Reviews for A Brother to BasilisksBy : Lomonaaeren |
Ch113: Loving sneaky Narcissa. And I like that your Harry is less of a hormone/anger ridden idiot than the canon Harry in OotP - his duel with the Pink Bitch was great. SP
about #112...
good chapter...nothing much happening here tho'
Ch112 - I've just sat and devoured this whole story in two sittings. It is brilliant! I love the slowly building love between Harry and Draco, how awesome Severus is, Dash, all the political games, and the way you are altering the canon to fit the new reality of what Harry is.
I really REALLY hope Dash gets to eat Umbridge, rather than letting her get handed over to the centaurs. Also, I was wondering how/if you were going to handle the Deathly Hallows. Dash killed Dumbledore, and unless I missed something, no one had disarmed Albus before that point, so would Harry be the master of the Elder Wand? And, given he and Voldie share souls, would that mean Voldie would also be able to be its master?
Anyway, this is superb! SP
about #109..
1. Severus...Father Hen: live and in full effect!
2. Come now, you gotta give Dash his mini pool....he'd love it. :-)
3. Will Severus ever be called dad by Harry in the future OR be introduced to the muggle tradition that is called Father's Day....as appreciation of course.
about #108...
1. Still love the Severus & Harry moments
2. Any oppurtunity you can give Severus to humiliate Sirius..will be most welcome.
about #107...
You know my dear...it's been a while between chapters and with the story so long I forgotten, what did Scrimgoeur do???
We need some references or footnotes at this point.
about #106...
Been so long since I've read this...once Harry gets his allies, what's next?
Great story, looking forward to reading more!
about #105...
Dash is outgrowing Harry mentally...even tho' he is bonded to Harry, will there be a power struggle, since Harry is still young & Dash is maturing fast?
Also will Dash get as big as his predecessor, cause it would make sense if he did.
about #103...
I like a protective Severus. :-)
By the way, ever thought of doing a story that was 'somewhat' a love triangle?
This is by far one of the best fic's I have read in a while.
about #101..
Harry & Moldy are each other's Horcruxes now??? I thought He was just was using Harry's magic
SP777
about #100....
That was a nice interlude between them....
I didn't realize how much I love their relationship
They're so cute!!
I really want to see them jokingly grab each other's butts in front of Severus "without him knowing"!!
This was indeed a sweet chocolate chip of Drarry. ...Now I'm waiting for the triple chocolate chapter lol but I now I have a bit to wait for that one. Can't wait to dive into the thick of political maneuvering and more development of all of Harry's relationships.
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