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Reviews for Loyalties

By : ChimaeraChan
  • From ANON - justanotherdot on July 03, 2015
    I reviewed awakening and talked about how awesome this story was I also said it was a pwp but its not! Its got a pretty cool plot. But just happened to focused on getting those two hotties fucking. Which is awesome.
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  • From Tommy-Lane on June 17, 2015
    Oh gosh, amazing, simply amazing. I'm torn because you did such an awesome job with this and I'm sure this is one of those stories I'll keep coming back to and so very sad it's over - because seriously this story was so good. My only consolation is knowing that your going to write something new and soon (right? RIGHT?).

    Okay so first off - Harry and Lucius? Oh gosh, I was in the same boat as Harry, I think I even glared suspiciously at my computer screen for a bit until it sunk in and then I burst out laughing. How utterly perfect of those two to come together over Draco and Crazy Bellatrix. And Draco being worried because Harry was late - adorable!

    "Draco scowled, staring at his shoes. This was fucking miserable, caring all the time. And it wasn't a nice, bearable quiet caring. No, it was this loud, retarded aching caring that made Draco want to hurt people. Or maybe just slam his head into the wall really hard a couple hundred times to stop having to feel anything at all. Fucking Potter." - Honestly this line = perfection to me.

    I loved how Harry stung Draco back up and made him tell him Draco loved him, sweet and kinky - a wonderful mix indeed. And that last chapter, yes I may have been grinning the entire time like a loon. Seriously it was a bit ridiculous but the entire thing was just so sweet and cute and made me want to squish them. Plus I may be like your Harry and have this small - lets be honest, huge - thing for them either getting caught or overheard. That scene in the bathroom was amazingly hot and the end perfect (except I wanted more damn you).

    There is so much going on in the wings of this story but I loved how it all was like a pricking at the backs of their minds because they were so focused on each other. Can't wait for your next story!
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  • From ANON - starr on June 17, 2015
    So good these two !!!!! thanks for this !!!!!!!! Enjoyed very much !!
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  • From ANON - Seika on June 16, 2015
    Great ending! Excellent dirty talk, too, lol! Don't tease about an epic length drarry, I'll stalk you till you do it so get busy and let us know where you post it. There's another site I read that has easier search tools but I've bookmarked you here so keep updating on new stories. Thank you! XXOO!

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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on June 16, 2015
    The last two chapters were definitely amusing. Great story!
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on June 13, 2015
    Is Draco a stubborn git or what? Excellent update!
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  • From ANON - Seika on June 13, 2015
    Love this story. Please keep posting! I want MOAR!! Reading your other stories now too, love your style! Excellent tension buildup in chapter 4. Also first writer that has made me really like stories where drarry switch, so there's no all top/all bottom dynamic. Both strong characters, but vulnerable at the same time. Draco seems to respond most to power, so being "taken" makes sense for him, so I hope you write a story arc where Harry's insistence he "ask" for the mark puts Draco in danger forcing Harry to realize he's wrong in his assumption about Draco. Need some good ole rescue trope sex, lol! Harry saves Draco from lustful Voldie (make Vold look like Tom though, bc snake face sex makes my lady boner go bye bye). Please keep this story up, it's really my favorite and I'm excited to see what happens next!
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  • From Tommy-Lane on June 13, 2015
    Alrighty I'm all caught up and may I say wow, just...wow. There is so many things I'm enjoying about this, for a story that really doesn't have all that much plot like you said it still FEELS like it does, where I feel very invested in their relationship whereas I don't normally get in PWP's you know? Anyway this just keeps getting sexy and hotter, I love that their both rather dominate and willing to go either way, I think it fits wonderfully, and Draco's little(big) prank was awesome and ended in a seriously, amazingly hot scene. I adore how cute Harry finds angry Draco and how they keep just pushing each other. Draco's conflicting feelings feel very in character for him as does Harry's unwillingness to claim him until he admits it (and by gods Draco admit it already, you'll feel better, I promise!)

    "Something about Harry was making him crazy... Made him want to do terrible sweet things... It was an unsettling feeling, and Draco thought maybe he wouldn't let Harry blow him again if the Gryffindor was going to insist on being so romantic about it." - Loved this line, think it sums up a lot about the blonde.

    Oh and Draco's revenge on the Slytherins - brilliant! I also love Ron's resigned attitude in this, I find him rather funny. I could probably go on gushing about every little bit I like but that may end up the length of an essay so I shall cut myself sort. Just know I'm loving it and can't wait to read the last chapter (With fingers crossed for an epilogue)

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - LordGeovanni on June 12, 2015
    I really enjoyed this story until the end of the second chapter. I still read the entire third chapter, but even realizing the full concept behind it, I feel sickened.

    I enjoy Harry/Draco. Specifically Harry/Draco. I dont really like stories where Draco is the Dominate. This story had no real attempt or method for preparing me for that and the entire chapter I was sitting here with such an intense feeling of dislike that I wanted to throw up. And I am not exaggerating. I am quite happy to see that this "claiming" isnt a sole act that forces Harry to be submissive to Draco permanently, and instead is something that Harry needs to do to Draco as well, however the intense dislike and unease I had due to this chapter makes me feel as though I will never be able to enjoy this ever again.

    The immediate submissive acts of Harry, the entire chapter of Harry dealing with his situation or begging Draco, it all built up into something that I am sure wasnt the full intentions of yourself, however the story writes itself and I now wish I had never seen this story.
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  • From ANON - starr on June 10, 2015
    this just is getting hotter by the minute here !!!!!! next please !!:):)
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  • From Tommy-Lane on June 10, 2015
    Okay so I only have time to read the first chapter tonight (and might I say grrrr to my damn time restrictions) but I am utterly hooked! I love Draco in this, smart and sassy but also strong and vicious. At first I was completely pre-occupied with trying to figure out what was going on with him and his "beasts" but by the end I don't really even care if I ever find out the specifics because DAMN that was HOT and I really like how Draco doesn't even know everything about his "blood". Makes it feel like we're right along side him in it.

    I love how Harry couldn't seal the deal because of his conscious and how he tasked Draco with finding him. I seriously can't wait to read the next part and your writing it amazing. I think it's safe to say I'm quickly becoming one of your biggest fans :)
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on June 10, 2015
    That was very sweet! And sexy! Excellent update.
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  • From ANON - misssy on June 10, 2015
    when did harry cheat? i dont get what the revenge was about.
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  • From Sparrowhawk on June 10, 2015
    Fucking HOT!! Stumbled upon this just today and so glad I did! Love where this story is going and can't wait to read more ~(^_^)/~
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on June 10, 2015
    oh wow... that was awesome. Draco's revenge was inspired and I loved that whole scene in the Great Hall and when Ron tried to get Harry to stop going after Draco. Harry so didn't care about his audience lol. And I loved how Harry kept trying to get Draco to admit that he belonged to Harry but Draco just wouldn't cooperate lol. Anyway, great job :)

    Since Draco bonded with Harry, does that mean Harry does not have to bite Draco or will he still do that?
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