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Reviews for Fading Scars

By : silmelinde
  • From morningstorm70 on April 08, 2018

    Are you going to continue? I'm going to save the page and check occasionally to see if you update i hope you do


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  • From nocturna on January 14, 2017

    Hi silmelinda, I couldn't help but notice you seem to have taken down your LotR stories. I hope everything is ok. I really enjoyed your stories, so I'll miss them! eternalorigin@gmail.com


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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on September 06, 2016

    You aren't leaving this lovely story I hope.  Love the pairing and especially can't wait for you to get to the part of Severus being pregnant.  What fun that will be!!  I'll be waiting anxiously.


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  • From ANON - on July 02, 2016

    This hasn't been updated in quite a while :(   Has this by chance been dropped?

     

    I really hope not!


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  • From ANON - Delia Cerrano on December 18, 2015
    Enjoying the story so far. Hoping it's going to continue according to the preview paragraph. You will be finishing this story won't you please as it is way to good to leave it like that.
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  • From ANON - StarFlower on December 12, 2015
    I really enjoy this story. I like watching the relationship between Harry and Snape change. I really hope you keep writing it. Thank you for sharing your stories with the rest of us.
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  • From BAFan on November 14, 2015
    Ch. 1

    "The young wizard almost grinned at getting a doze of an equal treatment, when a bulky oath gave him a hefty shove. . . ."

    Did you mean "oaf"? An oath is either a vow or a cuss word. Harry could have muttered an oath when the oaf pushed him.

    "The pair of girls, one beseeched by the bright purple hair. . . ."

    Uh, not sure what you mean here, but I'm pretty sure it isn't "beseeched," which means implored or begged.

    "The door to the Potion Master's shop was presentably neat and laconic. . . ."

    Unless the door can talk, it can't be laconic, which means to say something using few words.

    "Well aware of the ill-wishers who had no clams about destroying all he valued. . . ."

    I believe you meant "qualms," not clams.

    I'm sorry, but I don't think I'll continue reading this. There are just too many mistakes, which are driving me crazy. It's too bad, because it seems like an interesting story. I strongly suggest you look for a beta reader.


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  • From ANON - Delia Cerrano on November 11, 2015
    Too good not to finish!! I'll forever wonder what could have been if you don't complete it. I love that couple and you've made me wonder what would/could happen next..
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  • From Jan on November 07, 2015
    Please update chapter 5 soon.
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  • From PiffyEQ on November 05, 2015
    I can't wait to read more. I'm so happy Sev is going to be the pregnant one in this story. I love bottom!Sev & mpreg :)
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  • From ANON - starr on November 01, 2015
    yep just like Snape poor Harry it's going to be like trying to catch a rabbit ...so the hunt has started !!!! thanks for the update !!!!
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  • From Ciara_D on November 01, 2015
    Enjoying the story!
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  • From on October 19, 2015
    Loving it!! What did Harry mean "practise for carrying his bride..."? Say it isn't true. I hope Harry is really really rich just working to feel useful. I like him best wealthy but modest & using it mostly for helping. Love to have him spoil Severus. They both had horrible childhoods or rather non-childhoods.
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  • From ANON - starr on October 16, 2015
    good god Harry os not going to get to say one word without Snape running off !!!!!!!! good one Thanks for the update !!!!
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  • From ANON - sara101 on October 08, 2015
    More more more lol, I'm so glad that I read this. It's so sad that no one seems to write any good Harry and Snape fanfics or they take months to update. I love this story and can't wait to see how their relationship plays out. ^.^
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