Reviews for A Brother to BasilisksBy : Lomonaaeren |
Of course it ends there the first time I find this. I can't decide between wanting to yell at you or wanting to bang my head against a wall. Or perhaps saying something to the effect of, "Poor Harry."
SP777
about #87...
What!!!???!! Get tha' fuck out of here! For real!!??!! :-D ...Damn! I can honestly say I didn't see THAT coming! Wow, Dash IS a different type of basilisk! Go ahead girl! Dust off your shoulders! :-)
...and then you made it harder to kill Voldilocks. :-(
Holy shit did not see that last paragraph coming! OMG the site is about to start hitting the fan! Cannot wait for the next chapter.
SP777
about #86...
Definitely love this side of Severus when it comes to Harry.
Oh my heavens is theis a fantastic story. I just binge read all 86 chapters. Your plot development is astounding and I was hooked from chapter one. Dash's sarcasm and witty banter had me laughing while wanting to hug Harry and Severus so many times. I want a basalisk. :) I look forward to future chapters and this is one of my alltime favorite fanfictions. Have fun writing.
SP777
about #85...
Of all the things that happened in this chapter, the on edge conversation between Harry & Dash was a glimpse of what I've been wanting to see for a long time. Because of the fact Dash is growing fast and wants to do what comes naturally to him, while Harry is still a kid and has to deal with that fact. Harry is somehow going to need to be firm ...and understanding that his basilisk is not a tame animal he IS and can be dangerous.
Plus Harry has to find a balance that Dash can live with in order to peacefully continue living in society or there will be some headaches in the future. Btw, get my email?
SP777
about #84...
Oh look, they left it right there just when it was getting good. *looks at the author*
Whoa!
Finally! I got to read the chapters! Yay! And they where where amazing.
I loved the part with "Even more important than embarrassing Harry and making him blush was being right." That was so sweet. I loved that part with Draco.
and when Harry took the cup, I really was not prepared that dumbledore would be there. Actually the way you write him makes me shudder. I am glad Dash is there now.
Again thanks for writing!
Yes, let this be the moment that Dumblef*ck dies! Please! He cannot be redemmed. The very idea that he is trying to rebuild Harry into someone he can turn into a good little brainless soilder needs to DIE!
SP777
about #83...
I was wondering how long it would be before Dash got to use 'the eyes'...and don't tell me Dumbledore has gone batty. Also I see they changed the damn format on the site again.
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