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Reviews for The Zabini Cover

By : Sablesilverrain
  • From ANON - PissedOffFollower on July 19, 2015
    Um... you can't just leave that kind of cliff hanger, it's cruel. Inhumane. PLEEEEEEEEASE update soon. I'll bake you cookies. I'll do your laundry! I'll give you a massage! ANYTHING JUST UPDATE!!!!

    (Also, Awesome Story! ;))
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  • From ANON - IloveHGDM on July 18, 2015
    I started reading this story a few chapters back simply out of boredom and curiosity since I normally don't like fem Harry, but you hooked me with this one! Yes the characters are ooc and Harry trusts pansy with no reasoning and she keeps his secret with no reasoning, but if we follow the world you've created (borrowing from j.k.) then it works. I really hope Draco gets over his hissy fit soon, as Zabini's mother points out, this makes them perfect for each other!
    I am surprised you didn't have an exploratory scene with Harry, unless you intend for Draco to introduce him to those aspects.
    This story should go on for many many many chapters with lots of sexual exploration and deliciousness. I see from the warnings that you have plans to go beyond the inevitable reconciliation. Good.
    Great start! Update soon! I'm hooked now!
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  • From ANON - Jami_Lee on July 17, 2015
    *glares at you,hugs Harry* Poor Harry. Love the chapter!!
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on July 17, 2015
    I'm very glad that Draco knows but I can't help but hope that Harry leaves Hogwarts. Not only did Harry keep the truth from Draco but so did his friends and he will find out more about what's real if he talks to them but I think Harry being there will allow him to keep to his anger more because Harry will still be living a lie. Harry needs to take responsibility and take his life back as himself and stop hiding. Draco deserves that too.
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  • From ANON - starr on July 17, 2015
    OMG you take it all back no no no they have to be together !!!!!! OMG poor Harry now with no one and Draco well he has to get over it...it's not that Harry can fix it !!!!!!!!!! please update soon need to see what is up next !!!! thanks for the update !!!!!
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  • From djaddict on July 14, 2015
    I am screaming and hiding behind the couch in anticipation of the reveal. Talk about stress!

    I normally don't really enjoy fem Harry but this is a good read
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  • From ANON - starr on July 14, 2015
    ok they are working together on this, let's see what happens next ...loved it and thanks for the update !!!!!
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  • From Kittykat575 on July 10, 2015
    Awesome
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  • From ANON - starr on July 09, 2015
    I just can't stop thinking that Draco is going to have a great fit when he finds out the thats Harry and Harry will be crushed !!!!! thanks for the update and please update soon !!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - starr on July 05, 2015
    Snape is to smart for his good !!!! can't believe that he knows it's Harry....wow Draco really liked or loved Harry with the pic of him ...hope it all goes well for those two !!!! Thanks for the update !!!!!! see you soon :):)
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  • From ANON - Guest on July 05, 2015
    This is so fantastic! I think this is one of my new favorite HP fanfics of all time. Great work and I can't wait to see how this continues. Eek!
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  • From ANON - starr on July 04, 2015
    this story is getting more interesting with each update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE SOON YES !!!! :):):)
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on July 03, 2015
    My favorite line this chapter... 'Because you
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  • From ANON - tilt on July 03, 2015
    I like your writing style and the idea of Harry turning into a female for 5 days a month. But I have also some issues with your story.
    - Your characters are ooc, especially Draco and Harry. Hopefully the snark comes back when Draco discovers Celestes secret!
    - Harry accepts this new body to smoothly, there is no real freaking out on his part, no mention of him trying to get to know this new body, to see how it 'ticks', how different it is from his male body. I'm sure there are many readers who would appreciate a scene where he does some exploring...
    - He is a suspicously convincing girl from the start, without any training. In both bodies. Of course that could also be a hint to another secret still to be discovered.
    - The dress in first chapter is WAY to short, I dare say in (at least British) poorblood society they would look upon someone dressed like that as a harlot. Just think about the movies: grown women didn't even show their ankles and the schoolgirls' skirts ended at the knees and underneeth they wore stockings so no skin was visible. Then again, we are talking about Zabinis mother, who has a somewhat questionable reputation herself...
    - I don't understand why Harry would tell Pansy and Milicent but still keep Draco in the dark. He should at least have taken a vow from them to keep his secret. (To me, the shared bathroom is not a strong enough reason in a magical world and his threat, well, what good would killing them do him, when his secret was already revealed?)

    But I'm really curious how things play out. Is Snape suspicous already? How will Harrys/Celestes first encounter with Ron and Hermione go? Will Celeste get molested by Milicent? And what will happen when the real Celeste realizes that American wizards are just too rude to here liking and decides to follow her original plan, going to her aunt and cousin and finishing her education in Hogwarts?! Well, okay, the last one will probalby not happen. ;)
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on July 01, 2015
    I reeeeeally like this :)
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