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Reviews for The Guile and Devotion of a Black Heir

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Momo on July 29, 2015
    I love absolutely lI've this story and chapter, I was so excited to see chapter ten. I love all the stories that you write. What comes from your mind to your fingers is just amazing. I also know other viewers Gove you a hard time updating, I just don't think they understand that to rush a tale would be horrible and an axe on your creativity. I can't wait to see more. Thank you. :)
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  • From ANON - xcmxhpxsnxroxmysox on July 27, 2015
    What a great story so far. Your characters are excellent like usual. I love your writing style and the way you bring your stories to life like this one and your three dracken ones...keep up the good work
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  • From Jan on July 24, 2015
    I absolutely love this story, but then again I love all of your stories, your an amazing writer, I can't wait for chapter 10 to be posted ^_^

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  • From fortheloveofDrizzt on July 19, 2015
    My my. Rhaz (i totally cannot remember how to correctly spell his name without messing it up terribly) finally got taken down a notch! Im so happy for that to have happened. As for the rest i love it!

    -Drizzt

    P.S. to hell with the people who demand or bother you for an update. The muse is not a trained monkey that can dance on command. It must be allowed to run free and enjoy life ao it can give you the ideas. Those who do not understand that obviously aren't as creative and can pump out drivel.
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  • From ANON - tkykitty on July 19, 2015
    happy dance, happy dance!!! A wonderful chapter update :-) I adored the Christmas gift giving scene. Harry and Rabastan are just so darn cute together. I was secretly wishing Harry gave Rabastan father poison lol. Thank goodness he got sent home. Really something is wrong with that man.

    It's good to see Rabastan and Rodolphus getting better. IT's a little bit at a time but still good to see progress.

    As Always I love your stories! Till the next time.
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  • From ANON - Lexi on July 17, 2015
    Definitely enjoyed this chapter. It had been a while since the last chapter so I went back to re-read everything so I knew what had happened up to this point. Definitely glad that Rabastan and Harry's relationship is continuing to grow. When I was re-reading one of the previous chapters where Bill was trying to get all the stuff done to become Lord Weasley, it made me think about why would a bunch of fully trained adult wizards would put all their faith in a still in school wizard and think of him as the enemy for not wanting to fight. Had it been Ron who was prophesized to defeat Voldemort, I have no doubt that Mrs. Weasley would outright refuse for her son to at least not be prepared for such a thing. But because Harry isn't anyone's family, because they certainly don't count the Malfoy's as Harry's family, that it doesn't matter should he die fighting for them and not being prepared. Personally I think the Order of the Pheonix is all in some sort of conspiracy with Dumbledore to get rid of Harry or make him out to be the next dark lord if he survives defeating Voldemort and then steal all his heritage from him. I find it kinda silly and strange that despite Harry never saying anything about siding with Voldemort, just that he doesn't believe in that BS of a prophesy and that he wants to live through this war that the adults have hoisted onto him, that the adults think he's crazy and believe he has to uphold some sort of duty to them when he doesn't owe them anything. Especially when they left him at the Dursleys. Hopefully Lucius will do something about ousting Dumbledore for that and watch as Dumbledore's credibility crumbles. While I understand why they're acting the way they are, I just see all these adults as big ignorant, selfish bratty children who aren't getting what they want despite it not really having anything to do with them. Harry's life is his life and they obviously don't understand that or care to understand that, I'm pretty sure it's the latter. Thankfully Remus is the only one who understands and I hope we see more of him in coming chapters because with Harry's betrothal and eventual marriage to Rabastan, there's probably going to be some conflicts due to the Malfoy's and Estrange's alliances to Voldemort, but I can see Remus eventually coming around as long as Harry is happy, which as the only friend of Lily and James left alive, he is going to make sure that Harry is happy and healthy. It'll definitely be interesting to really see what Voldemort's plans actually are. He is an intellectual man, so I'm curious to see how you portray his goals and if they might be different from what the world and the light side sees them as. Keep up the amazing work.
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  • From ANON - Viral on July 17, 2015
    Oh honey ignore the grumpy ones! They're just addicted to your writing. Never mind the length, this chapter is great, more fun, and a lovely look into their lives and disagreements. :) The New Years Ball should be lots of fun! And of course Rowle will be making a fool of himself. It is New Years after all, isn't someone supposed to end the night in a diaper? :P Xerxes is a funtastic name and worth a lot in scrabble. No pressure to finish the next chapter, we can all just reread the whole story to see them meld together in the meantime. It's always so much fun. I always have at least one of your stories open~

    Best wishes from Canadia!
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  • From ANON - ronied on July 17, 2015
    Good job keep it up.

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  • From Lady_Arachne on July 16, 2015
    Loved the chapter!
    Love how Harry handled the situation and showed Lucius how he could control his anger! And I love that Rhadamanthus didn't stay for the rest of the holidays, he would have surely ruined Harry's and Draco's one-on-one game.

    And the part where Rhadamanthus had screamed before charging at Harry, I imagined it coming out like that of an enraged woman! That was the funniest mental image I've ever had in dealing with him and thought I'd share it with you! x'D

    Loved the chapter, I'm eagerly and patiently waiting for the next! :D
    And I hope you feel better, colds are terrible. D:
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  • From ANON - rp0129782 on July 16, 2015
    All I can say is finally.
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  • From ANON - starr on July 16, 2015
    thank you so much for the update...So good to see Rab's father being sent home like a 5 yr. old !!!!!! ( he still needs to drop dead )...:):):)
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  • From ANON - Zsfantasy on July 16, 2015
    I never thought that I would enjoy a story with Harry being paired with Rabastan. However, I absolutely love this story! You are a great writer. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - autumngold on July 16, 2015
    Thank you for your absolutely incredible new chapter! I love the fact that Rabastian and Harry are getting along so well now. It is just too bad that Harry will have to return to Hogwarts and all of the people who want to cause him harm there. Hopefully, with Draco and his other friends help, he will be able to stay safe. Wonderful update! Now I can't wait to see how the Malfoy's New Year's Eve party will go! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Crimson Rosary on June 19, 2015
    I really like your stories. They're really inspirational, well written and are enjoyable. I think I've read almost all your written stories, either on ff or here. Please keep writing! It's really great! :D
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  • From ANON - dreamer27 on May 25, 2015
    This is a great story. I hope Daphne does something maybe have sex with the wrong guy and the Notts break the betrothal contract with her. I like Theo and I don't want him with Daphne. Maybe have Theo tested for the gene and be a gene carrier and then he can marry Blaise or Flint. Anyway enough of my rambling. I just wanted to say you are a great writer and can not wait for the next chapter.
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