By chapter twenty-five, the sheer number of times you've used the word 'pussy' has kind of become a deterrent. I don't mind the word itself, but using such repetition is discordant with the rest of your writing style. which I really love. 
I love your turns of phrase, and especially love the way you've written Snape.

Indulgent. Decadent. Inspiring. Sensual. Expressive. I have to thank Obstacle Obscured for introducing me to you as an author. I've spent the last week or so reading every single one of your stories on my phone, draining the battery a minimum of twice a day. I enjoyed the naughtiness of this story. Great job.

Chapter 30.

Wonderful ending, perfectly rounded, all information related and I love their dialogue at the end. I wish men in real life were a more like that! 

I like how it hints at their loving and 'busy' future, but without all the descriptions of the wedding, and childbearing, and sleepless nights, and growing old together... Honestly thanks for that  ;-) As intelligent readers we can imagine everything else. 

The story left me feeling very uplifted and happy. 

Thank you for taking your first step into fanfiction, it was a very good decision. Your word-wielding skills are impressive, even your humorous bits are clever and mature and always matching the character. 

I've read many other fanfics, ranging from silly and childish to extraordinary and truly wonderful. Your stories belong to the latter category. You are among very few authors, I appreciate for more reasons, than the story itself. English is my second language and I learn a lot from you. 

I promise I will read your other stores too.

Thank you 

Fox xx 

Chapter 29.

Beautiful and very hot. Lovemaking-healing session. I want some too...  

I'm very curious about Lucius and his cursed toys... hahahaha 

And I'm glad the purple bitch, with psychotic clit is gone for good :-D

Satisfied Fox xx 

DS,

This chapter  (27) apart from a good fuck with an icky witch,  made me laugh a lot, especially things like cutty-throaty. I did laugh out loud. 

Will there be any more from Lucius  (The Sexy Devil)?  I really like Lucius, well, maybe not this one, but in general he is yummy, don't you think? 

Expectant Fox xx 

DS, 

This is quite a shocking turn of events...

Of course I've expected something sinister, but I think you've exceeded my expectations. 

This Violetta seems hideous and evil and sick. Poor Severus will have to fuck her to get Hermione back... yuck 

Poor Hermione.

Distressed Fox xx 

Chapter 24.

Levitating cristalline beads -that sounds beautiful. Actually the whole scene 'looks' wonderful, so multi-sensuous. I love it. 

And then 'sea anemone' -lovely

'Fucking Slytherin tribute' -brilliant and exactly what it was :)

Dreamy Fox xx

The book! Ohh, what a wonderful idea!!! And they will have to fuck a lot more... yum!

Excited Fox xx

Chapter 22.

Lucius (sexy devil) is plotting something. I simply know it, Lucius is not the one to leave things alone... and I don't think such a good writer as you, would introduce him for nothing. There is something disturbing coming our way...

Anxious Fox xx

Chapter 20.

Very hot, so hot, that I'm getting jealous.

And I'm glad to see I was right about the curse :-)  It's an interesting turn of events. I'm dying to see what's next and if people will notice the difference in their looks...

Curious Fox xx

Chapter 18. 

Little angsty at first, but I suppose a logical development and then sexy as hell.  Beautiful ending of the chapter  :)

Happy Fox xx 

Chapter 17.

That was lovely and heartwarming.  Little bit too much, perhaps?  I can only imagine it's not completely the end of the curse and problems, I  mean, what would you be writing about for further 13 chapters... 

Fox xx 

Ohh noo...This broke my heart... I known it was necessary, but I cried  (almost, I have to control myself in a class)

Hard work, I'm telling you. 

Fox xx 

Chapter 15.

Emotional and dark and very sad.

One thing I teach on every course is: Perfectionism doesn't make you perfect, it makes you miserable.  I think Hermione needs to come to my class... So it wasn't no-nonsense Hermione, it was just unhappy, damaged Hermione chasing unrealistic goal, in attempt to be accepted and to deserve love. 

Very sad, but Severus is there and hopefully it'll work out.

I'll read on.

Slightly depressed Fox xx 

DS, 

This story pulled me in completely in an instant. 

Last night I had to have a stern conversation with myself about going sleep at appropriate time (before 2am ) to be in a useful condition today and ready to teach :) It almost worked...

The story is in a great balance between funny, exciting and scary and good dialogues too. Can't wait to read the rest of it. I think I will finish it today. 

Fox xx