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Reviews for Deception

By : valkyrie136
  • From ANON - on June 13, 2018

    This was good in a twisted way. I would continue to read other stories from you


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  • From ANON - Lex on June 19, 2016
    This was fantastic, most definitely an all time favorite
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  • From FireCats20 on August 25, 2015
    Please tell me there will be more about the twins and women Lucius is hiding. Is she muggle? I want to know more about this chapter.
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  • From ANON - sammythe2nd on July 10, 2015
    This was pretty good and I found it interesting spin on veela Draco.
    I think it would be awesome if you wrote another fic about the background of Lucius and Ginny :D
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  • From RoseDavis on April 15, 2015
    I really loved this fic. I started reading and couldn't stop. It was very interesting. Thanks for sharing.
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  • From ANON - Luvtracker on April 12, 2015
    You clearly need more lessons in grammar, spelling and thought/story construction. Your plot though interesting was unorganized. It's sad how a plot with so much potential can be murdered mercilessly by its very own author.
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  • From A_Diva on October 11, 2014
    Thank you for the glimmer of hope.
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  • From ANON - Izzy on October 08, 2014
    Just finished reading the whole story. I absolutely loved it. Dark Draco fics are very interesting. Hopefully you decide to write Draco and Hermione in a Hogwarts setting.
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  • From A_Diva on October 07, 2014
    Thanks for sharing your story with us. It wasn't my usual cup of tea, although I enjoyed it.

    Have you read Eden by Obsessmuch on FF.net? That's supposedly a dark Lumione story. It's very long. I haven't read it because it just sounds to dang depressing.

    If this was the last chapter, you should change the status.
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  • From A_Diva on October 07, 2014
    I did not see Narcissa getting the twins. I'm oddly intrigued by that turn of events. I almost want to see a story with Narcissa raising them. If you were a different kind of writer, I would request a short story of Narcissa finally finding a bit of happiness. Who knows, maybe she could even find her mate?

    Lucius is scum. Poor Ginny. She would have been better off dead. I want him to die more than I want Draco. I honestly couldn't see Ginny living long. Well, maybe I could. I think she would spend her time planning Lucius's death and a way to get her children back, although she can't live if he dies. Hmm, maybe there's a way to incapacitate Lucius where he can live, but she can be free. Oh yeah, Azkaban! Or one of those spell that put people to sleep for years. Ginny can live her life and die of old age taking Lucy with her.


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  • From ANON - ccha on October 06, 2014
    Haha love that of him being jealous of his own son.
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  • From ANON - Ariel on October 06, 2014
    That was a weird twist. Giving up children for Ginny? It does make sense with how veelas are obsessed with their one and only.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 06, 2014
    I was really looking forward to you killing Ginny off.
    Why is it so hard to kill a bitch?
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  • From ANON - sherlocked17 on October 06, 2014
    Swollowed should be swallowed?

    I like your angst an poetic qualities.
    I do like dark and twisted stuff not sure why, maybe the fantasy is enough, that is why I started writing my own fix. (usually not my habit to plug my own story in a review.)
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  • From A_Diva on October 06, 2014
    I am really confused about what happened in chapter 42. I know Narcissa arrived to save Draco, but it was all sort of rushed. That chapter could use fleshing out.


    I've liked the story, so far. I do believe that it could have been a little more in-depth all around, but I'm glad for the quick updates.
    Thanks
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