Reviews for A Brother to BasilisksBy : Lomonaaeren |
SP777
about #99...
I think that's the first time I've really seen the word 'boyfriend' applied to either Harry or Draco in a while. :-p
It has been a while (again)! It was wonderful to read one of your stories again and am sorry for not being able to come and read them more often. I will try and do that again, so that I will be able to leave more comments about your awesome work.
The political conflict is getting very interesting! I did. It expect Dash to be slytherin by the way, that came as a bid suprise. I feel very bad for Harry because of the ripped of soul part, that must have scarred him for life...
I look forward to the 100 chapter! Wich is pretty amazing by the way.
This story is like eating a giant cookie. It's delicious and even better when you randomly get a chocolate chip or piece of Heath toffee. Yum lol the political intrigue bring moved forward is the toffee bits throughout and drarry moments are the chocolate chips that are more sparse but I'm enjoying the cookie as is while awaiting the even rarer chocolate chunks *wiggles eyebrows* lol I'm going to have some dessert now cause I'm in the mood for real cookies. ;-)
SP777
about #98..aka MY story.
Didn't realize I missed a chapter..I like the political aspect of the story gives it a different twist in a HP story. I wish Harry was a little older to understand how politics work...and just deal with it.
Now I'm sure you're going to end it at 100 and start another one?
SP777
about #96...
I must say this was very interesting to read as the players/allies come together. I think Harry will be alright, esp. with Mother Hen Snape. Happy belated Thanksgiving by the way.
SP777
about #94..
Just when you think it's safe to get back into the water, Sirius is back....
SP777
about #93...
Shouldn't a mistrial had been called or something before everyone scampered off? That way this won't happen again.
I love reading and re-reading this story. The characters' personalities, motivations, and loyalties are portrayed believably and beautifully. I do not care for Harry's fall-back threat that he will break his bond with Dash, however. He has is this story threatened Dash with what he KNOWS is an excruciatingly painful concept when he is trying to get his point across; that is the epitome of manipulative behavior. It would be unacceptable to threaten a spouse with divorce solely for that purpose, too; not to mention a creature you are not only bonded to, BUT also sacrificed a shard of soul for you. In my opinion, that is the only dark blemish on an otherwise wonderfully written story.
SP777
about #92...
Dash is a mess. :-)
He deserves his own short story.
SP777
about #91...
Good chapter...
SP777
about #90 [already?]...
Have to give it to Draco, he is resilient....and troublesome Bless his heart. :-)
I don't know how you'll end it but will there be an epilogue on where they are in the future?.
Love your story so far! I do have a question though, where's Draco's snake Conflagration? He seemed to have disappeared.
SP777
about #89...
1. I have to say the conversation between [and thoughts from] Lucius & Narcissa had such a different dynamic from how you portrayed them in the past was actually enjoyable to read. :-)
2. At this point I'm glad Dash is loyal to Harry, he's so advanced that he would have either 'left Harry behind' to fend for himself intellectually or monopolized the bond.
3. Just how big is Dash now?
4. Have you found a job yet?
SP777
about #88...
Calm before the storm...
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