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From ANON - Mc111 on June 01, 2015
Love this! This chapter made me so hot! Love the roller coaster ride you are taking us on! Following this story on FF for updates but reading it here.
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From ANON - m0nt on May 28, 2015
this is f'ed up. I love it! Voldemort v. Voldemort. Or rather Dracula v. Marvalo. Now thats a twist I did not see coming.
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From KatWilson on May 28, 2015
Well, holy shit! :D
Things are getting complicated.
Greyson? I wonder what is all that about.
And Viscal's part of the story, hmmm, has anything to do with that?
Can't wait for next chapter. Tyt and do it as good as always! ;)
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From Sherlocked1971 on May 28, 2015
Beautifully paced, intricate story line.

Poor Draco.

You had me cheering when you updated.

Curious what the deleted chapter looked like.

Ooooh feeling a lot of tension in Voldemort, is Hermione pushing it?
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From ANON - Anon on May 27, 2015
Omg I did not see that one coming, great twist Btw and hugs and keep iup the good work
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From Oceangirl87 on May 11, 2015
Holy sexy hell. This is fantastic. I can't wait for more.
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From ANON - m0nt on May 08, 2015
bow chicka wow wooow! lol! hot lemon!
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From ANON - Ann on May 08, 2015
Omg! That was fucking hot! Another great chapter, can't wait to read more!!!!
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From Sherlocked1971 on May 07, 2015
I squealed when I saw your update. And yes have been checking ever day for your update.I had to wait as I wanted to read it in peace. I'm free this week and my husband left for work. So....

This chapter OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!

And you're telling us no more lemons like this one, are you insane!!!

Ginny!!!! I feel sorry for her (not really).

Hermione is so deliciously fucked, literally. Can we have Voldemort pleasure her in public without anyone knowing, like he did when she killed the professor? Or rather Lucius might notice?

Forgive my fangirlish behavior...I adore and love other stories on AFF, but this one is somewhere up there on its own....

Oh I'm turning into mush...

Ich liebe deine story es ist einfach geil! (No mistakes hopefully)
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From ANON - Avaine on May 06, 2015
Another Great Chapter!
The Lemon was great in a weird what can you expect from a dark lord kind of way!
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From ANON - Relatela on April 28, 2015
I hope you're enjoying (or enjoyed) your time with your parents! Looking forward to an update once you get back and settled :). Very interested in seeing how this relationship goes. A lot of the time when reading Tomione/Volmione I have to stop reading partway through because Tom/Voldemort has gotten too nice or too out of character. You and Nerys seem to be the most consistent at keeping him evil and thus keeping me reading :).
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From ANON - m0nt on April 22, 2015
This story has become a classic for me. I keep re-reading your work. Its amazing! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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From ANON - Tori on April 12, 2015
"No proceeding is better than that which you have concealed from the enemy until the time you have executed it."
...all men are bad and ever ready to display their vicious nature and all women are sneaky whenever they may find occasion for it, for everyone sees what you appear to be, very few really know what you are. Because The lion cannot protect itself from snares without its claws damaging the snare, and the snare cannot defend himself from the lion unless it wraps itself away from the claws. So one must therefore be a careful hunter to recognise snares, and a lion to sharpen its claws to carefully point the snare to frighten wolves instead.
"Nothing is of greater importance in time of war than in knowing how to make the best use of a fair opportunity when it is offered."

First I must say bravo for through out this entire ride this fiction has turned me into a fan but then again you know this. What you don't know is throughout this entire works it has evolved, and is no longer a fanfiction but a work of original art. And to that I say bravo You have evolved the characters past there status Quo, and have given them shape all on there own. First I must state that before I begin my humble review and rambling, I must first explain what this chapter inspired first. Genetics. Yes this had me thinking and often breaking down the magical world genetics, and it had me going back to the beginning. Purebloods, Halfbloods, Muggleborns, and Squibs. I found myself thinking and even reading your fanfiction and going back to reading Harry Potter. and I found the Magical community of the Brits backward, I don't know about other magical communities, but from what I see there still in the dark ages, slowly touching there feet into the muggle way, like the radio, and other items.

Ok back to genetics, let's start at the top Adam(Pureblood), Eve(Pureblood), and Lillith(muggle) for example. Adam and Eve are purebloods, and have a pure blood Lyra, then Adam and Lillith have a child, That child Ezei is a half blood. Now the Pureblood Lyra because her parents were the first is superior because they were first and have discovered magic first however her magic is averge, because her parents are both magic welders. Ezei has magic stronger than Lyra, due to the fact his magic able to have a conduit to gather within the host parent Lilith and store. My point being is that over time with adam and eve creating children and those children continue to reproduce down the line, there gonna eventually have higher squib births because the magic isn't going anywhere and becomes dormant because it has no place to grow and seed. Now let's say a Squib Hamya marries someone from Lyras Line and there a male name Jezi, And they have a child name Merlin, the Squib gave birth to a magical being and in return the gene that was dormant is now active, like a first year. And so the process is repeated till we have muggles, muggleborns, Squibs, Halfbloods, and purebloods, history lesson aside, having a dormant gene that could be activated to give birth to stronger childrens, and Squibs, Halfbloods and muggleborns are at the center of it, because without them purebloods would die out. They may have started it but they need the rest to continue it. Which is brings me to a point, hermione ( Btw thanks for the spelling in your fiction) is the result of two muggles some where in her family history must have been a squib from the the Pureblood 28 that married another squib, then that created a muggle squib, or that squib married a muggle and either form her father side she was the result.

If so Muggleborns are now a worthy conduit, because a muggleborn can circle magic and conduit it, just like a halfblood. And now we get to the reason Dumbbles was scared of Voldiemort, and maybe even hermione, but she was a chess peice he could use, and even if you look at Tonks again magically good. There might be something worthy there in looking at Hermione father and ancestor, and that is all I have to say about the comment form Voldie about her last name being Granger. (Heck she might be from a purblood family.) now I must as always say thank you, for the wonderful chapter, I love the new characters and I love the almost cat fight I love Cissy but I love your new character more. I love new harry, and I love his evolution an I can't wait to see what happens to draco. and I can't wait to see what happens when you remove a hocrux and put it in Luicus. And Finally does Voldie have a plan for Hermione after he removes hers, I mean come on, he can't resist her, he's fallen hard he's like adam and she's his eve. he can fight it all he want. Does he plan to make her immortal too, does he plan to make her create a Hocrux? And 20 chapters seriously! you told us that how could you tell us I like Surprises!, and Lol. With much Love I want to say thank you so much, for everything. Your story is amazing. I must confess I forgot to give you a poem, and I will redouble my efforts next review. *Bows Low* Thank you as always

Your humble Tori

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From Sherlocked1971 on April 05, 2015
Ach du meine Liebe, das war wieder unglaublich geil. (I live near the German border)
(geil in Dutch means something else but fits it rather nicely)

Ginny, oh my god in public, poor, poor girl. (not really though...) Rabastan is so bad to the core.

Voldemort will have our favorite heroine for diner. But secretly I hope he falls for her. One can wish, huh?

A bit more descriptive (lemons) could have been nice. Can we still have the chemistry and anticipation. Maybe when they are in public. Some lust fill glares and heat. Make Hermione do naughty things.

Where is this headed, was this a prelude into more evilness?
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From ANON - Tori on March 29, 2015
I lit a professor
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