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Reviews for Past is Past, Future is Clear

By : inhibitedloveofwriting
  • From ANON - staar on October 17, 2014
    really nice start !!!! looking forward for more !!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Meiya on October 17, 2014
    Cool first chapter :) sounds like a good story so far and im looking forward to reading more :)
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  • From JuliaBlack on October 17, 2014
    Wow! Just one chapter and i'm already hooked! Can't wait for the next chapter! Alas, I don't have time to be a beta right now (I would have liked to, but I've got an already strangled schedule), but I wanted to signal a little mistake in the last part of the first letter, it's clear conscience, not conscious (http://www.vocabulary.com/articles/chooseyourwords/conscious-conscience/) ^^'
    It's wery well written so far :)
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  • From ANON - snape_lust on October 16, 2014
    it's an interesting start and I look forward to see where you take this.
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  • From ladyedgecombe on October 16, 2014
    I's a nice beginning, and I must say that if that was un-beta-ed, it was great. I look forward to seeing more. It seems that new stories are much less frequent than they used to be. Thanks for writing!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on October 16, 2014
    Looks like a good one! How can a story get removed unless it goes beyond its code like "M" or "K" or whatever? I'm putting my faith in you to finish the story. Nothing worse than being left hanging and wondering by an unfinished story.
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