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By : valkyrie136
  • From ANON - Ariel on October 05, 2014
    I am glad you have decided to continue the story like this without making a Part II until later. The plot got thicker. I do enjoy the dark aspects of fanfiction, too. Chapter 32 has gotten me excited. What will she do?
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  • From A_Diva on October 05, 2014
    Look at Lucius getting his little bit of heaven on with Ginny. I wonder if Ginny is as pliant as Lucius thinks, or if she's only biding her time. I do like that you're actually capable of writing someone who feels redemption. Lucius did terrible things, but he regrets the actions he took to claim Ginny. I sadly don't think Draco will ever get there. I say Hermione kill him. That's dark. he he.

    I know you like dark, but I hope you don't kill of the twins.


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  • From A_Diva on October 05, 2014
    So Lucius has a secret mate and children. I feel for Ginny, which is who I guess she is. I'm very intrigued. There's some depth in here that I like. I hope you keep digging.
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  • From ANON - magi on October 05, 2014
    Yes! Calm but seething on the inside Draco is much scarier than insanely angry Draco.
    Now, his Slytherin is showing.
    What is he planning.
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  • From Peculiar_Doll on October 04, 2014
    Noooo I know it's your story and you can write what you want but please don't make part2 (or any part...) about Lucius/Ginny i like Lucius but Ginny bores me so. *Sigh* Honestly i care more about Arthur Weasley's breakfast than the romance between the two. Anyway I can't wait to read more thanks for the quick updates! :)
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  • From ANON - magi on October 04, 2014
    More! I miss these kind of dark ff's, not a lot of Gryffindors nowadays,just too
    Afraid to write.
    :v
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  • From ANON - Guest on October 04, 2014
    Hello. I have been following your story. I think you should keep writing. Between 30 and 31, it seems there was a considerable time skip. It would be great if you discussed some of the events then. I like the idea of Lucius and Ginny but I think it would be better to stay with the main pairing and then deviate after. There are still loose ends like the authorities and Mr. Weasley. Please keep writing. Don't stop.
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  • From ANON - ccha on October 04, 2014
    I bet the baby is gonna be Scorpious! And please do continue your previous works I love them so much since there isn't much dark!Dramione out there
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  • From ANON - hugo on October 04, 2014
    So glad he accepted his fate but I wonder about Hermione...
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  • From Peculiar_Doll on October 04, 2014
    I like darker stories as well and I'm really enjoying this one :). Though i do think the whole Ginny/Lucius part of the story should be it's own thing.

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  • From ANON - ccha on October 04, 2014
    Please continue
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  • From ANON - Sherlocked17 on October 04, 2014
    Yes, Ginny /Lucius would be an ok thing. She seems to be all right with him up to acertain point... It looks like she humors him. Oh and here must be hear I believe in the last chapter.
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  • From ANON - magi on October 03, 2014
    LadyJane, please continue your other fics! loved it so and been waiting for more.
    ...
    This one's excellent too!
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  • From ANON - hugo on October 03, 2014
    I really don't want to see Draco die!
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  • From ANON - sherlocked17 on October 03, 2014
    Very curious where this is leading and hoping Hermione is not merely a thing. That would be upsetting....
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