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By : Fallen_Delilah
  • From rigger42 on November 04, 2015
    Thats very cool. Now I'm kind of hoping you pair him with the twins if he can't have any of the triplets. LOL. So, is "Harry" actually four years younger than everyone else in his year?
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  • From Jan on September 20, 2015
    Sorry, I'll have to say that no this chart doesn't help, if anything it confused me more then the actual stored did, and here is why:

    Sep 1990, Meets Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, Severus Snape & Lily Evans; Potions and spells start

    Oct 1994, Potions begin to work

    Mar 1996, Marries Lily Evans (if James was 17 when they got marry, which means that they got marry right after graduating (which makes it sometime in June, and seeing how he was born sometime in spring(which is sometime in March/April), so how can Harry be born right after they get marry (since it takes 40 weeks of pregnancy first before the child can be welcomed into the world, that means that Harry should of been born by late February- beginning of March.) unless Lily was already pregnant when they got marry?

    Sep 1996, Harry James Potter born (this make no sense to me as explained previously he should be a 1997 baby)

    Jan 1998, Harry dies (???????) here is something that I copy & paste from your story: "Harry was only four months old when his heart suddenly gave up in his sleep") this shows that Harry died 2 years after he was burned, (or is that a year after?😋 if he was truly born in 97') how is that possible?))

    Jul 1998, "Kidnapped" from Godric's Hollow

    May 1999, Bonds with Orion Black

    Dec 1999, Discovers pregnancy

    May 2000, Vasya Caelum Potter-Black born

    Feb 2001, Dies from curse

    Please update chapter 8 soon.

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  • From BAFan on September 17, 2015
    Ch. 7

    Well! You're certainly turning Canon on its head! That answers my question about the gray eyes. Very intriguing.

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  • From BAFan on September 17, 2015
    Ch. 6

    "'It was funny, Harry,' R
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  • From ANON - starr on September 16, 2015
    wow so harry is not harry and orion is his other father and his godfather is the dark lord !!!!!! did i get that correct shit !!!!!
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  • From ANON - autumngold on September 16, 2015
    Excellent new chapter! I am so glad that Harry (sorry I forgot his real name) is finally learning the truth. Hopefully he will be able to keep his knowledge from Dumbledore. At least now he knows that any misinformation about a prophecy or it being his duty to kill Voldemort is false. Incredible update! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - autumngold on September 13, 2015
    Excellent updates! I can't wait for Harry to talk to his father, hopefully then he will learn the truth about Dumbledore and what he has done. Thank you for having the triplets take such good care of Harry. Wonderful new chapters! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - starr on September 13, 2015
    So good I can't wait for the next update!!!!! HURRY !!!!!!!!!
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  • From CDGaymer on September 13, 2015
    awww man another cliffie, and i still dont know what james will say (pout). otherwise good chapter.
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  • From ANON - rebekahalana on September 12, 2015
    I am positively hooked on this story! I'm finding the triplets fascinating & loved how much Harry's character has developed by association. I checked out the spinoff of Sev & Lucius at the ball ... wonder how Draco will feel when he realzes he dated his father's soulmate ? :D looking forward to the next update . Are you posting on any other sites ? I would love to check out any other fics you may have written.
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  • From ANON - starr on September 08, 2015
    OMG this is so good, don't know why I haven't read it but now that I have MORE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update soon what will Harry's father have to say to him, hope it's the truth with Dubbledork !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From CDGaymer on September 08, 2015
    grrr. nice cliffy, now i want to know what james says to his son. good chapter none the less
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  • From Jan on September 08, 2015
    Lol,you ain't joking when you say cliffhanger, I can't wait for chapter 6 and find out what Harry's dad has to say to him ^_^
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  • From Jan on September 07, 2015
    Looks like Rel is Severus mate, and R
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  • From CDGaymer on September 07, 2015
    very good story
    I have a suggestion thought, you should make all the interludes in a different story so it dont ruin the flow of the main story (something like how StarLight_Massacre does with his/hers The Rise of the Drackens and The Rise of the Drackens: The Scaled Bits). Mind you that's just a suggestion.
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