Click Here!

Reviews for Deception

By : valkyrie136
  • From ANON - eclectic_pet on September 28, 2014
    Would this happen to be the 'Lady Jane' of 1) You Won't Know, 2) Bittersweet, 3) Ruined, and 4) Unwanted?

    I always LOVE Veela fiction. Ones that are Dramoine are even better. You've grabbed MY attention. I hope to see more, and more, and more.

    More, Please!!!
    Report Review

  • From AFFModerator on September 28, 2014

    Please correct your disclaimer.


    Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. You must use the actual name of the fandom. Just naming the owners/creators of the fandom, or saying that you don't own only the characters is not enough.


    What happens if the disclaimer isn't fixed? We allow seven (7) days for the story to be corrected. After that, we hide it, and it will stay hidden until it's corrected or until it's been thirty (30) days since we hid it. At that point, we do delete the story. If we do hide your story, you can always access it through your Control Panel in your archive profile even while it's hidden. If we do hide your story, and you've fixed it, you can contact the ToS team with the name of your story, your username and the fandom where the story is located to have your story made visible again. You can contact us by email at TOS_team@adult-fanfiction.org. Just one thing: Re-uploads of hidden stories are deleted immediately with no additional warning given.


    Here's a link to the Terms of Service:

    http://www.adult-fanfiction.org/tos.php


    This link is to the FAQ about disclaimers, with some examples:

    http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php?showtopic=3560


    We also suggest taking a few minutes to read the Content Guidelines:

    http://www.adult-fanfiction.org/guidelines.php


    You can remove this review once your disclaimer is corrected.


    Thank you,

    Dafdes, AFF Archive Moderator



    Report Review

  • From A_Diva on September 28, 2014
    Nice cliffhanger. I do think the chapters could be a bit meatier.
    Remember, show, don't tell.
    Report Review

  • From lexiatel on September 28, 2014
    This was good, I would have personally combined the last two chapters, but just the same, I am interested to see where this is headed. :)
    Report Review

  • From A_Diva on September 27, 2014
    Good start. There were a couple of grammar issues, but overall it wasn't too bad.

    Poor Hermione. I'd like to know how they got into their current situation.


    I hope that you update frequently if your chapters are going to be this short.


    Report Review

  • From bananasforyou on September 27, 2014
    Interesting!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!