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Reviews for Falling Inside the Black

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  • From ANON - Elizabeth on August 27, 2015
    Well I have to say that this is starting to be one of the most amazing stories I've read in years concerning HP.. I love you're Harry and his perspective on the events of his life, especially his school years. Why has no one else touched on the crazy shit that is allowed to happen to an eleven year old ? Anyways, please write more soon, its lovely.
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  • From Tesgura on August 23, 2015
    Oh my god I am loving this story! Harry's interaction between Malfoy and Seamus is hysterical! As are Ron's reactions. Hermione I'm still on the fence about, but I can't wait to see if Harry continues using his body to get what he wants. I wonder if he even realizes what he's doing is technically seduction? Wonderful writing, can't wait to read more!
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  • From djaddict on August 23, 2015
    This is an interesting story, wish Ron would disappear though. Lol
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  • From LadyFreak on August 23, 2015
    I am loving this version of Harry and the dynamics with Draco. Please keep on with it!
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  • From ANON - starr on August 23, 2015
    Likeing this better and better with every passing chapter !!!!!!!! did I say it already that Ron is an ass , so is Hermione !!!!!!!!!
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  • From AFFModerator on August 16, 2015

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  • From ANON - Easyreader on August 14, 2015
    Really interesting first 2 chapters will be following this one closely. BTW love how Ron is so dog in the manger with Harry.
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  • From ANON - Asra Meredith on August 11, 2015
    I love where this is going so far! I adore stories about Harry discovering his more slytherin side and the best part is watching everyone else react. Can't wait for more!
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  • From CDGaymer on August 11, 2015
    Interesting start. it good so far
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  • From Tesgura on August 11, 2015
    Oh my god! Seamus is hitting on Harry and Ron is a total douche! This a such a new concept and I love it! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From djaddict on August 11, 2015
    Can't wait for more of this. Really different take on Harry. Hope he puts Ron in his place soon.
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  • From ANON - Kerry on August 11, 2015
    Beep
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  • From ANON - starr on August 11, 2015
    Don't know where your taking this but I love it, maybe Harry will wake up and see that Ron is an asshole !!!!!!!! so is Hermione with how she acts that she is beyyer than bread itself !!!!! good read can't wait for more !!!!!! Harry is strong so he has to show it ok !!!!!
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  • From AchillesTheGeek on August 11, 2015
    Really good. Glad to see Harry waking up!
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  • From lordamnesia on August 11, 2015
    This is a very very interesting start, we get to see a Harry coming out of the fog situation. Keep up the fantastic work!
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