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Reviews for The Quickening

By : Desert_Sea
  • From ANON - vaila on December 11, 2015
    Great continuation!!! I hope it gets more and more interesting!
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  • From ANON - DinaTheCat on December 09, 2015
    Ohh. That makes more sense now. I love explanation chapters :)
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  • From FieryPhoenix on December 09, 2015
    Ooh gosh!! What a twist!!haha!! Can't wait to see how Hermione gets him freed! Will she have to admit to her own nasty behaviour??
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  • From ANON - Bella Principessa on December 09, 2015
    I'm pretty sure that 17 is considered a legal adult in the Wizarding world. So Snape could be held on a charge of rape, but not statutory rape, even without the time turner use. Interesting develops though with this story. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - vaila on December 09, 2015
    It is getting really really interesting!! I hope you update everyday...
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  • From ANON - vaila on December 09, 2015
    This story seems interesting! Update soon!
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  • From FieryPhoenix on December 08, 2015
    I just read your entire story. You carry the intensity of the characters and their actions really well.

    Chapter 8 made me cry; how on earth can they recover from this??

    Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Niclaire on December 08, 2015
    I love that elixir of yours. I wanted to ask about the mechanics, but you've explained them well enough, and I like the fact that she uses it for other things than raping teachers, and a good thing too, because I can't imagine anything worse than driving someone to suicide. They've both been assholes, but Hermione didstart it, and she had no problem doing it to him in public. I think this was your best chapter yet, and as always- can't wait for more.

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  • From Midnight_Fairy on December 07, 2015
    Your chapter was well written! As for your Severus in the story, something is very wrong with him. I didn't see him as someone who has so little respect for woman. This will have to have some negative effect on Hermione (it was practically rape). I wonder if she will threaten to go to McGonagall, as embarrassing as that would be, Hermione would still come out on top and Severus would have a lot to fear. So I wonder what really is going on, does the potion really work or are they both infected with the curse? Either way Severus is going to have to change his attitude and do some damage control. When you think about it he has been best by a 17/ 18 year old. (For the sake of the law, let's say she is 18).
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  • From ANON - Ash on December 06, 2015
    Omg this story is incredible, and your writing beyond amazing! I have to know what happens next! I've read a lot of fanfiction and I know this is something special.
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  • From ANON - Niclaire on December 05, 2015
    Why do I have a feeling this will be the end of them trying to one-up each other? Great chapter, can't wait for more.
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  • From Remarkable on December 04, 2015
    Wow. In one moment you have me rolling with the visual descriptions and devious machinations of these characters, and in the next horrified for both of them. felt especially sorry for Poppy. After everything she's helped him through, and he almost hurt her - I cannot say the Hermione deserves what she gets, but it's one thing to do something in private and another to humiliate him in front of everyone. I'm a little confused - Snape doesn't remember what he's doing after the fact? Or is it like a conscious transition when the quickening abates, and he remembers, but it's like a compulsion that was over him, before? Very, very hot but also insidious. Looking forward to updates, you've got me on the edge of my seat!
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  • From Midnight_Fairy on December 03, 2015
    Wow, great chapter! Please eep writing and update soon!
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  • From DinaTheCat on December 01, 2015
    HA! I knew I recognised those ribbons!!!
    Love the story :D
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  • From ANON - Bournespeed on December 01, 2015
    Oh that was nasty, naughty Hermione. Let's hope Snape forgives her and learns a little tenderness as well.
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