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Reviews for The Art of Self-Fashioning

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - eh on January 16, 2016
    Will Harry continue to suffer from the lack of emotional relationships much longer in this? The way that all of the adults are willing to let this slide is making this hard to read.
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  • From ANON - Chester on January 08, 2016
    Really like the story - keep up the great work. Just out of curiosity. The way you describe Harry with his lack of interest and blank eyes sort of hints at him turning dark or getting to the point where he does use dark arts.
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  • From ANON - Kain on January 08, 2016
    it's a little late and i have some things too do, but i will have a review for this chapter and the previous one hopefully tomorrow evening.

    but in short?

    You actually got me to tear up a little in this one.
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  • From ANON - Kain on December 24, 2015
    -Aw Boot all emotional about Harry's gift and giving him a hug. Still sad seeing Harry getting constantly surprised and unfamiliar by the affection people have displayed towards him.


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  • From ANON - Eren on December 03, 2015
    I'm so glad you didn't make Harry suck or not care about flying. That was always a pet peeve of mine when fanfics would erase quidditch from his character. Harry Potter not being able to fly is an abomination lol.
    Really interesting so far and I'm glad this fic is being updated at a good pace. :)
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  • From ANON - Kain on November 27, 2015
    -Well I suppose Snape wouldn't be Snape if he wasn't an ass. Although considering the part he played in relaying info about the prophecy Tom, he should dial it down a notch.

    -Love seeing Minerva go all mama bear when it comes to her students.

    Ravenclaw Harry has no time or patience for Draco giving him shit and just shuts him down so artfully every time lol. Loved seeing the Ravenclaws ready to jump to his defense. He may not have ron or hermione in this verse but there are still people ready and willing to back him up, even if he doesn't fully reciprocate the feeling.

    And of course Snape is there ready to put a damper on a non slytherin's days.

    It's sad seeing how closed off from people Harry is and how unwilling he is to divulge anything to anyone or place trust in people even if they are kind to him. Although it also gives him a certain kind of strength and after the life he has had, he is less likely to take the bait of bullies.

    Harry's single mindedness on his parents might give him a lot of determination and will to succeed but it may also give him some bad tunnel vision.

    Oh that ending part was kind of sweet with Harry finally letting some people in and revealing a part of the reason for his standoffish nature and the others trying to get on first name basis even if Harry doesn't fully understand. Sometimes people just care with no strings attached.




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  • From ANON - Eren on November 26, 2015
    came to see if this was updated. So happy to see that it was.
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  • From ANON - Kain on November 13, 2015
    -This version of Harry is the last person you want to start shit with. Aside from all the crap he has had to endure from his own relatives, insulting his parents is not something one would recommend. This kid is driven and has a goal that he intends on reaching come hell or high water.

    -Malfoy might want too be more careful in the future since this Harry doesn't have, at least currently, Hermione and Ron to stop him from throwing down with Draco.

    -Wonder if Neville has a little more iron in his blood in this verse. Either way,Snape is going to be horrible to him it seems, perhaps even more so than originally. Kid's gonna have a very hard time if he doesn't find some of that Gryffindor courage.

    -Hopefully Harry realizes that it's not the house that defines a person but your own actions and simply being a Slytherin does not automatically make someone bad. Although given his first meeting with Draco, and how Snape will treat him, that perception is going to be even harder to change now. Felt sorry for Daphne with Seamus getting on her case before she is even sorted. But he was also being very nice towards Harry.

    -Curious to see how Harry develops and whether or not he plays any roles in the events that occur across the books and whether or not he keeps to his loner nature or makes a few friends.

    -waits patiently for the next chapter-
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  • From ANON - Chester258 on November 05, 2015
    I really am intrigued with this story. Really looking forward to reading more!!
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  • From ANON - Oryx on November 05, 2015
    I was a little hesitant on the first chapter but your second one has knocked it out of the park. I can't wait to see where you will go with this one. It's a refreshing twist on an old concept and I love the idea of a young Harry getting such a dangerous idea in his head. That's the kind of idea that can shape and even redefine someone. It's the kind of idea that changes all who come into contact with it. Your story has a powerful concept and I'm excited to find out if Harry ever manages what he is planning. Really, Really, Really good work!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - lusting_for_snape on October 31, 2015
    This looks like quite an interesting start. I give you many kudos in the fact that you actually depicted what a child raised like harry would think and feel. Closed off. Canon Harry is unrealistic in the extreme given how he was raised.

    Look forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Eren on October 31, 2015
    This looks like a really promosing story. I really like how you made us understand how Harry acts through the events of his early life. Keep it up :)
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  • From ANON - Kain on October 30, 2015
    Ravenclaw!Harry with Minerva looking out for him? This should be good. I take it in this verse Neville is the BWL? Can't wait for Harry to get away from the Dursleys and how his time at Hogwarts will differ. Will the trio still come into being and will he and Malfoy still be rivals?
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