Click Here!

Reviews for Two Steps From Hell

By : Ssserpensssotia
  • From ANON - Tori on March 06, 2015
    Ok ok through out this entire show we have seen heroine reacting, the only time she acted was during the first part of the show was when she stepped I front of Harry. That being said I feel we haven't seen her sly side emerge, I mean she has a piece of Tom soul . But let's be honest here can give as good as she gets and I think if I know what Bella intends to do in killing her family will anger the dark lord but push here over the edge, to act, and let's face it she should have been a snake, or a claw but I agree she's a Griffey because she's brazen and brash. Now with that in mine I ask you now that you have broken her when will we see her built up. And will she sit beside Tom or will she be a force rising from the ashes. What you have done to Harry I can't wait to see him, you have done a master piece with him, and I think he might be better than Bella. You know something I like Bella a lot and some people her well and others write her ok, I haven't seen much to give judgement on but I sit in wait. I love Lucius and what you done to him and I wanted to say he's been done wonderfully I applude you on it. I can't wait to see what you do to the Wesley clan, I'm sorry but I hate those blood traitors but I love bill and fleur. At first the writing style bothered me chapters too short lines not long enough and there lacked paragraphs. Then I forget I write the same way and I couldn't have fault you any more than me. With that being said, a story is a means to convey an idea with characters, plot, and many more. Therefore to end I must conclude I have fallen in love with this story, and you continue on and thank you so much for your creative mind.

    The tori is chirping good tidings...

    Report Review

  • From Sherlocked1971 on March 06, 2015
    That was rather painful to read....

    The tribunal was bad really awful. But in this world it would go like this...

    Oh gosh what has Tom planned. He has to keep Hermione close please tell me he will.

    Cannot wait what you have in store for poor Ginny. (smirks evilly) oh and please some descriptive Lucius wickedness....
    Report Review

  • From ANON - m0nt on March 03, 2015
    This is my new obsession.
    I will be honest with you, when I read the first chapter it did not grab my attention. That was when this story was named "I, Horcrux." I started reading this yesterday and I fell in love with this story. I like Voldemort true to his character and I love Hermione strong; because to me that's how I would picture them reacting in this type of situation. Not some head over heels, lovey-dovey puppy love that most fanfic authors (apart from Nerys, SerpentInRed and LadyMiya) seem to portray them as. I'm truly excited with what is going to happen with Ginny! I'm not a big Weasley fan, Molly Weasley gets on my nerves and Ron's insecurities would have been his downfall in the original series had it not been for Harry and Hermione.
    I look forward for the next chapter.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anggea on March 01, 2015
    Oh... Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Squee!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Ice Empress on March 01, 2015
    Its mere euphoria. The psychological manipulation and the fact Hermione is opening her eyes to the pain that her friends are being placed into while still reveling in the fact Voldemort hasn't hurt her that much. When will she see this is nothing more than a warm up for the punishments she will endure at his hands? The sex and violence is mind blowing in a way that makes you say "Hit me baby one more time", because you know they are both close to the edge. But Hermione will fall and shatter first and I cant wait to hear the trial. Evil despot, Delores really?! By my deviant mind to your talented fingers I am on the edge of my chair.
    Report Review

  • From Sherlocked1971 on March 01, 2015
    Ow perfect, let Lucius have Ginny and be her guardian. As the Weasley's have such bad parental guidance skills.
    (I'm evil right?)Provide us with as many details as possible. No, no, not perverted in any way , me nooooh.

    Besides the prostitute can never be blamed or persecuted in my opinion, it should be the one who exchanged money for her pleasures, she is not of age anyway.

    Please not Umbridge.....

    Hermione is hooked line and sinker, Voldemort rules her now even when she thinks that she can say as she pleases when in private. It's a farce not?!....

    Love the story keep it up!

    Ps (maybe an outtake regarding a very naught or evil Lucius and Ginny, pretty please??? Pouting...) or I will be forced to write it myself... (no blackmail, just saying, you know well I need it) ok forgive me pressuring you....
    Report Review

  • From Sherlocked1971 on February 27, 2015
    Seeing stars.

    Poor Harry.

    Hermione is one sick twisted girl. Love it...
    Report Review

  • From thexdarkxlady on February 25, 2015
    I also love Voldemort in this, and Hermione. He's so hot. I love his outfits. I'm kinda sad he isn't real :/
    Report Review

  • From thexdarkxlady on February 25, 2015
    I love you. That is all!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Ice Empress on February 25, 2015
    Outstandingly Exceeds Expectations! I was so hoping he stabbed her but that can wait. Physical pain is meaningless when your are psychologically, sexually, mentally manipulating a person in such a bold and subtle manner. Hermione is so precious. She hates the creature yet when she killed it she was horrified. I suppose it is in her nature just to seek revenge and scar someone, not kill them. That was a stroke of genius and so was the deliciously dirty strokes Marvolo heaped upon her throughout the blissful chapter. Even the chosen ones have to be broken. I cant wait for Horcrux Mine.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kelli on February 24, 2015
    Wow, what a chapter. I loved the bits with Voldemort and Hermione, but I am really liking the parts with Lucius and I'm curios as to what will happen with Harry. It just goes to show there are many ways to destroy someone as it's being done with Harry and the Weasleys. I can't wait for the next installment.
    Report Review

  • From Sherlocked1971 on February 24, 2015
    Ooooh, fuck!
    I literally squealed when I saw you posted the next installment. I was preparing diner, I had the chapter for dessert and yes it was sweet, like chocolate with chili peppers, yes twisted I know.
    You did not disappoint me at all Hermione killing that bitch while Voldemort(I cannot stand Marvolo, sorry)fucked her from behind. I loved it, I'm surpassing myself for liking this. I will reread and reread this fic.
    Don't you dare take it down ever.

    Okay enough, let's move to part III.

    Catching my breath now......



    Report Review

  • From ANON - Relatela on February 24, 2015
    Damn. Can't wait to see what he has in store for Hermione in the next part!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kelli on February 20, 2015
    Great chapter! My favorite part was the conversation between Ron and Voldemort. You really captured how he would use Ron's insecurities against him, just like the locket horcrux attacked Ron's mind in the book.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Ice Empress on February 20, 2015
    I was fully expecting him to stab her back, but he should probably wait until she is orgasming underneath him to horrify her more. That should assist with the clarity that she's playing with fire. As for Ron, he is a moronic fool. Money is money but because he is always in the shadows and the sidekick he craves recognition. He wants things that are always and forever will be out of his league. Hermione can't be with him.because he bores her with his mediocre mentality, childish whims and behavior and the fact he is able to objectively think concepts through. Thank you for the rousing updates-with such quick efficiency- and I can't wait for the third part of the trilogy. I am craving the erotic magic you shall weave.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!