Reviews for A Brother to BasilisksBy : Lomonaaeren |
A fantastically paced, well worded piece. I just need to know it will be continued!! It's easily on par with any good printed commercial work, and better than a lot.
about #127...
The games begins right? :-)
I would love to see what type of court Harry will [unintentionally] establish. Also as big as Dash is getting I wonder if he will stay with Harry forever....OR will you have Harry,when he becomes an old man, put Dash in a petrified sleep since Dash will live way longer than him?
I can't see Dash wanting to be without Harry.
about #126...
If Draco keeps it up, Harry will have to 'put him in a leash'....I think he should.
about #125...
'I could bounce my venom off the Tower if I wanted and hit them that way.'
LOL! That is PURE Dash all the way! :-)
Soo..will you do a different type of bonding much later with Harry & Draco?
When's the next chapter? I've made it so far and now am sad lol I should have read slower
about #122..
I'm back! :-) Sooo glad Draco snapped Harry out of that self-loathing when it came to Umbridge, I would have gotten frustrated with Harry myself.
Also now it seems like Harry is FINALLY moving forward!
Ch122 - So many threads! I'm looking forward to how you untangle them all. And bring on the battle! SP
Ch121 - It's so like Harry to worry himself into a knot that he'll turn evil, but I loved Dash's response (the laughter) as the idea is total nonsense. And yay for Draco, sorting Harry out. SP
Yay for catch-ups, and yay for Dash FINALLY taking care of Umbridge, even if it will cause problems for Harry. But hey, what else is new?! And so cute that Harry has finally let himself be with Draco. SP
Chapter 14 and I swear I hate almost everyone in this story. Harry is a whiny little toad as well as everyone else in Gryffindor, Malfoy needs to man up. Dumblerdore needs to hurry up and die already. Black and Lupin are annoying childish asshats. I swear Snape, Luna, and Nevelle are. The only tolerable people and two of them are barely even in it.
I like this story in a way. It is just extremely slow and very very VERY annoying at times. Dash is my baby.
I wish everyone would just take a chill pill and understand that they are being overly dramatic and need to call the fudge down.
about 118...
Boy those cliffhangers are something else! :-)
about #117...
Well I enjoyed this..it felt like I was looking at other people's POV for a change and not necessarily Harry & Dash's POV all the time. Not a bad thing, but a good change up. Also it's good to see other non-humans who are not just werewolves & centaurs.
Ch116 - Oh, I felt for Draco in this chapter. That feeling of want and pain when he looks at Harry was too similar to my own feelings (back when I allowed myself to have them). So glad that Harry is willing to love Draco. And, nice to see the plotting continue with Theo falling into line too, now. SP.
Ch115 - Dash might get to eat Umbridge? Oh, how happy that makes me! So much political stuff this chapter, and Draco getting closer to Harry. Lovely. SP
CH113 - Why oh why didn't Harry let Dash eat Umbridge?! *cries* Glad to see Lucius is using his smarts and gathering support. SP
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