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Reviews for Bittersweet

By : valkyrie136
  • From ANON - sherlocked17 on November 05, 2014
    Well chapter 17 was puzzling You should elaborate on that one.
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  • From lexiatel on November 04, 2014
    This is great! It would be awesome if she finally found out she had been fucking Draco, and he actually made her wet for him :P
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  • From ANON - Guest on November 04, 2014
    I've never reviewed a story bf although I have enjoyed reading HP FFiction, but I've made an exception for this story. I was originally hooked by reading the first 11 chaps of the last post. It was superb. Great writing and Great story, very intriguing. I was beside myself to realize that you had picked it up again. Just wanted to let you know that I will continue to be a faithful reader of yours for as long as you continue to write.
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  • From ANON - Shane on November 03, 2014
    I really like how this is progressing as for ideas I was assuming you were somehow going to make hermoine end up liking draconian in a weird convoluted way...I can dream right. Or even if draco somehow roped her into a relationship by threatening Rons life I dunno was never really creative in ideas
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  • From ANON - m on November 03, 2014
    I didn't know you were struggling, you can't tell that from the way your writing this story. I honestly don't know what to say here. But this is amazing story and I do hope you find a way to finish this. remember not all story end with happily ever after. keep up the good job!
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  • From Bourbon-and-chocolate on November 03, 2014
    Thanks for updating hope you stop banging your head again the wall and looking forward to finding out what happened between hg going from the library to potions.
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  • From A_Diva on November 03, 2014
    Well, if you want a sad ending, have Ron die and Draco continue to live as him. If you want a twisted ending, you could have Hermione remember her attacks, but Ron is the one she see's hurting her. Draco, in his true form, pretends to be the one to save her because he's given Ron a potion that makes him do bad things. That's the story you could have told. Ron could have been the one to hurt Hermione so that Draco could swoop in and pick up the pieces, although it was Draco who caused Ron to hurt her. Ron dies and no one realizes the truth. I think that could be the plot of a different tale.

    hmm...I'm not sure what you'll do with this one. I think you've written yourself into a corner. Maybe Hermione remembers what happened. She leaves Harry a note and runs up to the astronomy tower to clear her head. Draco, after having let the deatheaters into the castle and killing Dumbledore, finds her up there and plans to take her away with him. Draco is being his nasty self and boasting of killing Ron or some such evil deed. Maybe he talks about how good the sex was, idk. Hermione grows upset as the images of her rape invade her mind. Sad at the loss of Ron and her virtue to Draco, she throws herself off the astronomy tower.

    No one wins. Draco doesn't get the girl and Hermione dies. However, I do like the idea of her haunting him. The bastard. OR in your dark style, Draco finds away to bring her soul back, so she's attached to him forever. He is obsessed with her. I say go with no one winning. A year later, Draco lying on the ground dying as the war rages on around him. He see's Hermione's spirit staring down sadly at him. He vision blurs as he grow week. He whispers her name like a prayer, struggling to hold onto life. Ron's spirit walks up behind her, takes her hand, and pulls her up into the light. Draco's world fades to black and he dies with no one to mourn him.



    Anyhow, that's all I have. It's all over the place, but in my defense it's late her. Good Luck.
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  • From ANON - haneh on November 02, 2014
    I am a new reader and an avid Dramione shipper,
    though this is a change from what I usually read
    which are, light and fluffy ff's I gave it a shot and I like
    it. You have got to continue.

    P.s.
    What happened to the real Ron when Draco was polyjuicing
    himself as Ron?
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  • From ANON - Victoria on November 02, 2014
    Fabulous, dark story! Draco's obsession with Hermione is depraved yet a guilty pleasure to read about. You write wickedly good sex scenes.
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  • From ANON - magi on November 02, 2014
    I've been waiting for this update!
    And two at once is pretty awesome!

    Now,can you strap your muse in a chair so it'll never leave?
    Haha, just keep going, much of your readers are just excited to read a piece from you.

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  • From ANON - Aranel Anira on November 01, 2014
    I hear your outcry for reviews. Have thus one. I love this story. I like my Draco like I like my coffee, black, and with a grimace since I don't really drink coffee. Please keep writing. I hope for a ending with justice for our dark little rapist. May I beg for longer chapters?
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  • From ANON - ccha on October 25, 2014
    More please!
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  • From lexiatel on October 24, 2014
    More...! :) I love this story, hehe! I love the "Good Day" haha :)
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  • From ANON - Ariel on October 23, 2014
    The power of poly juice
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  • From ANON - magi on October 23, 2014
    Oh no...is that Malfoy or Blaise on the juice?
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