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  • From ANON - Anon on September 27, 2015
    Chapter 3

    "How else would you have got the means to get up the duff?"

    What does this mean?
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 27, 2015
    If Teddy is only 8 how is Snape teaching him potions?

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  • From ANON - Anon on September 08, 2015
    How could the first two Aurors not know the first two murders were connected, not to mention three of the same kind? Obviously they need more training or to find a new job. I just started reading and I'm interested to see what happens.
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  • From djaddict on August 30, 2015
    Enjoyed the story, thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - starr on August 23, 2015
    so glad that Draco heard his sons cry if to he would have killed that bitch then have gone to jail for it !!!!!! yes need to know why she has done all of that !!!!! Thanks for the update !!!!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 23, 2015
    about #6...

    The next month passed by without any uproar
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  • From ANON - Tweedleedee on August 23, 2015
    Harry and Draco's son is born on the same day I was! What an honour. For him of course... I love all your stories. How do you make love you, and them, so much?
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  • From djaddict on August 16, 2015
    Ya think, Harry? Argh! I was screaming at him to stop the whole scene. Lol
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  • From ANON - starr on August 16, 2015
    did Harry really go out there !!! did he forget that there is a nut killing prey's men out there!!!!! leaving the wards of his house he lost his marbles correct !!!!!! so glad that he got back in his wards if not he and the baby would be dead now...oh boy Draco is going to be imposable to live with now and Harry deceives it..Thanks for the update can't wait to see more !!!!!! :):):
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  • From ANON - starr on August 10, 2015
    wow the birthday sex was hot !!!! but now they know it;s a woman killer and blond...it can't be Luna !!!! NONONONONNONO or was Pancy blond don't remember 1!!! Thanks for the update...now i"ll go nuts trying to find out who it is !!! ):):):):)):
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 05, 2015
    about #3...

    Nice intense moments you had there. I also like the fact you allowed Draco to
    show intense feelings on how he COULD have felt realistically about Harry's predicament
    with a killer on the loose, especially when it was baffling on how it happened in the first
    place.

    Tho' I have my theories on how the killer could have been someone the victims knew, they would
    have to be some type of employee. The sort you would trust.

    I don't know if you have the story already written, but I hope it's a girl. :-)
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  • From ANON - misssy on August 02, 2015
    how is that boy not grounded and working off the potion he stole. sneaking stolen potions to someone is dangerous.
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  • From ANON - AnonymousTigress on August 02, 2015
    OOooh. Trying to burn down the murder scene. Hmm...I wonder if the person is someone we already knew like Pansy or something. I'll be keeping an eye on this one.
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  • From ANON - starr on August 02, 2015
    Nice to see Snape the same as always !!!!! poor Teddy I thought Draco was going to kill him, but he didn't know and just wanted uncle Harry to have his wish of having a child... hope like Harry thinks that he still has luck on his side for all this !!!!! thanks for the update !!!!!! see you soon :):):)
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 26, 2015
    about #2..

    Well it had me ????, when did they have time? My time lapse powers are acting screwy.
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