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Reviews for The Hogsmeade Camera Club

By : Dazzlious
  • From JadedFate on February 08, 2017

    Well, the story had some cute parts, but I don't feel that Severus was portrayed quite right. And also how it went so fast to them suddenly being engaged? That just came from nowhere, and totally didn't fit. It was like the story was wrapped up much too quickly. I would have liked for them to be together longer, maybe discuss their hidden feelings for each other during school. And Severus calling her ,love, just doesn't fit. He might call her that in privacy, but showing that kind of emotion publicly is so far from his character. This story definitely needs more development.


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  • From ANON - SL on December 29, 2014
    This is quite an interesting and refreshing story: quite different from many others.

    I wonder if the concept of "photography club with artistic/erotic focus" is your original idea, or is somewhat based off some real world examples.

    Lastly, I wish the Lucius subplot could either be removed or further developed. As it is, I feel it is an incomplete subplot. For example, Lucius might try to get Hermione and Severus to his rose garden, of which they might reject violently, reject with some understanding, or embrace the idea.
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  • From ANON - sherlocked17 on December 26, 2014
    Chapter4. Oh well, shame. I really liked the camera club voyeurism thing. You could have gone so much more naughty with it. But it's your story you tell it where it takes you....
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  • From ANON - sherlocked17 on December 26, 2014
    The Lucius thing is such a turn on. Snape not my cup of tea....
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  • From ANON - sherlocked17 on December 25, 2014
    Chapter 1: Hilariously funny!!! Me. Fenwick I can picture him. A Victorian era 'no sex please were British' type of blushing gentleman....
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  • From ANON - pickles on December 25, 2014
    Thank you for an awesome story. Hopefully you will do a 3 chapter sequel. especially with luc reaction
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  • From ANON - Topaz on December 21, 2014
    An unexpected scenario for Miss Granger. Possibilities for the future abound. I can't wait for what direction you take.
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  • From ANON - pickles on December 19, 2014
    great 2 chapters
    but i think sev is in over his head... i bet he did something that he shouldn't have done
    maybe luc was there taking silent photos especially in the bedroom
    hopefully he will only bruise her heart and not break it
    waiting for more
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on December 19, 2014
    What a great night for them! Thank you. I only hope he was distracted and not disinterested. It seemed he had fun, so I hope he doesn't plan to break her heart. Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Nancy on December 13, 2014
    I am really enjoying this story. I like the slow buildup, very sensual and realistic seeming. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Nancy on December 13, 2014
    I am really enjoying this story. I like the slow buildup, very sensual and realistic seeming. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From Rosajean on December 12, 2014
    Quite an interesting read so far. I wish you had gone into more detail on what actually happened during the shoot instead of skimming over the sessions since there was such a build up to it. Lucius doesn't seem to be respecting the bounds that she or the club has put into place, but then again he's used to getting what he wants and not respecting what others say so I guess that's not too surprising. Kinda hoping he gets put in his place. At any rate, I'm eager to see more interaction between Severus and Hermione.
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  • From ANON - Naughty_megs on December 10, 2014
    Great addition to the story keep it up! I can't wait to see where this goes!
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  • From Hermione on November 30, 2014
    After reading this first chapter, let me say that I'm, well, 'interested'. As Hermione, I can definately see myself being 'there', turned on, posing, slowly disrobing, so as to 'turn on' the photographers! I can also see myself being held in a romantic pose for them. I'd definately want to turn them on. I can see me asking them for a more 'long term' arrangement with one of them, as their girlfriend, or spouse. I may as well make it worth my while! One of them - a Wizard OR Witch, may 'want' me on a more permanent basis, which I'd be aiming for! This may be what Hermione is looking for? I know I would.

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  • From ANON - vaila on November 30, 2014
    This story seems very very promising so I hope it won't be abandoned as other stories.
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