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Reviews for A Vicious Tangle (Complete)

By : Tommy-Lane
  • From ANON - moodysavage on July 09, 2015
    *sigh* I just loved that. The whole dialogue where Harry was telling Draco how he likes the marks Draco leaves on him... and he likes others seeing how he effects Draco... and how he WANTS Draco... that wasn't mushy that was possessive, obsessive, and wonderfully sexy. My favorite type of confession :)
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  • From ANON - cartman on July 06, 2015
    Oh god. I nearly had a heart attack when I found out that this story was unfinished and thought it wouldn't be completed. I was practically breaking but then I saw your update dates and it has given me hope and oh dear lord, please finish this story! It's absolutely breath-taking and I can't wait to know what happens next and how Astoria is related to the story. I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - starr on July 04, 2015
    thanks for the update and can it be that it's Astoria ????????well we will ee soon !!! see ya soon
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  • From ChimaeraChan on July 04, 2015
    Wow, now that was a kiss! Many kisses, but I count them as one damn finally kiss! And it was such a tension relief. It's like, I know its a suspenseful, dark story with the terrible things from the war, and it makes my stomach twist reading about it, but I really do enjoy the happy, sexy love they have in all of it. The plot is fascinating, don't get me wrong. Just... you know... sexy cute men being sexy and cute. Ah, and the chapter before the last... heee. Salacious is a delicious word, and I don't know why I don't see it more often... Or sex on desks, for that matter. XD
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 03, 2015
    Omfg that was so hot.
    been dying for that. Love love.
    heyy what about her 2 questions?

    Sevie here Lanie
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on July 03, 2015
    oh my gosh that was hilarious! Pansy specifically describing Draco having sex with Harry and Draco's like... I'm going to go get the cookies lol Very fun to see how much Pansy was enjoying that whole conversation.

    And that next part where Draco kind of fell apart with relief when he realized that Harry still accepted him and even absolved him... that was wonderful. And the kissing... so freakin' sweet.

    You are very good at being able to add humor to alleviate tense situations and you transition and balance the two flawlessly. Most times stories will have an ansty chapter... then romance... or whatever. You mix it up wonderfully :)

    I'm guessing that Astoria will not be with her family?
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  • From ANON - starr on June 26, 2015
    wow in this one you really have Draco a little dense not knowing that he is so hooked on Harry that anyone can see it !!!!!! but good !!! Thanks for the update !!!
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  • From Severus1snape on June 26, 2015
    BLOODY HELL, tha was too hot, wrong Draco
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on June 25, 2015
    I'm still laughing over that whole trees conversation... especially when Draco asked if it was aftershave and he told Harry to keep up with the conversation because Harry had no idea what he was talking about lol. Draco's whole delivery was hilarious :)
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  • From ChimaeraChan on June 25, 2015
    OMG, you updated! Very intense, this chapter. My heart was in my throat with the poor girl trying to escape. I love the line you walked of sexy tension and just crazy suspense. I can't wait to see what happens next
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  • From ANON - starr on June 20, 2015
    New to your story so good...your not going to get Draco killed wright !!!!! who the hell is doing this... to me it can be either Pansy or Zabini >??? really good love the way Draco and Harry have been together about a year but have never talked !!!! Nice can't wait for more Thanks !!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on June 20, 2015
    oh wow... what an awesome chapter. I think Harry would rather die with Draco while trying to save him than to watch him die while trying to save him. Draco doesn't realize yet how important he is to Harry.

    That scene with the girl being pulled down the tunnel is just chilling. I love love love how it finally makes sense that someone is trying to ask Draco to save them and how they see him as a hero. Now I don't have to be terrified that the discs are going to kill Draco... just afraid of what Draco will be led to confront.

    And one thing I love about your writing style is the small details that are just so natural. It's not like 'this is what Draco is thinking' being all obvious... but you show it so well in their actions. Draco being distracted and hitting his head on the doorway (which I love and find hilarious by the way), how you show how much they have been around each other and shared experiences like when Draco talked about Harry and his hero complex and Harry blamed Draco for literally pushing him, those smiles when they are amused at each other, and those arms Harry put around Draco right before they apparated away. I find those kind of touches protective and sexy. Very awesome :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 20, 2015
    Omg he kissed him !!!!!

    Oh oh so it has to do with my theory then??

    Severus1snape
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 13, 2015
    Omg omg omg.
    so hooooooot

    Severus1snape
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  • From ANON - Sephla on June 08, 2015
    Hiya! Still here reading this so please, please..... Please!... Don't stop writing. I've been reading from the beginning but don't get much time so I selfishly spend it too read 😊. I really like where this is going and I'm looking forward to more!
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