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Reviews for Harry Potter: Amoral and Amorous

By : MathiasBlue
  • From ANON - DobbyDobbs on December 20, 2014
    Glad that there are at least going to be some consensual chapters in this story as well. ^_^
    Although Ginny pretty much bound herself to Harry, I'll take what I can get lol.

    I really, really hope you will write the Harry/Molly one.

    Keep updating please.
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  • From ANON - red demon on December 19, 2014
    Not bad. I liked it, but Ginny did seem a bit experienced. She gave Harry a lot of orders for a person who now belongs to Harry, especially about swallowing his seed. He might have ignored it now, but he might have to remind her who the boss is later. He can always order her to swallow.
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  • From ANON - Pingu on December 19, 2014
    I like your Ginny
    Will Harry get anyone pregnant?
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  • From ANON - Sp0rkG0d on December 17, 2014
    Hello,
    I actually think that the beginning of 3rd year might not be the worst time to start this as 2nd year gives him alot of reason to hold a grudge against almost anyone in the school with so many people believing the rumor about the him being the Heir of Slytherin. Other then that all I don't have much that's actually useful to say beyond the fact that I hope to see more.

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  • From ANON - Dquinnicus on December 16, 2014
    Yo, for straight up smut, third year isn't the best, but on the other hand Harry doesn't really have any negative public opinion at this point, which would make it easier to form alliances and get to know some girls in other houses, like Susan Bones and Hannah Abbot in Hufflepuff and Mandy Brocklehurst and Luna Lovegood in Ravenclaw. If he becomes closer to them in third year, maybe by starting and leading a study group, they'll be easier to coerce and influence later either to get in their panties or to gain help they or those connected to them can offer (i.e. Susan's aunt Amelia would be useful during fifth year). I guess what I'm trying to say is don't completely forsake plot in favor of smut.

    Keep up the good work!
    DQuinnicus
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  • From Proudboar on December 16, 2014
    Eh, weren't there a ton of people who were afraid of him or something in Year 2? Maybe go with something based off of that.

    Or maybe continue in the vein of Slytherins for this year, since they're just always plain nasty to him. just because it's not mentioned in the books doesn't mean it hasn't happened. Hell, I think there's a pair of Slytherin twins named Carrow the year above him, who basically have no background to them. Maybe they take a bit of inspiration from the most famous twins in hogwarts and prank/bully the other Houses.

    I their names are...Floraa and Hestia? They were in the movies, and attended Slug Club.

    just a thought/idea if you need one.
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  • From ANON - red demon on December 15, 2014
    Great chapter. Third year might be a bit to early but you have set the stage for fourth year which looks like where the action will be. Since Harry will probably be making use of Pansy for the rest of the year I'm not sure which other girl you could fit in. Right now Harry is only going after girls that piss him off though this will probably make him pay more attention to girls he cares about like Hermione. I can't wait to see who is next.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2014
    Considering the whole "the Heir of Slytherin" thing, Harry might actually reason for a revenge of the majority of the females in Hogwarts.
    And I am really looking forward to the Firebolt incident: manipulative Harry vs guilty Hermione.
    Anyway, this is a good beginning of the story. Thanks.

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  • From ANON - sasha1213 on December 12, 2014
    Thank you! Very hot story and after reading the part about Harry/Petunia I actually became quite interested in this pairing. Though I can't help but think that if Petunia became pregnant it'd be even hotter. I guess I'm weird)
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  • From Pete91888 on December 11, 2014
    I'm very happy to see you in this fandom as well. The story is great and I can't wait to see what you do with Pansy also I hope you can update this in tandem with your naruto fic.
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  • From ANON - red demon on December 11, 2014
    Great update. Harry is learning the power of bluffing. Owning Petunia might make Harry's future summers easier. I can't wait for the Harry/Pansy.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2014
    Very well done, a little off on the technology, but very well done. I. Ant wait for the next.
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  • From ANON - red demon on December 09, 2014
    Alright another update. You got me wondering who the next girl will be. I'm thinking Pansy. With Harry sneaking about I hope he remembers his invisibility cloak and with Tom's memories Harry should have access to the Knight's Bus.
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  • From ANON - afan on December 09, 2014
    really loving the story Hope you put bellatrix in.

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  • From ANON - red demon on December 07, 2014
    I loved it. It's to early to say much more, but I can't help wonder which girls will end up in Harry's grasp. I almost can't wait for Harry to get back to Hogwarts.
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