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Reviews for Of Dragons and Jewels

By : CaptainParisStarr
  • From ANON - AnonymousTigress on May 07, 2015
    Very nice wake-up call. Uh oh. Narcissa has to be dead. Draco screaming at the paper, either she's dead or...yea, that's got to be it.
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  • From ANON - blj.14 on May 06, 2015
    Really great story so far. At first I thought Jewel and Draco were the same person. I'm glad they're not, this is more interesting. I was surprised that St. Mungos couldn't help Jewel to be totally female. Also how does her being psychic allow her to have wandless magic abilities? Also why didn't either Draco or Harry try to help Narcissa or get her to leave Lucius? I'm anxiously waiting to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - starr on May 03, 2015
    wow now he has his baby brother and his sister ? will breastfeed the baby ....is narissa going to kill herself or kill Luisuis Thanks for the update 1!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - JMWTodd on May 03, 2015
    This story gets better as it goes on. Draco having siblings is a new idea - GREAT! - your & you're are still mixed up.
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  • From djaddict on May 03, 2015
    I am a little bit confused. A few chapters back Jewel was talking to Draco about having a gender identity issue but now they are clearly talking about him as a male and no reference to him as female.
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  • From ANON - starr on May 02, 2015
    Well really good since I'm still picking myself off the floor !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!thanks !!!
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  • From djaddict on May 02, 2015
    Nice!
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  • From ANON - Kitty on May 02, 2015
    For a sex scene, that was very sweet and romantic, and I'm glad to see you write it as such; so few do these days. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Ciara_D on May 02, 2015
    I'm glad you didn't make Harry really tall or Draco really short! That happens a lot.

    Sex scenes aren't all about the sex, but the connection of the characters, what they're feeling, what the moment means or does to them and what changes or is confirmed in the relationship. If you understand that and communicate that for your characters, the rest will come. It's just schematics. Just a note, with those height differences, they won't always be able to kiss on the lips and enjoy each other at the same time!

    Glad Draco came back.
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  • From ANON - starr on May 01, 2015
    OMG that was so good !!!!! so happy they are back together and that none saw Draco around his home !!!!!!!!!! Thanks for this !!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ciara_D on April 29, 2015
    Good conversation. So, now what is Harry going to do? Or rather, Draco? :)
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  • From ANON - starr on April 29, 2015
    Shit !!! you had to do it did you !!!!!!!!!!!and you couldn't have Draco kind of let it go now !!! man what a mess it is !!! Thanks and see you soon again :):):)
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  • From ANON - JMWTodd on April 28, 2015
    I like the original twist to your story and am enjoying it. Please try to differentiate between [your]-[belonging to you] and [you're]-[a contraction of you are]
    Looking forward to the next episodes.
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  • From ANON - starr on April 28, 2015
    poor Harry hope all is well and Draco does not get mad at him !!!!!! they are brothers , that's one I didn't even think of !!!!! Thanks for the update !!!!! :):)
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  • From ANON - Ciara_D on April 28, 2015
    Hm....hurry up and write the next chapter, pretty please.

    On a more constructive note, I was a little suprised Draco just jumped and Jewel held no resentment, but perhaps that was just the spur of the moment. Can Jewel really trust Draco, just like that?

    Not that I want them to not like each other. I really, really like seeing them becoming friends! They both need some family that actually cares and isn't dead. Oh...that sounds bad. They both have Harry, to.

    Cheers!
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