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Reviews for Catch Me if You Can

By : Sablesilverrain
  • From wherdatcomfrom on February 18, 2015
    Good job of building up the tension. I like that you didn't have them dive right into the sack.

    I think I've heard of this creature before, but I could be mistaken. Are you going to have them convey any more of the "rules"?

    On a constructive note: using ALL CAPITALS, when you want to emphasize a word, can be distracting - and that breaks the flow of the story. You might want to try italics, or just stick with the exclamation mark, as it is pretty universal. "Woah, I just saw an !, they must have really meant that."
    Just a suggestion. Otherwise, I'm gonna keep on followin'.

    Love, Anna
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  • From djaddict on February 18, 2015
    Happy sigh. Draco is so clich
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 18, 2015
    That was absolutely perfect.
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  • From ANON - staar on February 15, 2015
    So cute to see them like that !!!!!!! Thanks for the update !!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 15, 2015
    The end was really cute.
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  • From ANON - kat on February 11, 2015
    Awesome
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  • From djaddict on February 11, 2015
    I so love a Draco who spoils Harry completely.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 11, 2015
    I quite like your phoenix idea. Wonder what kind of powers she has.
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  • From ANON - staar on February 10, 2015
    Every once in a bit I love to read these that are so sweet !!!! Thanks ( you made me smile ) !!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 07, 2015
    That could be disastrous if Harry and Draco don't get each other's potions.
    I liked the progress in this chapter though.
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  • From SlythindorMalfoy on February 06, 2015
    NIIIIIIICCEEE!!!!!!!!! Loved it so far and looking forward to more. :)
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  • From jami_lee on February 04, 2015
    cool story!! can't wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - staar on February 04, 2015
    the start was really good , so hope for more soon !!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 04, 2015
    That was a really good start, looking forward to the rest.
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