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From ANON - Sal05 on January 03, 2016
OMG! >,< do you understand how cool it to see that you replied to my lame review! I was literally Screaming like little fan girl at my phone lol. You have made my week thank you for and you Quicky updates. This story is like my new drug of Choice for 2016 thank you very much, i'm addicted now and I can only get my fix from you. Just have a lot of power now be gentle with us lol.

The story is awesome, keep up the great work again. Thank you again for this week's fix of your story. I just hope Ron doesn't get weird with her because she's getting all sexy now too, them being best friends and like a Brother to Hermione too. *keeping fingers crossed* >,
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From bitchandmoan on January 02, 2016
Chapter 20: You definitely answered my questions! And I finally get the unicorn reference! The magic he could feel against his hands was the curse in her skin! Very clever. When Hermione tries to tell Snape that she has the curse without letting anyone in on it, I was reminded of Harry trying to tell Snape that Sirius was in the Department of Mysteries in OotP. I just had to smile when Severus let Hermione order and drag him around his own living quarters. And how she kept getting distracted by his books, his bed, and his bathtub.
Chapter 21: I appreciate that Draco has a good sense of humor and isn't such a prat about people insulting him. Severus also seems calmer, though maybe it's the consistent sex.
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From ANON - LeWyKi on January 02, 2016
Lovely Chapter...and suddenly the big, bad, scary curse doesn't appear quite that bad - rather useful, even and a tiny bit mysterious :-)
A happy new year to you and I hope, you had a nice celebration with people you like. As always, I'm looking forward to every new chapter you like to grace us with and it is really great how you keep up the frequent chapters.
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From ANON - DawnEB on January 02, 2016
I am very tardy in reviewing a fic which has drawn me in, but I'm loving the plot/smut balance and writing. Some very nice ideas throughout, and I'm interested in how this new version of the curse/blessing is going to affect things, especially as it sounds like it doesn't effect the aging of the internal organs. I laughed at the boy look v girl look, then Severus' preening when he paid attention. I just wanted to add that seeing Hermione's reaction to book-lined walls always reminds me of this particular comic strip http://www. sinfest. net/view.php?date=2006-12-09 :D (I don't know about links, so remove the couple of spaces I added to view)
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From Severus1snape on January 02, 2016
That was fucking hot.
With this she could be an awsome Healer in the future.
You should write 200 chapters :D
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From ANON - Sal05 on January 02, 2016
I love this story! Keep it up, I'm hoping become the greatest healer of all time because of this. She like a super hero now lol, I've watching super hero shows lately ;p can't wait to see how the story wraps-up. Good luck!
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From OracleObscured on January 02, 2016
You just wrapped up a boat-load of story in that one chapter. How many more chapters are you planning?
I love the whole turn of events with the Galvanismus. Who needs expensive serum when you can just fuck your way to younger skin. Marvelous plot twist. See, I had no idea that was coming. Totally obscured.
And now I like the unicorn comparison even more.

My favorite non-sex scene this time was when she came to tell him about the curse in the middle of class. His reaction was perfect.
My first favorite line is from that scene. The rest were chosen for cleverness, amusement-factor, and description deliciousness.

Gods! She
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From bitchandmoan on December 31, 2015
You're very welcome for the kind words, I meant them. I apologize again for not reviewing for so long, I'll do better.
As always, the sex is fantastic. I loved the letter writing scene too, so sweet yet with a hint of snarky, rambling Severus. And then oh shit! Oh fuck! Did Hermione inherit the curse from Severus?? Or maybe it's changed and become something good? I'm hoping for just a curse that allows you to heal others rather than one that keeps you alive when you're dying and causes fugue states. I'll just have to wait and see.
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From Midnight_Fairy on December 30, 2015
Let me guess, she is pregnant! Keep writing.
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From ANON - LeWyKi on December 30, 2015
Hi, I just wanted to say that I have really enjoyed reading your story, so far. It is an interesting idea, to say the least and full of surprises. One thing I just notices, though: Hermione is taking her 7th year finals, as far as I understand and that would be the NEWTs, (Nastily Exhausting Wizarding Tests ...or something)the OWLs came at the end of 5th year. :-) Anyway, just wanted to say that and I look forward to every new chapter.

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From FieryPhoenix on December 30, 2015
And now?? Poor Hermione, happy day upset again by the darn curse!!
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From OracleObscured on December 30, 2015
You are so freakin fast. It's like Christmas keeps coming and coming, and I like chapter presents the best.

Love the homage. A good reaming gets me every time.

I, obviously, loved the sex this chapter (and the letter); but I liked the scene with Harry too. I can't wait to see what happens next. (If it were me, I'd need repeated bouts of pussy-licking to calm me down after such a shock.) (Mwhahahaha.)

There was a good dose of sweetness in this chapter, and I like how it contrasted with the urgency of the ending. Lull your readers into cozy cocoon and then slap them in the face with a smelly, wet fish of revelation. I like your style
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From bitchandmoan on December 28, 2015
First of all, I would like to apologize for the tardiness of this review since I started reading about two and a half weeks ago. Hopefully it will make you smile.
Secondly, I would like to compliment your beautiful writing. I imagine you are also a beautiful person. I can picture vividly every scene you set and every emotion that crosses the faces of your characters. I read a lot of Snape/Hermione and your pair is one of my favorites. It's very real. Hermione's trouble coping after the war and Severus's hidden enjoyment at making his students miserable are perfect. Then the curse, oh the curse. It is not only ingenious, it's something I've never heard or thought of before. I very much enjoyed the combination of muggle and magical medical explanations. Severus making up his own name for his condition and refusing to change it when the curse is discovered seems very suitable for our stubborn Severus.
Third, your character development. It's fantastic. Your Hermione goes through so much emotional turmoil but still stays true to her character. She's everything I want to be.
Last, when Hermione climbs on top of Severus and he wants to touch her but decides that it's about her, that she deserves to do things however she wants, I felt my heart sweat. It was a great feeling.
I cannot express in understandable sentences the rest of what I want to say, but all my praises go to you. You're a fabulous writer, so creative, and way better than me at keeping up with things.
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From FieryPhoenix on December 28, 2015
I'm having a terribly emotional day today and this made me cry so hard... I'm glad they found each other and I hope there's a happy ending for them. Everyone deserves love and joy in their love.
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From OracleObscured on December 28, 2015
Yeeeeees! Great chapter. You got a little bit of everything in there.

For some reason I really liked the opening scene with Hermione in the bathroom mentally preparing herself for battle. I'm not sure if I liked it because of the writing or the emotion. Probably both. I also liked the way they held hands before she started testing him. The sap in me likes hand-holding.
I don't know if it was wrong of me to love the stroking-interrogation scene, but I did. Not for the cruelty, but just for the descriptions of his cock.
When you said there was more sex to come, I didn't know you meant in this chapter. Hallelujah. I needed some Christmas smut (that I didn't write). Excellent descriptions, and I liked that she finally got to kiss him corporeally. So sweet.

Favorite lines this time:

"...broken sleep" I know this is really simple but I liked it.

"It seemed entirely inadequate but how else did one prepare to instigate a colossal shit storm?" I think I liked this for its blatant honesty.

"...trawl the depths of her malice..."

"...beautiful black orbs..." I know this is simple too, but it made me smile, so that means it gets mentioned.

"She closed her eyes against the pain of his openness" Beautifully honest.

"...rubbing them together like a surgeon scrubbing up. Wordlessly, she reached for his flaccid cock, gently rolling her oiled fingers over his silken sheath." I know this is two sentences, but they went together and I liked them both for the imagery.

"...shellacking his member in a glistening film that shone golden in the candlelight."

"...an alchemist turning his nuggets into gold." Okay, this made me laugh and applaud. Marvelous.

"She clung to him like a wet limpet."

"A real kiss for no other reason than they both wanted to
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