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Reviews for Before You

By : VSBree
  • From ANON - starr on August 07, 2015
    OMG you started it and then stopped !!!!!! WHY ????? good god hope you'll update soon will go nuts waiting !!!!! Thanks for the update !!!! I'll be waiting :):):):)
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  • From djaddict on August 07, 2015
    That rhythmic thudding? That is me banging my head on the desk. Sigh.
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  • From ANON - starr on August 06, 2015
    OMG they are so cute together ~!!!!!!! poor Draco all night looking for Harry cause he was worried !!!!! Thanks for the update's !!!!!!! :):) Well Harry's friend is out of the picture now ....
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  • From ANON - jabsher on August 06, 2015
    If you keep writing this story and continue with the quick updates you can have as many treats as you like :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2015
    Um..what?! Did you seriously just update again? I love you and I love this story...and that was quite possibly the cutest thing I have ever read. They're finally together!! Thanks so much for the quick update. I hope you can update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2015
    I just found this story and I absolutely love it!! Your characters come off as so real and genuine. Jealous Draco is so adorably wicked. That last chapter really got me though...poor Harry!! I really thought by the title they were going to kiss. Hope you can update soon!!
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on August 05, 2015
    That was hilarious how Draco warned Harry that Dakin had ulterior motives just like Dakin had warned him about Draco. He thinks they are both wrong... and they are both right! Our wonderful oblivious Harry... I just love him like that. It makes sense that he is a virgin since he left right after the war ended and has just been content to float along. Who knows... Dakin might have intimidated others who might have been interested without Harry ever even realizing it. That kiss when he was asleep was just so sweet. And I really like how Harry is just super aware of Draco... and his body lol.
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  • From ANON - starr on August 05, 2015
    so funny to see them acting as they are 5 year olds !!!!!!! the waiting for the next will be bad what's going to happen now !!!! love this :):)
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on August 04, 2015
    oh... Draco is really going to be kicking himself now. It must have been like a punch to the gut when Harry said that was so Malfoy of him and I'm sure he didn't think much about making the threat to Dakin because he would see him as a rival but now he had to hear that Harry CARES about Dakin. Serves him right for not being honest lol. Even though we don't hear what Draco is thinking it's so apparent in his actions like when he sincerely apologized to Harry. I quite like this story.
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on August 04, 2015
    Just finished chapter 3 and see that chapter 4 is up yeah!!! Three showers a day? Really Harry? Could you be more oblivious? Seriously though it's rather cute how Harry doesn't realize that Draco might like him. Did Draco really come there for the book? Did he make up that reason to have an excuse to stick around? He definitely used it to invite himself to stay with Harry and he's probably kicking himself for using blackmail but it probably was spur of the moment and he fell back on his Slytherin upbringing. I suspect that the few days away is to maybe arrange for an extended stay with Harry, set things up in case he can get Harry to return with him, or even to find a way to delay finding the book? Hmmm.... many possibilities.

    And Dakin! I do believe Dakin may be in love with Harry or at least had liked him for a very long time but probably didn't think he had a chance so didn't want to lose their friendship and lose the ability to be around Harry by making things awkward. Most likely because Harry showed absolutely no interest in anyone. It must be frustrating for him to see Harry showing interest in another male... like he should have taken a chance before now.
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  • From ANON - mnfm on August 04, 2015
    Very, very good! Please update soon!

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  • From ANON - mnfm on August 04, 2015
    Very, very good! Please update soon!

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  • From ANON - starr on August 04, 2015
    Does Dakin like Harry, i thought he liked women !!!!! ok so Harry is starting to like Draco but man Draco again is acting like a prick !!!! and why prat tell does he need that book so much !!!!! Thanks for the update !!!!!! yes I like this keep them coming :):):)
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  • From ANON - Li Gold on August 04, 2015
    I truly enjoy and appreciate your writing style! Take your time with the fluff... The story development is too good to be over too quickly! Please keep the updates coming!
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  • From ANON - starr on August 04, 2015
    Wow Draco so fast to admit that he is gay and he's already at it with Harry's friend...as far a good read ...BTW very surprise to see an update already !!!!!!
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