Reviews for Ghost MagicBy : Sealpotter |
Well, that was short... Just something that sometimes irks me but I do it anyway, there are too many Harry-sleeping scenes and the more you use those scenes as a sweet scene, the more monotonous it is to read. Just saying. (And I enjoyed this immensely, don't get me wrong)
holly shit that was hot.......man o man can;t get over that !!!! they really brouth harry back can't wait for the next one !!!!!! thanks for the update !!:):):)
Nice chapter. That was a great way to bring Harry back from the dark side, so cant wait for the epilogue.
Now that is the way to come out of a fugue state! nice!
beautiful and i cant wait for more :)
I've only made it to chapter 7 so far. However, the story seems pretty boring. Where's the drama? Conflict? Adventure? Everyone just stands around and talks about their feelings. This is fine for a chapter or two, then it gets boring. Aren't your characters going to do anything?
Poor Harry, but the good thing is that he no longer has to ever be alone again, please update chapter 11 soon.
*Pets Harry* Poor baby
Welcome back
Good chapter, I so hope those two can help poor Harry to recover and fix him.
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