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From KatWilson on March 27, 2015
So, yeah.
Finally I managed to gather up my lazy-ass self and said to myself "If I'm reading it for the past few months, I can also sign up and leave a review, it's only fair."

I mean, you know, and everyone knows your story is just-fucking-awesome. I mean there is nothing to add here. The tension, the storytelling, just... well, I'm speechless. I really don't know what to say other than SHITLOAD OF AWESOME.

I LOVE VOLDIE IN HERE. SO IN-CHARACTER. Damn, you wrote him better than JKR. Just the way I imagined him to be. Damn, girl!
If you ever write a book of your own - AND YOU SHOULD - please, link it to me. I would love to read it. Or review it. Or anything. Especially if you will be adding such deliciously wicked characters in it. With that writing style you have. (As an author myself, I appreciate the way you write, your storytelling, all of it. So readable and so intriuging it leaves you hanging. When the chapter ends I'm like: damn, can't wait for the new one! And then I check everyday. *crazy*)

So, anyhow. Good luck on your trip. And don't be afraid of plane crashing. There is more chances (statistically) for the car accident on the way to airport. (Just to make you feel better).

Be well, good luck, keep doing what you do, what you love to do. This fanfic you write is without a doubt making life more entertaining for many people, not just me. :)
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From ANON - Ann on March 26, 2015
Just wanted to say I LOVE this story and your writing!!!!!!!! Can't wait till the next update!!!
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From ANON - Ice Empress on March 25, 2015
Naughty, naughty. You see you had me slowly and systematically strangling and torturing the lovely Cara and raging at Hermione for her weakness. But now everything is perfect, I love how Cara is able to seamlessly fit into Hermione's life like a perfect big sister suffering from the same addiction to a powerful man she technically can have but is only barely fighting it. I know Cara isn't the type to fall to weakness but Lucius is a unique Achilles Heel. As for Hermione she is blossoming under Harry and Cara's affections, with them being the sycophant type devoted followers who are leading her ever so gently down the road towards acceptance in the world she lives in ruled by the emotionally crippled damn near bipolar man she loves. I'm enjoying the Tiger and Cat game with Hermione and Voldemort. She is finally playing correctly and learning to seductively demand and persuade rather than screaming and breaking down. Please be safe on your trip and have a good visit. I can't wait for the next update in a month.
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From Sherlocked1971 on March 24, 2015
Yes writing van be therapeutic, as much as reading can be. I had a hellish day today, then stumbling on your update of no lees than two chapters. Bliss. Thanks.....

Have a good month... Will miss your update.

Wil. Be writing my own stuff to alleviate... As it is therapeutic....

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From thexdarkxlady on March 24, 2015
Two chapters, you're spoiling us :) Very sad news from France but I really wouldn't worry, as they're saying on the news one of those planes takes off every 2 seconds. Only one has had an issue.

Enjoy your holiday and we look forward to your return and another update.
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From ANON - Tori on March 22, 2015
The superb case of Villainy
Silly Bella, tricks are for kids, you'll come out when you've learned your lessons. I wanted you to know it took me a week to review and as much dissecting as to understand the manner of the chapter you wrote, Emotions was well chosen name for the chapter. To put it mildly Life Sucks and shit happens ya move on because life gives you lemons so use as much lemons as you can to make Lemonade(The Hocrux is such a lemon). But before I begin my ramble I wanted to say there was as much heart and profound emotion in this chapter for me. In 2009 my father died of cancer (the only difference is you can cage Bella not cancer.) I read the laster chapter and this one together and all I remember was the feeling, the anger, the welling of sadness, and the confusion of why and how. There is a measure of lowness hermine is feeling, of regret that you can sympathize with. That Voldemort saw the need for her to see a mindhealer is a wonderful foresight because when your that low all you think about is sinking even lower.

Its like a sickness that slinks inside and grows, blending all emotions till there one seamless line, where one doesn't begin and the other ends and when you pull on one its all rage and sorrow and happiness. But the superb case of Villiany is what happens to people who cannot defend themselves of evil when it renders chaos and order and blends them seamlessly as Voldermort has and that he has taken all the key players and reminded them even herm and harry that he has shattered there view of what was and gives them what is, a world that is ruled by power. You Yearn to tell us but you gain satisfaction from us gleaming from your words, of how The King of Order will create his queen of chaos and his model soldiers. Voldimort offers order and his clean way of doing something because he has power and when others start to oppose him they will learn why they are guilty and why there end justifies the means of there end (by his means.).

Dear writer I'm guilty
I have been dismissed from my emotions
cleaned and rinsed from sanity
heart bleeding and with a sugar high I digress

The Tori

P.S Can I have some more Drugs please* Chackles* some more, longer chapters? Please I'll capture some more plot bunnies, I'll even feed them
P.S.S (Been watching too much Reboot if you never seen it you must Hexademial is Bella and megabyte is Voldemort, and bob is harry. Just watch it its really good)
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From ANON - m0nt on March 18, 2015
I am so sorry that I didn't review last weeks chapter. I've read both chapters today and its amazing!
First, I didn't know Hermione's parents are still alive (maybe I had missed that info in the earlier chapters), I knew Bellatrix would do something personal to her parents but to kill them? Voldemort had the right to be mighty pissed. All those missed opportunities are gone now since Hermione's Mum is dead and her dad is a vegetable. But even I can sympathise with Hermione not wanting to pull the plug on a parent. No one is that strong. Everyone has a weakness.
Second, Intense jealousy is what I felt when I read your latest chapter. Cara Pare - is she the new Bellatrix? Because lets face it- Voldemort wouldn't want someone with great power and influence be able gain more authority than him. He does not like to be challenged, even by a baby. She has to be weak. Cheating makes me uncomfortable, I don't like reading about it and I know from your other fanfic "New Colors of Life" that you're not shy about taking Voldemort there, because his personality does scream he is likely to cheat to gain something. Reminds me of House of Cards.
I like when I'm reading a pov that I'm completely immersed in a characters life. I don't have any clues what Voldemort will do next. He has Hermione all alone. Harry doesn't count as a companion - he's drugged out of his mind. I feel like that only thing that would make Hermione regret having Voldemorts horcux would be because Volde caused the apocalypse. I don't really know to be honest. But thats how I feel it would take to cause regret. lol.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
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From Sherlocked1971 on March 17, 2015
This shouldn't be possible.... The amount of in dept philosophy you pour into your story, amazing!! (Craig moment don't know if you have ever seen Strictly Come Dancing on the BBC)

And again painfull,
I'm not only hungry for more , literally starving. Maybe re-reading should do it....

Okay gathered my breath...
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From ANON - Tori on March 14, 2015
If there ever was a drug I could take it would be "Two steps from hell"because this story leaves me giggling madly like Ah-bella. Your one of those authors, that have me reading and rereading the story more than once because its like omg I missed that, or wait I have to go back two chapters to read it again. Do you know what is so unique about your story, your able to grasp the concept of the characters and broaden them even more. Take harry potter I can read the story more often and there's always this level that I feel J.Krowling never reached. Yes he was a poster child for Dummbles, but lets face it he grows here, he excells here. we see the ebb and flow and like it! Now now we get to the nit and grit, the bulk of the story, we who know these characters and have seen there progression throughout will find that all good things only get better from here. Oh how I applauded myself when I figured out, no when I saw the signs of insanity reach its peak and overwelm bella with glee forgetting herself and the rules, Good old bella crosses the line and oh what a line it was. Oh Voldie woe is thee has thou forgotten women are from venus and men are from mars. But you my dear have never forgotten it you know how crazy we are, you know us better and thats what makes this so good. You know something we see a touch of it in herminone. Oh it was kiddie stuff, a centur on Delores, a sneak on Edgecombe, a fire on snape. We have the evidence to see her grow so much but here, we see her climbing the mountain, we see her learning to become a spell mistress, we see her growing in her sexuilaty, we see the closeness between harry and herm return in full force stronger than ever, we see greatness on the horizen. And Voldie, the great and strong and mindful, has no idea the hell he has unleashed. His Greatest flaw, is his arrogance, his power, his ego, but again so is Herm, which we have seen but let us hope she cultivates and learns were her man will forever remain full of himself. (Which we Love.) So I guess your wondering why I review eh, its because of you, the way you empower your words into your story (BTW I read your others and omg your amazing just don't leave us ok like others have unfinished.) As for a break Tch take all the time you need (I can't go through withdraw its not fun) were here we are hooked, stand tall mighty writer, I'm reading.

With cackling madness
my insanity is pleased
Hug the writer (Cackling)
The Tori
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From ANON - Ice Empress on March 12, 2015
I am trilled with the progress. Hermione is constantly being hit hard and fast. First Ginny {she's so passionate that I'm sure some of the black market dealers will be rough but some will be people who take pleasure at making her want to give into her desires which is a lovely case of cognitive dissonance}, then George's release at Harry's hands and being labeled the fame lover before seeing her dead and mentally imploded parents. I'm sure that brings back memories of how she "slipped" and killed her teacher. It was only an accident after all. I'm happy she still has Harry and that Voldemort needs a new tactic since Bella overstepped her boundaries. I can't wait to see her punishment. If he allows Hermione to punish her she will fall deeper in love with him, while the fans of hate and regret rage throughout her mind and soul, I know I would. She's a vicious and violent creature and doesn't hesitate when she's upset. I doubt she would have nightmares after torturing Bella because its tit for tat and she really hates that black haired/in love with her Lord insane bitch. I can't wait for the next update. You are keeping me anchored with this delightful trilogy.
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From Sherlocked1971 on March 12, 2015
I meant Voldemort not wanting to hurt her...
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From Sherlocked1971 on March 12, 2015
Painful to Read doesn't mean I don't accept this reality. I love how Hermione is slowly brain fucked by Voldemort.
You write in a complex, but realistic way ax far as this world is concerned, it is amazing to follow. You keep up the evilness and don't steer away from ugliness and self preservation.

Voldemort wanting to hurt his little Mudblood and surprising himself by it.

Please let Ginny experience some pureblood upbringing, please wanna see her initiation into the Rabastan wicked household.

Oh my I so enjoy all the nastiness.....
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From ANON - Relatela on March 06, 2015
Ooh I want to know whathe said!!! Such a long chapter and I still can't wait for more :)
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From ANON - Kelli on March 06, 2015
Wow! That was quite the ride. I love this story. Each chapter gets better and better. loved how you switched POVs of each character so we get a glimpse of their thoughts. That was quite the shock when we learn George's plan to kill everyone. Voldemort was especially masterful in this chapter as he directs the show and manipulates everyone. I love how you portray him. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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From ANON - M0nt on March 06, 2015
omg! omg! omg!
Amazing trial! Did not expect it to be like this, I thought it would probably be about a couple of paragraphs. Happily surprised! I am a Law grad and I love scandalous trials like this! You've literally played out one of my greatest desire... Umbridge crucio'd - multiple times. It was an amazing feeling.
My heart went out for Ginny and George - to live in a situation like this? I would go mad. Harry was funny and Hermione is right, this is a new Harry. I worry for him. Draco needs to grow up; I feel like he is the only character here that probably has nothing to do and its left him...not exactually child-ish, but you can see he hasn't matured yet.
Bellatrix is still a jealous nut-case. I can't wait to see what happens to her when she executes her plans for Hermione.
Hermiones testimony was truly delicious. I wanted more questions and more answers, like a diabetic needs cake.
If this keeps getting more delicious than I'm afraid I may turn out be like DrugHead Harry.
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