hate her actions even more. Anyways again truly just an amazing readay and I've actually eneed up with 12 bookmarks, all for this story.

As of this review I've just finished chapter 55, truly a good read I'm glad to have a hundred or so chapters left to be honest. But the crossovers I'll admit again have me smiling because while I enjoy the smutty nature of this story. The plot line of moments in love just seems to have captured me, however this little gem deserves it's own credit. You've been able to take an idea and warp it to your own and to that's truly something I'll admit I'm impressed by. Long story short, ive fallen in love with both stories and have thoroughly enjoyed what Ive read so far.

Ok now ik I'm gonna more then likely sound annoying, but lol I swear you used this exact line in moments in love "We were both very big on rebellion... but responsibility, not so much. You’ve managed to demonstrate a large degree of both in a single act - and you’re not even in third year yet. ”. I would be a liar to say I didn't laugh. 

Ello, I will admit, after my previous comment on another story of yours I wanted to see if you had  written anything else. I'm glad to have found another one of your stories to binge in. Anyways, love the idea you had for this story, the idea of Hermione having something like this happen. But one thing that I wouldon't like to ass, why make Ron such an ass lol. Don't get me wrong he is as dense as a solid oak, but it seems like he's for a lack of a better term, rather on your shit list. But enough of my ramblings, love the story so far and will openly admit I continue to chew through the rest of this story.

Stumbled across this while Googling the Heinlein reference to the sculpture "She who was once the beautiful hermione". The charactor's discussion of Heinlein and Stranger are good, and the sex bits were well-done.  Overall, well-written IMHO. May have to come back and see more of what happened after Hogwart's.

This  story is a wonderful remix, but throughout the whole story, Dumbledore has been calling Hermione: "Mrs. Potter", so why did he call her miss Granger on chapter 176?