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By : BlackDawnRose
  • From Jan on October 22, 2015
    Poor Neville, of course he hadn't noticed Harry in that light before, what with being with Dean and all, then with having caught him cheating on him, and him being in pain of course he hadn't notice that he had been more then interested in Harry until now, lol(so cute) please update chapter 5 soon.

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  • From ANON - Anon on October 21, 2015
    I really am enjoying this

    Sev
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  • From AFFModerator on October 12, 2015

    Please correct your disclaimer.


    Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. You must use the actual name of the fandom. Just naming the owners/creators of the fandom, or saying that you don't own only the characters is not enough.


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  • From ANON - elle on October 11, 2015
    I really like this story. It's an intriguing AU. I hope you keep it up. The interaction between Draco and Neville is fun
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  • From ANON - bill560682 on October 10, 2015
    as to the question someone else asked about harry being a wimp and scared is going back to his upbringing. he was raised by his mother who protected him from everyone and everything he never had to learn to stand up for himself.this harry was thrown into the big bad world after a whole life of being protected 24/7 by his mother and here he has no protector. this harry never had to turn to get bad grades no matter how smart you are to prevent beating. this harry never had to turn how to out smart dudley and his gang in games of harry hunting. cannon harry learned at a very early age no one is going to be there to protect you all the time but yourself.
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  • From Jan on October 09, 2015
    Wow, an amazing start, I'm absolutely captivated by this story, I can't wait for chapter 3 and more 😁
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  • From Severus1snape on October 09, 2015
    I like it a lot
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  • From ANON - starr on October 09, 2015
    nice but I really don't like to see harry like that , so shy and timid....
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