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Reviews for Getting Personal

By : OracleObscured
  • From ANON - irish_angel on November 20, 2015
    This is quite good. I can't wait to read more. I really like that she knows what she wants (at least on some level) and what she's getting herself into. I really can't wait to see what happens over the next few weeks. Especially as her friends may find out.
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  • From ANON - lunarose on November 19, 2015
    I'm really loving this story and how complex your characters are. I especially enjoy the neurosis you have Hermione display. It feels very realistic for how she was portrayed in the books.
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  • From tigerrose110203 on November 17, 2015
    Oh my goodness! This is, by far, one of the better erotic stories i've read so far. I love how well your describing everything. The story's flow is wonderful. Really great job. I'm very much ooking forward to more chapters. :)
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  • From ANON - BellaPrincipessa on November 15, 2015
    Wow. So much in this chapter! I loved their reaction to discovering each others' identity. The parts with Hermione expressing survivor guilt were hard to read, but still powerful. I was worried her emotional state and the war talk would ruin the overall sexiness of their interaction, but the sex was incredibly hot. The dynamic here is really interesting to me because she's so much older than she was in TMG. I struggled in a few places with TMG because there were a few issues where consent felt a little bit dubious, so I like that she's older here and has had some life experience and is more knowledgeable about what she wants and hopefully a little more comfortable speaking up. FTR, I have nothing against dub-con or even non-con in a story when a character is portrayed as dark, but there were a few places in TMG where I was a little uncomfortable. Anyway, I loved this chapter and the progression in their relationship. I look forward to reading more and seeing what comes next for them!
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  • From ANON - BellaPrincipessa on November 15, 2015
    I don't normally like chapters where the entire text is correspondence between characters, but you've done a wonderful job with this one. I read it thinking that they'd certainly be shocked when the realized the identity of the other person. In response to your A/N - noooooo, I don't see Lucius as submissive at all. To me he's just inherently dominant in a way Draco is not, although I could see him as a total hedonist who is willing to try almost anything and who has pretty kinky tastes. I loved the Severus/Hermione/Draco relationship in Teaching Miss Granger, and I loved that she interact with Lucius at Eros and that he spanked her and found her attractive. I was disappointed that he found out who she was so quickly and then never really interacted intimately with her again. I would love to see your take - maybe not in this story but in a future one if you're so inspired - in which Hermione is involved with Severus and Lucius both/together.
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  • From Chantal on November 13, 2015
    Love this story! This may be a naive question, but I'm wondering why he hasn't kissed her on the mouth; he's kissed her everywhere else. Surely, they can have that kind of intimacy? Looking forward to the where they go from here.
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  • From Trelweny on November 13, 2015
    ... I will never be able to look at the Superman symbol peeking through a dress shirt the same way Ever Again.

    Wonderful chapter.

    Thanks so much for writing.
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  • From ANON - Baskinam on November 12, 2015
    I love your stories! Write the hottest sex ever! Add into it that it is our favorite dark hero and wow! I love how you also do not just write porn you remember the emotional connection too, I think that is one of the reasons I like your writing so much. Now to go put fresh batteries in my vibrator!

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  • From ANON - LRB on November 12, 2015
    another amazing chapter! you really have a gift in creative writing. Im enjoying Snapes new found relaxed character, but I hope he can still cause some angst in later chappies perhaps, I do love a caustic Snape ! anyway really love this (again!) and big fat kudos from me xxxxxx
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  • From ANON - sheedy on November 10, 2015
    I absolutely love this fic. Please keep updating.
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  • From ANON - MyWitch on November 10, 2015
    Holy smokes. This is blazing hot!!! I'm not usually into spanking but your story is easing me into to it not unlike a certain Dom... Love it! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2015
    I am so pleased you're writing again.

    You have a real insight into D/s relationships and fantasies and the interaction that goes between a Dom and a sub. I find D/s SS/HG a really intriguing dynamic and very believable for the two characters.

    The anticipation in both chapters was excellent and I enjoyed reading their thoughts. I am looking forward to their next encounter.
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  • From ANON - LRB on November 05, 2015
    I really love this! massive kudos for structure and original plot, i did a happy dance when i saw you'd updated. great job! xxxx
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 05, 2015
    My god.
    I wanna meet him too....

    Severus1snape
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on November 05, 2015
    Yeah she was pirate booty! Litrally!! hurhur, so many pirate puns in one paragraph XD It does surprise me though that Sev is being so open to somebody he doesn't know at all. Hermione I get but Sev hasn't been in a relationship for a long time from what you say and yet he's okay with writing down his inner most desires like that? Isn't he scared that other person could use it against him? I mean just from a psychological perspective he is not really one to trust quickly and usually excepts a more pessimistic view of the world and the people in it...
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