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Reviews for Mask of darkness and the real prophecy

By : looonylei
  • From ANON - Katsplay on January 12, 2017

    Omg you have got to finish this.  What is the prophecy?  Who is potters family?  What twin? Is it hermione?  A uggggh finish please.


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  • From ANON - Anon on February 09, 2015
    You need help with spelling and tenses guessing English might not be your first language but this story has promise :)
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  • From ANON - staar on February 09, 2015
    Wow I wonder what the phinox let Harry see !!!!!! so good, now I really can't wait for more !!!!!!!! Thanks for this and please update soon again !!
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  • From ANON - staar on January 16, 2015
    Wow are you ever going to update this one again !!!! pls. do !!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - staar on December 08, 2014
    well that was good !!!! more please !!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on December 07, 2014
    I noticed the voting and thought I'd give a few thoughts on that because you might be confused because your feedback was good. You have a good mix of both dialogue and action. The story progresses well though you could develop some things a little more (that Seamus relationship seemed to start and stop out of nowhere). However the biggest problem is the grammar. The structure of your sentences is awkward and interferes with the flow of your story. A beta can do a lot to help in this area so please do keep writing but don't be to discouraged about your rating. That will improve with a beta.
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  • From ANON - Meiya on December 07, 2014
    Well Draco knows now how harry feels haha poor boys. Loved the chapter!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on December 07, 2014
    Chapters 1 & 2: Hmmm off to a good start.
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  • From ANON - staar on November 25, 2014
    Nice start !!!! hope to see more soon !!!!!
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  • From ANON - Meiya on November 24, 2014
    Awesome start to this story! Im hooked cant wait for more! :D
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