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Reviews for The Dust of Water

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2015
    My god is just caught up.
    this is dark and amazing and sad and oh my... more please

    Severus1snape
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2015
    Okay. I started reading this also.
    you know I hate you for writing too many stories for me to keep up, yes? 😂

    So I need to know, how old are you, female or male? How the hell can you have time gor so many stories? Do you only write or read too? Do you have chapters written before you begin posting a story because you write so many at the same time?

    About this. I read chapter one, really liking it, but harry thinks he is 17 right? But he is really 27? And was 22 when the curse hit him?

    Severus1snape
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 30, 2015
    about #6...

    I guess the last chapter in a way felt for a minute like...you're going to open
    up a closet in an old, decrepit foreboding house...and find yourself looking at
    an image of you, with a bloody knife and manic grin.

    ...yes, that is a little left field, but it's like a scary movie, you don't want
    to look, but you can't help it. Anyway, it was just a brief feeling.

    In this chapter I'm glad he split from Ginny, I get the feeling she would have been in
    the way of...something important, not sure what.
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  • From ANON - starr on July 27, 2015
    so happy to see that he has the guts to tell Ginny no !!!!! and also that he is not going to go back to being an author .. Thanks for the update !!!!
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on July 27, 2015
    I am sooo glad that Harry made a clean break from Ginny and without massive loads of guilt. I think too much guilt would hinder him in finding out what he wants to do with his life and realizing that he is who he is now and doesn't have to apologize for it will be a very big step. And it's natural for him to not feel anything much towards Draco because that's the way it was in the past other than dislike and annoyance lol. Though Draco knowing more about his past will create an opening that will let Harry find out how Draco has changed but also give Harry someone to sound off to. Think he might tell hermione someday? Anyway... I really like how this chapter progressed the story. Harry is being straightforward and true to himself... and taking advice from hermione lol.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 19, 2015
    about #5...

    Wow, that chapter almost felt....creepy. O_o
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  • From ANON - starr on July 19, 2015
    wow this last chapter had me reading it twice cause man the old Harry was a nut case !!!!!! so full of himself and so bad....now this Harry is going to pay the price of that !!! loved it more please !!!! Thanks for the update !!!
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on July 19, 2015
    Ah what a stinker Harry was and I loved how he put it... Like being drunk and only remembering the hangover that now has all these issues to deal with. I think Harry might now be who Draco expected him to be but wasn't because of all he had done. I still think there was a catalyst that started the change.maybe all the lies from keeping his gay relationship secret and how that turned out. Draco didn't mention any of that so maybe he didn't know.I hope Harry turns everything on its ear and doesn't do what everyone expects lol. That will shock everyone with how much he's `changed `but it would actually be him trying to be himself. This is so interesting!
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  • From ANON - moon on July 16, 2015
    I like it. I love stories where people have to rebuild their lives...for some reason. :)
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  • From ANON - starr on July 13, 2015
    hopefully soon we'll find out what he has with Draco and see if some ????'s are answered !!!!! so confused is Harry bad or what or is Harry with other men !!!Thanks for the update !!!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 06, 2015
    about #3...

    Questions...questions...questions. At least we get to see at this early stage Harry finding out
    he led a double life. But now we need to know...how close were Harry & Draco.
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  • From ANON - moon on July 05, 2015
    Ah, it feels as though she expects things to go back to how they were in a very unrealistic time frame. Harry of course is going to be pretty quiet at first but soon the pressure is going to overwhelm him. From this chapter it's clear that most are going to act this way but it just doesn't make sense to me. This process will take years and he's not going to be the same person. He can't make the same decisions because he can't interact with the exact same people in the exact same way or experience things as he did before. Assuring him that he will love her again feels foolish. It's SAD... but even if this wasn't a slash story, I could predict him falling for someone else. Excited for the angst though indo tire of Harry sometimes and how he hides his inner thoughts. Makes me want to smack him on the back of the head!
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on July 04, 2015
    oh...my...freakin...gosh... Harry turned into a jerk didn't he!?

    Something obviously happened to Rob to make Harry do a 180 personality wise. Ended badly? He died? Something to do with making Harry bitter and maybe bitter against his fans and those who want him to be a hero? So he was either actively blackmailing people or if the names only appear once he was taking advantage of people letting them pay him off for keeping quiet about their issues. Did he get a screw you attitude because he decided to follow what everyone wanted from him? A good little auror who marries his childhood sweetheart?

    I'm very curious about what he paid Draco to make for him. Maybe something to change his life because he hated it? Arrggg!!!! This is good. I like being surprised and guessing :)

    Anyway, Draco's shocked reaction to Harry is interesting too. I don't think Harry is comfortable with how anyone is reacting and treating him which leads me to think that it's not natural for him (well duh I know now it isn't) but maybe he was pretty fake in his current relationships... being who people wanted and expected... so it's feeling weird to him now. Man I just keep guessing things in my head lol. Draco may like Harry acting like his old self and Harry may like that Draco is the only one that feels right in his interactions because it's just like old times. I look forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - starr on July 04, 2015
    what was Harry into with Draco's name in the book !!!!!! dark magic ???? OMG please update soon so I can find this out !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!so good
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 01, 2015
    about #2,,,

    X__X You know, for a brief second, I wanted to put a finger down my throat & vomit.
    I need Draco to save me from such sappiness with the redhead.
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