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Reviews for Akeno

By : haileybeth
  • From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2016
    I'm not sure if you were trying to use different words or spelled the ones you were trying to use wrong, but it you were you trying different words you used them wrong.

    partite for petite
    percale for parcel
    past for passed
    right full for rightful
    all ways for always
    after wards for afterwards

    You have a lot of other mistakes as well. I suggest reading what you wrote out loud that way you may hear your mistakes. Other than that, your story was a good. I enjoyed reading it.

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  • From ANON - Anon on December 10, 2015
    Interesting story, though the last chapter sounded like it didn't quite fit....it sounded like a different story, a good one, but not the same considering Draco was blind (not their son) and Harry & Draco weren't together...... I was very confused about what was going on......anyway if this is a different story then I would really like to read it sometime....
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