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Reviews for The Dove With Razor Claws

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - SP777 on July 17, 2015
    about The End...

    This definitely has potential to go further.
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on July 16, 2015
    Even with the fighting its still an `awww` story. :) The dove with claws representing love was an interesting way to describe love and I very much liked the floor stopping them from fighting.
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  • From ANON - starr on July 16, 2015
    thanks for this, loved the ending , it fit the storyline !!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 12, 2015
    How will you end this in a 5 shot story???? Too many things seem unresolved between them.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 12, 2015
    about #4...

    Damn Harry...angry much??? Is it JUST me or is Draco a glutton for punishment?
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on July 10, 2015
    Sitting and waiting on an oil change and I just laughed and laughed over this! I am so glad I was alone. I can so picture them all self righteous (though it's Draco who keeps escalating things) and that fight was hilarious... A competition to see who was stupider lol.
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  • From ANON - starr on July 09, 2015
    so because of the Dursely's Harry thinks liking boys is bad and then there goes Draco again attacking him and all hell gets loose don't know these two boys are going nuts here...Dubbles is not helping !!!!!!! thanks for the update can't wait to see what happens now after that fight !!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - starr on July 04, 2015
    yea well poor dear Draco is in his own trap !!!! will not admit it but it seams he likes Harry if that second kiss had that reaction on him !!!!!! Thanks for the update see you soon :):):)
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 03, 2015
    about #3...

    *hides in the bed listening to Harry's maniacal laughter* Dude... O_O

    Malfoy stepped closer. Harry stayed standing innocently still..
    Like a silent predator in the wild, the snake creeps upon his prey and before
    the prey has a chance to realize the danger it is in, the snake STRIKES.

    Man, this got real interesting.
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on July 03, 2015
    Oh this is good... how in the world did I miss it before? My favorite line in chapter 2? When Harry thought that Wesley thought himself funny despite all evidence to the contrary lol. And it was so funny how Draco is just so focused on bugging Harry that he was willing to tease Harry like that because it worked even though he was appalled about the kiss. And I totally like Snape in this. I liked seeing him viciously threaten Draco to leave Harry alone. It feels different when he threatens Draco than when he threatens Harry... probably because Draco deserves it lol. And apparently Snape understood more of what was going on than Draco since he warned him one last time before Draco went to confront Harry in detention. And he knew to watch for Draco too!

    That was rather sexy how Harry lured Draco into the detention room to do what he wanted... and then laughed about it lol. Very funny :)
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  • From ANON - Kain on July 02, 2015
    Chapter 3:

    -Hah and score 1 for Harry, some good ol revenge lol.

    -Good way to provoke Draco into doing something is to talk smack about his old man.

    -Draco got a taste of his own medicine this time around.
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  • From BAFan on July 02, 2015
    Ch. 3

    Argh! They both need a good shaking - or maybe a kick in the ass!
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  • From ANON - starr on June 26, 2015
    Please is Draco that dumb Harry just killed Volt and he thinks that he can beat Harry ( only with a spell) good waiting for more Thanks !!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kain on June 19, 2015
    Harry's reaction is understandable given how atrocious his relatives have been all his life. The Weasleys would be more than happy to take him in, Molly has all but adopted the boy lol.

    -Wonder what Draco is gonna do to get Harry's attention.

    -Voldy might be gone but there are still rats out and about. Just waiting for Bellatrix to rear her psychotic head in this story.
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  • From BAFan on June 18, 2015
    Ch. 1

    Whoa. This is different; at least, I can't recall any of your fics starting out with Harry rebelling like that. Of course, I don't claim to remember the plots of every one of your 300+ stories! *g* Anyway, good start and I'm eager to see where you take it.
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