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Reviews for The Quickening

By : Desert_Sea
  • From Fox on December 05, 2016

    ahh, so this is how you get them together :-) Very creative, very sexy, very yum.

    Fox xx


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  • From Fox on December 05, 2016

    Ohh Desert this is so sad. I do hope you'll find a way to save him. I have to say, this is most original plot, I've read so far.

    Fox xx


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  • From Fox on December 05, 2016

    You made me cry...

    Fox xx


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  • From Fox on December 05, 2016

    Chapter 7.

    Exciting -obviously, but scary...

    Fox xx


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  • From Fox on December 05, 2016

    Chapter 6.

    I feel sorry for Snape... poor thing didn't notice the difference between Old Hermione and Hermione The Survivor. Big mistake, huge ;-)

    Fox xx

     


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  • From Fox on December 05, 2016

    Chapter 5.

    I have only one thing to say: Can I pleeease have Snape, pleeeease!!! I want to be "plundered relentlessly throughout the night"...

    Fox xx


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  • From Fox on December 05, 2016

    Oh my, that was spectacular.

    I have a feeling that Hermione and Snape will be attacking each other for a while. 

    Fox xx 


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  • From Fox on December 05, 2016

    Ohh Desert! 

    Chapter 3.

    It's so exciting! Especially the bit on the ladder. You are unbelievable, your scenes are so full of different emotions, sometimes very funny, sometimes I go "OMG can't believe this just happened" ,  sometimes I cringe and the rest is steaming hot.

    Fox xx 


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  • From ANON - Erin on March 30, 2016
    You. Are. Amazing. This is so well written, so emotive, and so undeniably freaking hot. I will shamefully admit I had passed this fic over a couple of times just because I wasn't sure what I'd be getting myself into, but damn was that my loss - now corrected! You (and your stories by default) are a true gem, and I cannot wait to read more. Thank you thank you thank you :) Clicking "next" now....
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  • From Remarkable on March 28, 2016
    Took me awhile but I finally finished this. I am SO BAD at coming back to stories unless there's an alert. Anyway, fabulous, so well done I loved every second of it, especially the curses that Snape left on Malfoy's toys :D On to your next story. Very well done!
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  • From ANON - Robin on January 30, 2016
    Thanks for a great day of reading.
    I love how you worked on your story. The ones writing themselves sometimes need a higher degree of reigning, but you mastered it beautifully.
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  • From ANON - Wyld Dream on January 25, 2016
    "The Quickening", by Desert Sea is a delightful tale from beginning to end about the match of young Hermione Granger and potions Professor Severus Snape. This being Desert Sea
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  • From OracleObscured on January 21, 2016
    Well of course my curiosity got the better of me and I had to go look up tympany. My dictionary just said "another term for tympanites" (which just got me "swelling of the abdomen with gas or air"), so I had to do an online search where I found "A hollow drum-like sound that is produced when a gas-containing cavity is tapped sharply. Tympany is heard if the chest contains free air (pneumothorax) or the abdomen is distended with gas. Also known as tympanites." Then I went nuts and looked up the etymology (which led me to some interesting associations). All-in-all a good day for word searches. (Final verdict: tympany is a much grosser definition than tympani, and I have way too much information on collapsed lungs now.)
    Sorry it took me so long to write this. I read it yesterday and then went to sleep. Despite my record-breaking six and a half hours of slumber, I've been nodding off all day. I'm finally coherent enough to type.
    This ending was very sweet. And I think everybody likes a happy ending (or at least a satisfying one). I'll have to go back and read it all over again from the beginning now.

    Unless otherwise noted, all my favorites this time were chosen because they amused me.


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  • From ANON - LeWyKi on January 21, 2016
    There we are for a final time and I have to say, this is a very nice ending that made me smile :) To be honest though, the "albino ferret" is certainly not my creation. It is a term often used for Draco - seeing as "Moody" in fourth year made quite the example of him. That is actually why I wrote "the older ..." Nevermind, in this case it was still rather fitting ^^ So now I'm kind of sad, that this story is over, but I'm relying on you to soon create another tale. In the meantime im going to read up on the P&P-fanfic I've neglected for the last few weeks. Thanks again and happy - whatever else it is you do when not writing - reading/relaxing/...!
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  • From bitchandmoan on January 20, 2016
    Sorry it's been a while since I wrote, I was a little thrown off with the review function not working and then I got busy with school. I've enjoyed the last few chapters, though some more than others. I think the excitement faded a bit for me here towards the end.
    I really liked the strobe effect with the wand because you illustrated it so well that I could perfectly picture it. I wasn't really a fan of the introduction of Violetta but I did like seeing Severus's determination to save Hermione. And again, the projection scenes were my favorite. It was very clever the way Severus pretended it was a healing potion to fool Lucius. And the projection at graduation was very sweet.
    I love that Hermione gave Pomfrey the galvanismus. I was kind of hoping for something along those lines the whole time, for the curse to be used for good. And I feel quite smug at the way it turned out for Lucius, I really didn't like him.
    Finally, congratulations! You finished a great story that had me hooked. I'm sad to see it complete.
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