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Reviews for The Guile and Devotion of a Black Heir

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From ANON - autumngold on October 08, 2015
Incredible new chapter! I love Harry's thoughts and plans about killing the Lestrange's father and Bellatrix. He would definitely be doing the world, and the family, a huge favor. Thank you for not having Harry accept Hermione, Ron and Ginny's insincere apology. I can't believe the three would be stupid enough to think that he would fall for their manipulations. I especially love how Harry turned Hermione's lies against her when she tried to use Remus. Absolutely outstanding story! It is really such a pleasure to read! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
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From Lady_Arachne on October 08, 2015
Loved the chapter!
I am so glad Theo is waiting for the right moment to inform Daphne of the breakage of the contract! I am almost salivating at the moment when Daphne is finally told and her making a huge scene! I hope it happens in the Great Hall, where everyone can see her. Or maybe in front of some big influential people, where they can see Theo finally getting a backbone and removing such a disgrace from being his betrothed! I cannot wait for this scene to happen! :D

And I am so glad Harry managed to talk some sense into Rabastan before he had to leave; it would have been awful for another extended fight to happen between them.

And I also love how kind Harry was to Torey, him being kind to house elves are something that I dearly love about Harry! I cannot read a story that has been treating house elves like dirt, it just doesn't seem true to Harry's character. :D

I don't know if I've mentioned this before, but I've aways imagined Lucius getting fed up with Harry's treatment to the house elves and forbids him from using any Malfoy house elves and getting Xerses to do the same. In follow up to that insane order, Harry would look enraged for one moment before grinning deviously and calling for Dobby. I always imagine this happening whenever Lucius or Xerses make a comment about how house elves should be treated. I hope Dobby does make an appearance the story. Something else that I always imagine with this is Harry giving Dobby a galleon or two as payment for his service, I can just imagine the strokes Lucius and Xerses will have at the sight of Harry paying a house elf! x'D

And I love that we got some extra detail to what that drunk wizard did in the Muggle town, he really does deserve Azkaban. And I also love that Harry will be planning his proposal to cover every corner in order to get people to agree with him that Dementors need to go. I cannot wait to see what he finds in his research! :D

And one more thing before I end this review off, I cannot believe Ginny tried to trick Harry into trusting her by telling him that she loved him! As if by telling him her 'feelings', he would suddenly trust them and place everything he has in her hands! I get the feeling that she will not give up on trying to get Harry for herself, I can just imagine her, Hermione, and Ron planning something to get Harry to marry her instead of 'Aceline'.

And with that, I thank you for another wonderful chapter. I cannot believe how you managed to both write and edit this chapter with how busy you were with everything. Thank you for taking the time to do this, take care of yourself this November and enjoy your break from writing! :D
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From Sif-Shadowheart on October 08, 2015
Sad about waiting for New Year for another update but excited about this chapter and your awesome update schedule for Sept. and Oct. nonetheless! Loved the Harry/Rabastan interaction over lunch and the Remy/Harry bonding time.
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From ANON - nightCat09 on September 22, 2015
Yay Neville! I was holding out hope that he didn't really have anything to do with all of Harry's stuff getting destroyed, so glad I was right! I'm sad that him and Harry can't/won't be friends anymore, but I can understand why, that would be an INSANE amount of guilt for Harry to live with. Hopefully they can at least go back to being on civil terms again though.

All the Weasleys are pissing me off, especially Bill, Charlie, and the Twins. I understand why they're taking Ron and Ginny's side (hopefully only for now) since they obviously don't know everything that's going on one Harry's side but it's still frustrating as heck. I hope that those four, being my favorite Weasleys, will at least start to understand where Harry is coming from and stop with all the violent and rude thoughts.

FINALLY! YAY HARRY AND RABASTAN!!! Lol, I was very excited for that engagement, and Harry's ring sounds beautiful. I've seen similar rings online before I believe, and they're gorgeous.

Very excited to read more, and especially excited for more ROTD tomorrow. :) Amazing work as always Star!

(Look at that, I actually wrote a review that's more than an "I loved it can't wait for more!" I'm so proud of myself. ;) )
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From ANON - Storm on September 22, 2015
Wonderful, I love this story and always get so excited with updates. Can't wait to read more
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From ANON - Mika on September 19, 2015
hi i love all your works and I'm over the moon to know that your going to update more often but i noticed you didnt say anything about the Dracken memoirs are you going to update it i'm not rushing or demanding or anything simply curious both dracken works are great. Keep writting your fan
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From ANON - ChaosLady on September 16, 2015
Is Lucius blocking owls from Remus or has Harry just not responded yet? Excellent update!
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From ANON - Lexi on September 16, 2015
So, yay new chapter, although there were a few things that I was completely confused about. The first thing is, when did Dumbledore and Remus start believing that Harry is under a potion or dark curse? Because I skimmed through previous chapters and I feel like there's something missing. I know everyone else believes that it might be possible or that Lucius is saying things to Harry convincing him that doing all this is right, but I thought that Remus believed that Harry was happy and doing well and trusted what Harry told him. I kind of find it strange that almost all of a sudden, Remus thinks Harry is actually in danger.

The second thing is the Weasley's. I understand that they're upset that Harry is doing all that, but they're reasonably intelligent people, or at least they should be, to understand that Ginny and Ron damaged Harry's things making Lucius, Harry's father, to pay for them all over again, that they would have to pay for damages. I mean, that's common sense, because if they can get away with such a thing then others are likely to do the same. They don't seem to understand that Harry isn't doing this to be petty, he's doing it, well Lucius is demanding it really, but he's doing it because they have to be punished for it. It has nothing to do with him knowing they don't have the money. The other people charged, other than Neville, probably can't really pay for it either, yet they still damaged Harry's things because of a petty reason such as becoming his own independent person. And while yes, they did some what care for him, they never treated him like family, despite their belief in doing such things. If they truly thought of Harry as family, they would've asked to have guardianship over Harry and have him live in the Burrow. But they knew what was happening at the Dursley's and they left Harry to fend for himself. They're actually pretty delusional about the whole thing and they just don't seem to really get it. I guess we'll have to see how Bill reacts to Harry because he can't really judge Harry just on what people tell him, it'll be interesting to see if maybe Bill changes his opinion about everything if he manages to get on the Wizengamot and become a Lord. To be honest I don't think Bill will really be able to do it.

Anyway, I'm glad Neville is still someone who's standing up for Harry. It was something I did think was kind of strange. Glad to know he was actually trying to help, and is willing to testify for his innocence. Keep up the amazing work.
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From Lady_Arachne on September 16, 2015
Loved the chapter!
Finally, Harry and Rabastan are engaged! I cannot wait to see the public's reactions to his engagement! And I swear, if Dumbledore or any of his little sheep touch a single hair on Harry, they will regret it!

I can now see that Bill truly sees Harry as the enemy, such a shame; he was one of my favorite characters. I can't remember what you said on Charlie's position in this, whether he will be on Harry's or Dumbledore's side. I think you said he was siding with Harry, or at least being neutral to everything and only worrying about his dragons. I just hope he doesn't hate Harry. In dark!Harry fics, I love it when Charlie is on Harry's side. :D

And I hope Dumbledore's plans to get Harry alone fails, there's no telling what Dumbledore might do to him in order to find the 'dark spell' on him. Plus, I get the feeling that Dumbledore will try to wheedle out of Harry the identity of his fianc
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From ANON - autumngold on September 16, 2015
Thank you for your absolutely amazing new chapter of your incredible fanfic! I am so glad that Harry and Basti are now engaged, I just hope that Dumbledore doesn't find out. That old manipulator will do anything to make people believe that he is in the right. How is he really any different than Voldemort? Plenty of people have died for his greater good. Wonderful new chapter! I am worried how Ron, Ginny, Hermione and the others are going to try and get even. Can't wait for more!
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From LadyFreak on September 16, 2015
There's no way i can express how much i adore your story. it is absolute brilliance and has me begging for more! Your stories are always amazing, but this one takes the cake.
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From Sif-Shadowheart on September 16, 2015
Maybe I'm reading it wrong but it seems like Arthur is the only one who is acting maturely about the bill from Harry among the Weasleys. If that's the case then it would likely be because of Molly's overly-strong influence on her sons right? From my perspective, even if all of her kids consider her over-bearing and don't like how she dominates the family they would like be highly likely to soak up her opinions both because she's so highly vocal about them and because as children you soak up everything...whether you like it later in life or not and those behaviors can be hard to shake. That said, Bill of everyone I would've expected to be the harshest on his siblings and insisting on them paying Harry back because of his close working relationship with the Goblins. That he thinks Harry should wave it off just because he has money is extremely hypocritical of the curse-breaker. And now I want to watch Harry completely CRUSH him in the Wizengamot. No matter how smart Bill is or how much studying he does I don't think he'll be anywhere near prepared enough to take on Lucius Malfoy's adopted son and protege. Especially since no one else in the Wizarding World had the political savvy and purebred cache that Lucious Lucius has.

On another note:

So doing a happy dance over the engagement!

Love all of your works and can't wait to read the upcoming chapters both this month and in October.

- Sif
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From ANON - Tat5934 on September 09, 2015
Wow! That was one hell of a chapter!
I like Marcus!Almost as much as I like Rabastan... almost!
I hope we will see more of Fenrir in the story because even if he gives me the creeps, I like him.
Can't wait to read the next chapter and see the dinner between our favourite lovebirds:-)
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From ANON - Tat5934 on September 09, 2015
Of course I loved that chapter! It was a sweet one :-)
I was so happy when I saw that there was not one but two new chapters!
I'm going to read the newt chapter rightaway!

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From ANON - Svenja on August 31, 2015
Hello and thank you for such a good story.
i quiet enjoy reading your story, because i like you writing style very much.
the storyline is really good and interesting to read.
the pairing is really uncommon and that is what is making it so interesting, but your style and way to describe the characters is amazing.
i really hope that you continue to write such incredible stories.
yours
svenja
and please excuse my poor english and just ignore the failures
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