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Reviews for Getting Personal

By : OracleObscured
  • From Trelweny on December 10, 2015
    Blessed High Ones! They certainly were busy! And yet... it was sweet too. Kudos.

    I wonder when they'll find out the other has no intention of ever ending this odd but perfect relationship?

    Thanks so much for writing!
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  • From Midnight_Fairy on December 08, 2015
    I loved the ending of this chapter! Severus is really starting to open up.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 07, 2015
    I cannot express how happy this story makes me. I've said it before but you have such a good grasp on a D/s relationship and you bring it to life through Snape and Hermione in a way that other authors don't manage.

    The last two chapters were ridiculously hot but now that I've sat down to review in depth, I can't remember exactly what happens. I will have to read again - oh no, what a tragedy, how will I cope? ;)

    Keep up the fantastic writing. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Severus1snape on December 05, 2015
    Normally I prefer Slash fics the most, but this, this is simply too sexy, hot and intriguing to pass up on!

    How may chapters are you planning on?
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  • From goldhorse on December 03, 2015
    I normally can't review because I'm on my phone but I've finally gotten my trusty laptop back and decided to do it. This story has so many layers, aside from the D/s relationship and the zesty lemons. I like how you've handled their issues, working through them one at a time. Well done.
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  • From Remarkable on December 01, 2015
    This is a really, really good story. So many D/s stories are not in-depth and exploring the many, many facets of such a relationship. Do you mind me asking if you have personal experience or knowledge about it? Because this is entirely a real scenario, where two people get together, get to know each other intimately very quickly and just sort of .... hit it off. I am hoping that Hermione's inner damage isn't too great for them to overcome, and more so, that Severus' inner damage (that he deserves what he gets) especially doesn't knock them down. I HOPE you explore Severus' pain at least to some extent. It will and should crop up during their dealings, and Hermione will need to be there for him. If it's not in there, understandable, but i don't see how any story can move forward without at least one event from Severus' past tripping him up. If he's going to truly change, he will need to confront this last, horrible demon. Great job so far! Very good sexy times!
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  • From ANON - Kathy on November 27, 2015
    I have never liked spanking stories. But you do have a way with words. It's nice to see hermione human and dealing with guilt and grief after so much tragedy. What do you have in store next?
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  • From Trelweny on November 26, 2015
    That was so sweet. Which feels weird to say after the sadness with Barnabus.

    Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - Dmeb on November 26, 2015
    'Peeves coated all my cauldrons in ink (he said they weren't black enough)' had me laughing, and that is one of the good things about your fic - you are never too intense, for all the depth there are plenty of lighter moments. Lovely chapter, although I was a little sad for poor Barnabus
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  • From Severus1snape on November 26, 2015
    I love their letters, and McGonagall is nosy hahah
    will anyone find out soon?
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  • From ANON - BellaPrincipessa on November 22, 2015
    Forgot to add, if you ever want a beta or just someone to talk endlessly about HP fic, I'm happy to help. You're welcome to email me at searchingelle @ gmail . com [remove spaces].
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  • From ANON - iloveHGDM on November 22, 2015
    Best story I've read in AGES!!!!! looking forward to following it till the end!!!
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  • From Severus1snape on November 21, 2015
    I am in love with this
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  • From ANON - BellaPrincipessa on November 21, 2015
    I love your take on Severus. You've nailed how I think he probably would be - emotionally distant and perhaps even emotionally stunted in some ways, afraid to get too close to someone, perhaps even using sexual dominance as a way to keep someone from getting too close. I loved his thought process as they were kissing on the sofa. I could definitely see Hermione becoming OCD in an AU where the epilogue doesn't exist and she's not shackled to Ron.
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  • From ANON - BellaPrincipessa on November 21, 2015
    Interesting juxtaposition with the house elf story and Severus/Hermione, contrasting a truly abusive relationship in which the victim is unwilling to admit to the severity of the abuse and rejects help and a consensual BDSM relationship where the submissive knows she can safe-word out of a scene if she's pushed too hard. Granted, there hasn't been an explicit scene here in which they talk about Hermione being able to use a safe word and stop, but as she's a more experienced adult in this story, I assume she knows that.
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