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Reviews for Three Kings in the Kingdom of Heaven

By : bloomsburry
  • From ANON - on July 02, 2016

    Boring?? Hell no! So freakin' hot and sexy and omg can't wait for more! 
    I hope that Draco ends up saving Hermione. I liked how you added him saying the nice things to her and can't imagine he didn't mean it. I also like the fact that you had both Malfoys tense at the knowledge that she was under a potion instead of reacting how she did naturally. 

    Oh! And I liked how Voldemort got jealous! I was waiting for him to have a more severe reaction towards Lucious (ie: Crucioing him while he was still inside her or something)

    So good! Keep it up! :)


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  • From acetwolf94 on April 08, 2016
    WOW! I THOUGHT THE FIRST CHAPTER WAS GOOD BUT DANG THAT ITS HOT!!!!!!!!
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  • From acetwolf94 on April 08, 2016
    WOW! If that was your first lemon, DANG! IT WAS AWESOME! I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - Eduardo on February 11, 2016
    Buen relato, Te felicito.
    Porfa no tardes en continuarlo
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  • From CullensDarlin on February 06, 2016
    WOW That story has the undefineable something else Totally hot
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  • From CU_Spacecowboy on February 06, 2016
    I think how much it went into about them kissing was the problem. It seemed like half the chapter was just them kissing, it was hmm ok thats nice but moving on now.
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  • From ANON - J on January 11, 2016
    Love this smut! Great description.
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  • From ANON - Eduardo on December 12, 2015
    Te felicito, gran historia
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  • From ANON - Jane on December 12, 2015
    Fantastic work!
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