Reviews for ShiverBy : valkyrie136 |
Another capturing chapter! I'm soooo excited to see what he does and how he reacts. Does he hate her for it? Does it excite him? Does it make him fleetingly remoresful or triumphant? The Mysterious Draco Malfoy! AKxx
No!! You can't stop here!!! You have to keep going! I hate cliffy! I hate em I hate em!! stupid mean cliffy!! I want more! Soooo much more!!!
Oh wow, I can't believe how this story has progressed! Poor Hermione, your version of her is so much more human than how other people write her. I feel like all the cold shoulders and severe PTSD (not to mention extra trauma from Draco) will permanently damage her. This Draco is so dark, obsessive and I think is slowly becoming possessive and falling in love with her (as close to love her can get). I can't wait til' your next chapters, keep up the great work!!!!! :)
Woah.This is so intense. Holy chicken nuggets, what a cliff hanger! Aw man...I havnt seen an update to God's and Monsters in for eeeeeeee. You're still my fav author on here though!
Indeed what will happen?!?!?! She's staying not leaving, malfoy is going to have fun!!! I think he may actually be able to go far with her during the long holiday break! :) I can't wait until the next chapter!! These 2 chapters were fantastic!!
Thank you for the chapters and the reviews (: Calamity is an alternative ending for my Malevolence fic and Look at Me served as the alt. epilogue to my first fic (Hate and Love). That's who Octavia is (my OC).
Anyways! Wow you're updating like crazy, and i love it! To see one my favourite stories on the first Dramione page is so refreshing. I read like 3 fics on this site, so I love seeing a fic that I read on the firstpage with frequent updates. Gosh, Hermione is just so damaged by the war and her PTSD(?). I think you're portreying the situation very well, and feel like Draco's cordial attitude toward her only speaks volumes of the anger within him. It's like he's boiling beneath his cool composure, and I'm dying to read what happens when he explodes (: But I feel like that isn't his style either ... but it is! See! I can't work out your Draco, which is amazing as a reader. It has the mystery that most other fics lack (including my own!). It's a true talent. Ahhh, I'm on the edge of my seat.
Wow, I just had an image of me reading your fic almost a decade ago in class - me and my friend used print out the chapters and stick them into our notebooks haha. LadyJane days aha. There was another story of yours back then that I'm sure I read, but I might be wrong, Glad to have you back! You've been one of my alltime favourites for yearsss! and I actually find your work very inspritational. Can't wait for more 'cause I'm greedy!
AKxx
I simply love it. I'm enthralled and captured by your twisted Draco, and the vulnerable Hermione destroyed by the horrors of war and death. It's absolutely fascinating and I cannot wait for more! AKxx
OMG!!! WHAT AN AMAZING 4 CHAPTERS!!!! I feel so greedy for asking for more and more and more, BUT damnit I want more! I want more of this dark and twisted Draco and this fragile Hermione!! I can't! I can't get enough! Please update soon like before! I am in need of more of this crack of a story!! XD
I'm so pleased that you're back to writing this fic. The chapters are short, but I feel like I've read 5k words in a single chapter- each chapter serves a purpose and is full with plot and progress. I'm a little jealous that you can do that aha. AKxx
I am so glad you are back and updating this! I love your work!
Yay your back! I especially been waiting to see this one come back! Love the new stuff!
I'm not sure I totally buy the idea that Minerva would appoint Draco to teach students his own age, immediately after the war, and there's not much of an explanation as to how and why he got that position. Still, I'm a sucker for dark Draco fic, so I'm more than okay with overlooking it for the most part. I am glad to see that you're continuing the story, as I'd really like to know how they went from professor/student to married with children. I look forward to reading the next chapter!
Damn, I wish I didn't ask for an update. It's only teased me more and now I'm on the edge of my seat! AKxx
Woo! Special replies just for moi! (:
FANTASTIC CHAPTER! I can't believe this chapter has come, it was as awesome as ever, a dark, twisted Draco has always been a twist of pleasure of mine. I can't until the next chapter comes!
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